TCG Fakes XY: Ascending Warriors: My Text-Based TCG Set!

Discussion in 'Creative Works' started by Luispipe8, Jul 30, 2014.

  1. woohoo962 Aspiring Trainer
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    Do Klinklang EX or the Seedot line next, please.
     


  2. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    Neither is in the set-list. :/ And given how few time I've had to update this, I really don't feel like doing promos. u.u I'll keep it in mind for a future set, though.

    Oh, and BTW, I didn't forgot about this, I just have almost no time on my side. I'll try to update at least a line next week.
     
  3. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    Ok, so after I finally got my business done(at least for now. :p), I'll go on and work on the Talonflame I promised Fletch. Expect it anytime today! Maybe as my 1000th post? :D
     
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  4. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    Finally I made an update!!!!! xD Here it is, Fletch!

    Basic/ Fletchling / HP50 [​IMG]

    [​IMG]

    NO. 661/Tiny Robin Pokémon/HT: 0.3m/WT: 1.7kg

    [​IMG] Quick Attack 10+
    Flip a coin. If heads, this attack does 20 more damage.

    Weakness:
    [​IMG] x2

    Resistance:
    [​IMG] -20

    Retreat:
    [​IMG]


    Despite the beauty of its lilting voice, it's merciless to intruders that enter its territory..

    80/101 [​IMG]
    Stage 1/ Fletchinder // HP70 [​IMG]
    [​IMG]Evolves from Fletchling

    [​IMG]

    NO. 662/Ember Pokémon/HT: 0.7m/WTt: 16.0kg

    [​IMG] Big Peck 20
    Discard all Pokémon Tool cards attached to each of your opponent's Pokémon.

    [​IMG][​IMG][​IMG] Flame Burst 50
    You may discard all [​IMG] Energy sttached to this Pokémon. If you do, this attack does 20 damage to 2 of your opponent's Benched Pokémon (Do not apply Weakness and Resistance to Benched Pokémon).

    Weakness:
    [​IMG] x2

    Resistance:
    [​IMG] -20

    Retreat:
    [​IMG]


    From its beak, it expels embers that set the tall grass on fire. Then it pounces on the bewildered prey that pop out of the grass.

    19/101 [​IMG]
    Stage 2/ Talonflame /// HP130 [​IMG]
    [​IMG]Evolves from Fletchinder

    [​IMG]

    NO. 663/Scorching Pokémon/HT: 1.2m/WT: 24.5kg

    [​IMG] Tailwind
    The attacks of each of your Pokémon that has a [​IMG] Weakness cost [​IMG] less. You can't apply more than 1 Tailwind Ability at a time.

    [​IMG][​IMG] Flaming Twister 80
    You may switch this Pokémon with one of your Benched Pokémon. If you do, your opponent switches his or her Active Pokémon with one of his or her Benched Pokémon and your opponent's new Active Pokémon is now Burned.

    Weakness:
    [​IMG] x2

    Resistance:
    [​IMG] -20

    Retreat:


    In the fever of an exciting battle, it showers embers from the gaps between its feathers and takes to the air.

    20/101 [​IMG]

    I wanted to use Tailwind as "your Pokémon that has a [​IMG] Resistance", but thrn I saw that it would include Ghosts, and that now only Flying-types are weak to Lightning, so I went with that instead. :D
     
  5. Auride Periodic Visitor
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    You forgot the "(Do not apply weakness and resistance for benched Pokemon)" part for Fletchinder.

    Tailwind should probably read "Each of your Pokemon that have a [L] weakness pay [C] to attack. You can't apply more than 1 Tailwind Ability at a time."

    And do note that [L] weakness DOES include some [W] Pokemon, such as Empoleon DEX and Samurott BLW. But as you noted, the trend in XY so far has been exclusively [G] weak water types, so it's not too concerning.

    And I believe the last clause in Flaming Twister's effect should be joined to the previous one with and ", and" to prevent confusion (Should it Burn your opponent's active Pokemon even if you do not choose to switch?).

    Besides that, these are some pretty creative fakes! Good job.
     
  6. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    Oh, right. Adding that. xD
    I took that text from Dimensional Valley's preliminary translation. I'd change it if I need to when the card is revealed in English.
    Yeah, since this is supposed to be a XY Set, I placed it like that.
    I guess you're right, I'll add that as well.
    Thanks! I'll hopefully make a couple Trainers next time, to see how that's done. :D

    Edit: It should be good now. ;)
     
  7. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    And I made some Items! Hope you like them! :D Suggestions on what to do next are welcome. ;)

    TRAINER / Item
    Slowpoke Tail

    [​IMG]

    Discard up to 3 cards from your hand. Then, draw the same amount of cards you discarded in this way.

    You may play as many Item cards as you like during your turn (before your attack).

    92/101 [​IMG]
    TRAINER / Item
    Gorgeous Box

    [​IMG]

    Your opponent chooses a random card from your deck. Put that card in your hand.

    You may play as many Item cards as you like during your turn (before your attack).

    92/101 [​IMG]
    TRAINER / Item
    Choice Scarf

    [​IMG]
    Pokémon Tool: Attach a Pokémon Tool to 1 of your Pokémon that doesn't already have a Pokémon tool attached to it.

    Each of the attacks of the Pokémon this card is attached to cost [​IMG] less. Discard this card at the end of the turn you played it.

