Writing Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Season 2: Chapter 2)

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I really wanted to write a pokemon fanfic. So, here it is.

Ch. 1

It was a really quiet night and a boy, no older than the age of 11. He was looking out the window. To be more specific, he was looking at the Pokemon Lab.

The sun rose higher and the whole world became sunny again. The boy, named Len, ran to his parents' room and jumped into their bed.

"Let's go! Let's go! Let's go!" he shouted. His parents' stayed in bed and he didn't care anymore about them so he got dressed!

He ran outside his house and crashed into another boy, 13 years old. He was wearing a hat. Len's face hit the ground.

"Ughh, sorry about that" Len said as he took off again. The 13 year old boy looked as Len took off. "Whatever" the boy said as he kept on walking.

Len ran into the lab and gasped. "Well, hello Len. How are you doing?" Professor Pine asked. "Are there any pokemon left?" Len said as he scrimmaged around the area trying to find a pokeball.

"Len, you are the first one here. You may choose a pokemon. There is a Squirtle, Cyndaquil, and Turtwig. So, which one would you like?" Professor Pine asked.

"Turtwig! I choose you!" Len said as he through the pokeball into the air. The red flash shot the turtle like pokemon out. Turtwig looked at Len and tackled him. Len hit his head on the ground.

"Ouch…" Len got up and put him back into his pokeball. "Well, see you later Pro. Pine!" Len said as he ran out. "What a boy" Professor Pine said to himself.

Len ran back into his house and sent Turtwig out and grabbed him. He put him on his parents' bed.

"Mom, dad! My pokemon!" Len shouted. Len ran out of the house again and saw that same boy he crashed into. "Oh, sorry about before. I was going to get my first pokemon" Len said.

"That's alright. My name's Ryan. What's yours?" Ryan asked. "The names Len" said Len as he put Turtwig by his side.

"I see you chose Turtwig. Last year they had different choices. I got a Growlithe" said Ryan as he sent out Growlithe.

"Nice to meet you" said Len as he put his hand out for a handshake. Ryan shook his hand. "So where are you heading?" Ryan asked. "Wherever life takes me"
 
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends

Wow! I like this story! It has potential! Wanna check out mine?
 
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends

Thank you. Ch. 2 will be up soon. And unlike my other stories, this fanfic will not have Chapter names...just Ch. 1, Ch. 2, Ch. 3, and so on...
 
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So, like, will I be in this? I am after all, one of your 'Best Friends.':D
 
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Do you want to be in this?

(And yes, you are one of my best friends on this site. Am I thought to be one of your best friends?)
 
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You seem to be stalking me. First you post on my other fanfic saying you dont like it, then you come to this one and say it is ok. Well, now I feel kind of scared. I feel like I am being stalked...


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Ch. 2

Len and Ryan were heading to Cherrygrove City when this other boy came and pushed Ryan.

"Hey, what's wrong with you?" Ryan said angrily. The boy turned around and cracked his knuckles.

“What did you say?” said the boy. He tried to look tough, but Ryan wasn’t falling for it. “Look buddy, how about you go on home before I singe you with my pokemon” Ryan said, not scared of the boy at all.

“Didn’t your mom tell you, if you can’t say anything nice don’t say anything at all. I’ll teach you what strength my pokemon has!” he shouted.

Right there and then, the boy threw his pokeball into the air and a blue crocodile pokemon came out. “Toto Totodile!” it shouted. He had an angry look, just like its owner.

“Well, go Growlithe!” Ryan shouted. Growlithe showed his sharp teeth and Totodile got a bit scared, but he cracked his knuckles like his owner.

“Seems like you and your pokemon are exactly alike!” Len said. The boy gave a mean look and Len stepped backwards.

“Len, don’t be scared. I’ll teach this kid not to ever mess with us again! Growlithe, use Bite attack!” Ryan shouted.

Growlithe sped off and circled Totodile waiting for the right moment to attack. “Before he attacks use Scratch!” the other boy shouted.

Totodile jumped and used Scratch. His claws started shine and he jumped forward to hit Growlithe, but he missed.

Growlithe was still running around. Then, when Totodile finished his missed attack, Growlithe came in with a Bite attack.

Growlithe’s teeth shined and he growled at Totodile. Totodile looked backwards and a Growlithe gave him a big Bite attack!

Totodile fell backwards and his eyes were X’s. “Totodile! You worthless piece of trash!” the trainer said. “Hey, don’t talk to your pokemon like that!” Ryan said.