    You may play as many Item cards as you like during your turn (before your attack).

    83/101 [​IMG]
     
  8. Auride Periodic Visitor
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    How would gorgeous box work? Would you spread out your deck face down and let them pick a card?

    Besides that, these look pretty interesting! I suggested choice scarf knowing that there wasn't really an equivalent to speed in the TCG, but you've come up with something that makes a lot of sense. Good work.
     
  9. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    Thanks, Auride, comments are always appreciated! :D And yeah, the opponent simply grabs a card, like you would in a magic trick. I got the inspiration from the Rival card, from the DPPt Era.
     
  10. GadgetJax Traveling Storyteller and Card Faker
    GadgetJax

    Gorgeus box should probably say, "Your opponent searches your deck for a card and puts it in your hand. Shuffle your deck afterward."
     
  11. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    No, I think you misunderstood: My card makes the opponent choose a card RANDOMLY from the deck and gives it to you. That requires no shuffling or the like, you opponent just takes a card out of your deck face down and that's it. If your opponent looks through your deck for a card not only it gives you opponent to know every aspect of you deck, but it requires shuffling the deck afterward. The first case is the one that's meant for my card. :)
     
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  12. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    And a couple more Items! Also updated Choice Scarf up there with DW Artwork.

    TRAINER / Item
    Light Clay

    [​IMG]
    Pokémon Tool: Attach a Pokémon Tool to 1 of your Pokémon that doesn't already have a Pokémon tool attached to it.

    Any damage done to the Pokémon this card is attached to by an opponent's attack is reduced by 10 for each Prize card left (both yours and your opponent's) (after applying Weakness and Resistance). Discard this card at the end of your next turn.

    You may play as many Item cards as you like during your turn (before your attack).

    87/101 [​IMG]
    TRAINER / Item
    Shiny Charm

    [​IMG]

    Flip 3 coins. For each heads, search your deck for a Pokémon and put it into your hand. Shuffle your deck afterward. You can't play this card if another card with the same name is in your discard pile.

    You may play as many Item cards as you like during your turn (before your attack).

    89/101 [​IMG]
    TRAINER / Item
    Rage Candy Bar

    [​IMG]

    Discard a card from your hand (If you can't discard a card, you can't play this card). Heal 50 damage from your Active Pokémon.

    You may play as many Item cards as you like during your turn (before your attack).

    90/101 [​IMG]
     
  13. GadgetJax Traveling Storyteller and Card Faker
    GadgetJax

    It's not game breaking, but I think that Shiny Charm is a bit overpowered. Do you know how many decks use exclusively Rare Cards? A lot. Pretty much every Team Plasma Deck, any EX, any Holo, etc. The card should at least have a side effect to prevent it from being too powerful, say, "Seach your deck for a Pokémon with a [​IMG] Rarity or higher, shuffle your deck, then put that Pokémon on the top of your deck." Otherwise, no complaints! Everything looks good!
     
  14. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    Hm, didn't actually thought it. I mean, it can be abused, but not to that extent. Only decks with EX's can abuse it. I think discarding 2 cards would make it a worse Ultra Ball, and with a coin it's a worse Poké Ball... But I think I'll go a-la Dual Ball with a little twist...

    TRAINER / Item
    Shiny Charm

    [​IMG]

    Flip 2 coins. For each heads, put a Pokémon with a [​IMG] Rarity or higher from your discard pile into your hand.

    You may play as many Item cards as you like during your turn (before your attack).

    89/101 [​IMG]

    How about that?
     
  15. GadgetJax Traveling Storyteller and Card Faker
    GadgetJax

    Maybe it's just me thinking too rash about playable fake cards... it honestly works either way, if you want to stick to the original, that's fine. It's just that, you see, Ultra Ball could search for anything, but required a discard. This card may be situational in most decks, such as Empoleon/Miltank/Dusknoir, but in others, like Yveltal/Darkrai/Garbodor, it's completely broken, as there is no disadvantage to using it. Use the original text. Flipping coins might make it more random, but then it would be nothing more than a worse Dual Ball...
     
  16. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    You're telling a CaC Judge to leave an OP card in his set...? Go to ...!
    haha, just kidding, I'm actually grateful that you pointed that out. I'd rather see how else would that work to make it unique than leaving it over-powered. Any suggestions?
     
  17. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    Ok, no update, but I think I finally came up with a nice wording for Shiny Charm. Thoughts?

    TRAINER / Item
    Shiny Charm

    [​IMG]

    Flip 3 coins. For each heads, search your deck for a Pokémon and put it into your hand. Shuffle your deck afterward. You can't play this card if another card with the same name is in your discard pile.

    You may play as many Item cards as you like during your turn (before your attack).

    89/101 [​IMG]
     
  18. Auride Periodic Visitor
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    It's basically a combination of Luxury Ball and Dual Ball, which is actually pretty neat. As interesting as the idea of using rarities, it's simply either too abusable or too useless to work out (makes sense why it's never been used in any cards before). This is a good compromise.
     
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  19. Luispipe8 Pokémon Professor
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    Thanks! :D I hope I can get some more Pokémon done before I move on with the rest of the Trainers. Any request of which I should do next?
     
  20. Auride Periodic Visitor
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    I think you should either go ahead and do the Time-Space Trio (Dialga, Palkia, and Giratina), or leave those for later and get started on the fairy Pokémon.
     

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