“Nobody tells me what to do” the boy said as he ran off to the pokemon center.

“Nice job, Ryan. I see the bond between you and Growlithe. It’s amazing!” Len said. Len was feeling proud for Ryan. This was the closest he was ever to a real pokemon battle.

“That punk better not show his face here anymore” Ryan said as he brought Growlithe back into his pokeball. “Alright, to the pokemon center?” Len asked. “Sure, I need to get Growlithe healed up, even though he didn’t use much energy in that battle” Ryan said.

They went to the pokemon center and they saw that boy.

“Zack, don’t treat your pokemon like that” said Nurse Joy. Zack turned around only to see those same two boys that he fought with earlier.

“So, your name is Zack?” Len asked, even though he already knew the answer. “Yes, it is Zack. You got a problem with that?” Zack said.

He was furious at Totodile because of earlier. “Look, just leave me alone. Like you said, you don’t ever want to see my face again” said Zack as he ran out of the pokemon center.

“I bet we’ll be running into him often” Ryan said. “What gives you that idea?” Len asked. “Just a hunch” he replied.


 
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Yes, I want to be in this. You will be one of my best friends if you put me in this.

I will PM you about the details of my character.
 
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OK, you'll be in, in the next chapter. Also, Len acts really childish with you because he thinks of you as an adult. He is loco...-_-
 
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PokeLen said:
OK, you'll be in, in the next chapter. Also, Len acts really childish with you because he thinks of you as an adult. He is loco...-_-
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You must've read my mind when It came to how to act around me.
 
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends

Ryan acts normal. He is a fine person and kinda mature, but still has some kid left in him. So do you, Len just won't accept that though.
 
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends

Soon! Just wait, I am almost finished. I just have a few more sentences to type!

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Ch. 3

Len and Ryan were walking and they see and old man trying to pick up his bags that he dropped. They go over to help him.

“Would you like some help?” Len asked the old man. “Thank you, youngsters” he replies. They hand him his stuff and just as they were about to walk away, he taps Len’s shoulders. “Here, take this for your journey. It’ll help you a lot!” the old man said.

“What is it?” Ryan asked. “It is a Town map! It’ll come in handy, trust me” he said as he went to his house which was a few feet away.

As they were about to leave Len drops his pokeball which was on his belt. “One second Ryan” said Len as he picked it up. Len looks behind him and there is a boy sitting on a rock way over in the middle of the river.

“Hey, Ryan, look over there” said Len. Ryan saw the boy and he was amazed! “That guy taught his Charmander how to swim! He must be really talented!” Ryan exclaimed. The boy over-heard the two boys talking and swam back to the shore with his Charmander.

He walked over to the two kids. “Hey, did you guys talk with my grandpa, that man over there?” the boy asked. “Yes, he gave us a Town Map for our journey” Len replied. “One second” the boy said as he ran back into his house.

“What’s going on?” Len asked. “I don’t know. He said one second. Be patient” Ryan said.

The boy came back with 3 pokeballs. “This is just if I find a pokemon on our I can catch it” the boy said. “Our journey? You’re coming with us?” Ryan asked. “Ya, is that alright?” the boy asked.

“It is perfect! What’s your name, by the way? My name is Ryan, and this is Len” Ryan said. Len waved to the boy. “My name is Fabrizio. You can call me Fabriz, whichever you want” Fabrizio said.

“Can I call you Z?” Len asked. “Sure…why though? How does Fabrizio sound like Z?” Fabrizio asked. “I dunno, but I’m calling you Z” Len said. “OK?” Fabrizio said confused.

“Don’t mind him. I’ll call you Fabrizio, that is a fine name” Ryan said. “OK…” Fabrizio said, still confused.

Charmander was grabbing onto Fabrizio’s pants. “Oh, this is Charmander” said Fabrizio. “You taught him how to swim, right?” Ryan asked. “Yes” he replied.

“How? Charmander swimming? It just doesn’t seem right” Ryan said. “Well, I taught him to withstand the power of water. Water is pretty much like a normal attack on him” Fabrizio said.

Len was sticking out his tongue at Fabrizio. “What did I do?” Fabrizio wondered. Len then turned around and saw that Zack was fighting a pokemon.

“Hey Ryan, look, Zack is fighting a pokemon out there!” Len said. But Ryan ignored him and kept on talking with Fabrizio.

“Ughh! Stop talking with Z and look!” Len shouted. Ryan turned around and saw nothing.

“What are you talking about Len?” Ryan asked. “I saw him. He was right there…what the heck is going on?” Len said, wondering what really just happened. Was he hallucinating?

“Well, we better get going. We need to get to Violet City before it gets too dark” Ryan said. “No, we won’t be able to make it to Violet City in less than one day. We’ll need to camp out. “I’ve got some extra stuff at home like sleeping bags for you guys, if you want” Fabrizio asked.

“No, we got our stuff in our backpacks” said Ryan. “So, let’s get going!” Len said as he pointed to the way they would go.

They walked through the grassy plains and saw some pokemon, but nothing that they were really interested in to catch.

Pidgey’s were flying above and Caterpie’s and Weedle’s were hanging from the trees. They also saw a rare Pineco but he rolled away before they could battle it.

“Well, we are just about to go through the little forest here that will lead us to the small route that leads to Violet City. This forest was made by pokemon themselves not too long ago. Well, come on!” Fabrizio said.

Len and Ryan followed Fabrizio into the forest hoping he would know the way through.
 
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Yes, young ones, follow me, as I shall lead you to the promised land...
 
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends

To tell you the truth, I am really not looking forward to SSBB.
omg!!!

but the story is...interesting er-okay
 
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends

Um...ok...thank you?
Ch. 4

Fabrizio was leading the way with his flash light. “I’m hungry! Give me food!” Len shouted. “I got a candy bar in my backpack, get it out” Fabrizio replied. Len grabbed the chocolate and nut filled bar and ate it in one bite!

“Now I’m good!” Len said as he rubbed his belly. Ryan kept following Fabrizio hoping he was going the right way. Then they heard some noise behind a few trees.

They looked behind the trees and there was this big machine pumping oil out of the ground and some pokemon that were living underground too! “Hey, this is public property. They can’t do this” Fabrizio shouted!

Two people, one man and one woman, looked back. They had a shirt with a big R on it. “Team Rocket! I’d know you anywhere” Fabrizio said.

“You know us? Well, I must be famous! I am Jina!” she said. “And I am Robby!” he said. “And we are Team Rocket!” they both said in unison.

“Go Charmander!” Fabrizio said. “Go Turtwig!” Len said. “Go Growlithe!” said Ryan. “You’re outnumbered, why don’t you give up!” Ryan said.

“Haha, outnumbered?” Jina laughed. “Well, seems like they forgot about this machine!” Robby said.

The machine grew legs and arms and a head. It turned around and looked at the 3 of them. “Uh, oh! Z, do something!” Len shouted in fear.

Turtwig looked up at the huge machine and used a Razor Leaf attack, but it did nothing. This made the machine a bit angry.

It’s eyes grew red and it was about to squish Turtwig but he got away in the snitch of time. “Charmander, use Metal Claw then Ember!” Fabrizio said. Charmander’s claws glowed and he slashed the machine.

It didn’t do much, but it did make that spot vulnerable. “Now, use Ember at that spot now” Fabrizio said, not really worried. The fire burned through the machines outer body and it made a hole in him.

“Now, Growlithe, use Ember too!” Ryan said. “Turtwig, use another Razor Leaf in the hole!” Len said.

The Razor Leaf and Ember combined and shot Burning Leaves at the machine. The leaves cut and burned the wires in the machines body it blew up right in front of Team Rocket’s eyes.

“But, how did they do that?” Jina wondered. “Hey Jina, now let’s have our pokemon battle!” Robby said. “Right” she replied.

“Go Sneasel!” Robby said. “Go Snover!” Jina said. “Hehe, two Ice-types. Hey Fabrizio, let’s finish them off” Ryan said. Fabrizio nodded.

“Growlithe, use Ember!” said Ryan. Sneasel dodged it quickly and used Slash on Growlithe making him fall backwards. “Charmander, use Ember on Sneasel!” Fabrizio said.

Charmander hit Sneasel since it was too cocky and still feeling good about the hit it used on Growlithe. Sneasel fell back and became burned. It nodded and Snover slammed into Charmander and Sneasel used Slash on Charmander.

“Charmander, remember what we practiced” Fabrizio said very calmly. Charmander got up and as they both were about to attack him, he jumped into the air and shot an ember at both of them.
Then they both crashed into each other and were knocked out. “But how?” questioned Robby. “We lost to these puny twerps!” Jina said, annoyed by the outcome! “You haven’t seen the last of us!” Robby said as they both ran away.

“Well, nice job Fabrizio, you are really strong with Charmander!” Ryan congratulated. “Ya, well, I’ll become better than you Z!” Len said.

“Well, we gotta camp out here for now, it is really late. Let’s get some rest” said Fabrizio. Fabrizio set up Len’s sleeping bag and Ryan was fine by himself.

‘Good night everyone” Fabrizio said. “Good night” they both replied.



That is the next chapter. Well, that is all the chapters for the first day. The next few chapters might be up sometime tomorrow. Thank you for the comments and more good stuff will be coming soon.
 
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it's okay but you're really copying the anime (not that i could do better)
 
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends

How is that copying the anime? Since when are there 3 boys in a forest that was never there in the first place. It won't be anything like the anime and it isn't anything like the anime right now.
Ch. 5

The sun rose behind the trees and Len was the first awake. “Come on guys, let’s go!” Len said.

He kicked Fabrizio in the shins and that woke him up. “Hey, hey, I’m awake!” Fabrizio said.

Len was about to kick Ryan in the face but Fabrizio stopped him. “Let Ryan wake up on his own” Fabrizio said.

Len got everything together back into his backpack and was ready to head out. “Wake Up RYAN!” Len shouted. Ryan freaked out and jumped up straight into the air and landed on his butt.

“Ouch, what was that for?” Ryan asked. “We need to get going, hurry up. We’ll have breakfast lunch at Violet City, but since we won’t be there for a while I have some sandwiches for everyone” Fabrizio said as he handed them out.

“It is PB and J” Fabrizio said as he took a bite. “I love PB and J. Maybe Z ain’t too bad after all” Len said.

They headed out into the forest and hoped they were on the right track. As they were walking they saw 2 trainers battling.

“Mightyena, use Extremespeed!” one man shouted. “Lucario, get up and used Aura Sphere to finish this match!” the second man said.

The blast pummeled Mightyena into the ground. Then they shook hands and went separate ways.

“Hey, excuse me, please don’t leave us here! Which way!” Len shouted. “Let’s take a guess, I say Left!” Ryan said. “No, right. Because going right has to be right!” Len said.

“Guys, how about we go forward?” Fabrizio said as he pointed to a different path. “Oh, forward, of course, how could we not see that?” Len said.

Then Fabrizio looked up in the sky. A flash covered the sky and what seemed like a shooting star passed them. “Did you guys see that?” he said.

Len and Ryan had already started on the path. “Hey, wait up” Fabrizio said as he caught up to them.
They were finally there. The route that would take them to Violet City! “Look at the river, so beautiful” Ryan exclaimed.

As they ran up to look at the river they noticed Zack talking to other weird looking guys. “Hey look, it’s Zack talking to some thugs” Len said.

“Told you” Ryan replied. “Well, let’s hope we’ll be able to pass through without them noticing” said Fabrizio. Just as they were about to step through the building leading to Violet City, he noticed them.

“Hey, I told you never to run into me again!” Zack said angrily. “How should we know you’d also be here” Len said.

Zack walked up to Fabrizio and looked him right in the eye. “Who are you?” Zack questioned. “Why is it important?” Fabrizio replied.

“Move along before we’ll hurt you!” Zack said as he cracked his knuckles again. “Calm down” Fabrizio said as they went through the final passageway. They were finally in Violet City!

“Food, I need food! Give me food!” Len shouted. “Hey, we got here earlier than expected, it is still 11:00” said Fabrizio as he looked at his watch.

“Let’s go and check out the place. Talk to some people. We still need to catch some pokemon to fight the first gym” Len said.

“You’re right, we’ll need more pokemon. There is a small route down there. We can catch some pokemon over there. They are quite strong” Ryan said as he looked at the Town Map.

“I guess that’s our best option, let’s go!” Fabrizio said. They took off to catch their new pokemon.

They got there and a man with a gun was standing next to a Team Rocket member. He then went away and so did the grunt.

“Did you see that? Well, let’s go, I wanna get some pokemon!” Ryan said. “I’m concerned” Fabrizio said. “Oh, I bet it is nothing” Len said as he grabbed Fabrizio’s hand and tugged at him.

They finally got to the big route that they were actually going to. “Alright, everyone, we’ll meet up back here after you’ve caught your pokemon, ok?” Fabrizio said.

“Alright” Len and Ryan said as they took off. “Crazy little boys” Fabrizio mumbled.
 
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These chapters are pretty good, only one small problem:

PokeLen said:
“Well, nice job Fabrizio, you are really strong with Charmander!” Ryan congratulated. “Ya, well, I’ll become better than you Z!” Len said.

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That's definetly not happening.
 
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Lol, who knows? Maybe you'll get depressed and kill yourself? >.>
 
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