RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 9)
That was a pretty good chapter.
That was a pretty good chapter.
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RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 9)
Yep, this is definetly fiction. In real life I would've caught that Giratina.
Yep, this is definetly fiction. In real life I would've caught that Giratina.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 9)
Haha, lol! Wait, what are you talking about? That ain't no Giratina. Hehe, I'll let you figure it out by yourself.
Thank you PokemonRanger105. I haven't started working on Ch. 10 yet, I haven't had the time. I am going to a friends house right now, so ya, hopefully it'll be up later today.
Haha, lol! Wait, what are you talking about? That ain't no Giratina. Hehe, I'll let you figure it out by yourself.
Thank you PokemonRanger105. I haven't started working on Ch. 10 yet, I haven't had the time. I am going to a friends house right now, so ya, hopefully it'll be up later today.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 9)
Finally, it is finished! Ch. 10 is here! Lots of battling in it, I think it is a very good chapter!
Ch. 10
The two pokemon stared at each other for a long time, but then Starly swooped in with a Wing Attack, but Scyther quickly and easily evaded.
"Maybe you'll have to think twice before attacking, Falkner! Scyther, use Slash!" Fabrizio shouted.
Scyther took a big lunge forward at Starly and slashed it with a Critical Hit. The poor Starly hit the ground defenseless.
"Starly, come on, don't fail me! I believe in you!" Falkner shouted. Starly then flapped his wings and started to shine.
"Starly, are you alright?" Falkner questioned. Starly then disappeared and a new pokemon was standing in his place.
"A Staravia! You've evolved, I'm so proud of you! Now let's show this Scyther what were made of! Staravia, use Whirl Wing!" Falkner shouted.
Heavy gusts slashed and hit Scyther from all sides and thing Staravia swooped down and slashed Scyther with his wings.
"Scyther, you alright?" asked Fabrizio. Scyther nodded, but he was panting loudly. "Scyther, use Large Scythe!" Fabrizio shouted.
One of Scyther's hand blades started to shine. Then Scyther appeared right behind Staravia, and Staravia was shocked by his speed.
Scyther then slashed Staravia hard! Staravia was crushed into the ground. "Come on Staravia, use Whirl Flash!" Falkner shouted.
Staravia was generating power into a little ball that was in his mouth. "Scyther, use Mighty Scythe!"Fabrizio commanded.
Scyther's blade started to shine again, but now an Aura was shrouding his whole body.
"Release!" both Fabrizio and Falkner shouted together.
Scyther slashed and a huge Aura slash was heading towards Staravia.
Staravia shot the Wind Ball that he was generating power for.
The two attacks collided and there was a huge explosion. Smoke was everywhere and everyone had no idea who was the winner.
The smoke faded away and Fabrizio's Scyther was on the ground, knocked out. "No, Scyther!" Fabrizio said.
But as more smoke faded away, Staravia was also knocked out cold on the ground. "Well, it looks like that was a Draw! But this time, I'll end it for you!" Falkner shouted.
"We'll just have to see about that! Go Charmander!" Fabrizio said.
Charmander appeared with a grin on his face. Charmander was full of confidence. His blazing tail was fired up more than regular.
"Well, this seems fun! Go Chatot! Use Chatty Wind!" Falkner shouted.
Chatot flew into the air and circled Charmander a few times and then shouted over him. The wind hit Charmander and he fell down hitting the cold ground of the arena.
"Come on Charmander, let's use another one of our combos on Flying pokemon" Fabrizio said.
Charmander sprinted towards the wall. He put one foot on the wall and then ran up it like those Martial Arts people.
He then ran on the ceiling and grabbed onto Chatot's wing. The weight of Charmander was a little too much for the light weight Chatot.
Then with Charmander's other hand, he slashed Chatot's other wing, making him drop altitude.
"Now, finish him off!" Fabrizio said.
Charmander then let go of Chatot's wings. Chatot was so relieved that he did not see the Ember attack coming right at him.
It crushed Chatot and he was finally knocked out. "You defeated him!" Falkner said in shock.
"Ya, me and Charmander had a lot of training against Flying pokemon after the "incident." Some flying pokemon tried to kidnap him but I finally got him back with the help of a Police Officer.
"Well, that is a touching story. Here is your Zephyr Badge!" Falkner said as he handed him the shiny, metal item.
"Thank you very much" Fabrizio said as he stepped to the side.
"Now, who's next?" Falkner asked. Ryan got up from his little seat outside the arena.
He then entered through the smalls doors and met face to face with Falkner. "That'd be me" Ryan said.
Alright, comment, as always. I don't know why I keep saying comment. I just feel like if I don't say it, you won't read it.
Finally, it is finished! Ch. 10 is here! Lots of battling in it, I think it is a very good chapter!
Ch. 10
The two pokemon stared at each other for a long time, but then Starly swooped in with a Wing Attack, but Scyther quickly and easily evaded.
"Maybe you'll have to think twice before attacking, Falkner! Scyther, use Slash!" Fabrizio shouted.
Scyther took a big lunge forward at Starly and slashed it with a Critical Hit. The poor Starly hit the ground defenseless.
"Starly, come on, don't fail me! I believe in you!" Falkner shouted. Starly then flapped his wings and started to shine.
"Starly, are you alright?" Falkner questioned. Starly then disappeared and a new pokemon was standing in his place.
"A Staravia! You've evolved, I'm so proud of you! Now let's show this Scyther what were made of! Staravia, use Whirl Wing!" Falkner shouted.
Heavy gusts slashed and hit Scyther from all sides and thing Staravia swooped down and slashed Scyther with his wings.
"Scyther, you alright?" asked Fabrizio. Scyther nodded, but he was panting loudly. "Scyther, use Large Scythe!" Fabrizio shouted.
One of Scyther's hand blades started to shine. Then Scyther appeared right behind Staravia, and Staravia was shocked by his speed.
Scyther then slashed Staravia hard! Staravia was crushed into the ground. "Come on Staravia, use Whirl Flash!" Falkner shouted.
Staravia was generating power into a little ball that was in his mouth. "Scyther, use Mighty Scythe!"Fabrizio commanded.
Scyther's blade started to shine again, but now an Aura was shrouding his whole body.
"Release!" both Fabrizio and Falkner shouted together.
Scyther slashed and a huge Aura slash was heading towards Staravia.
Staravia shot the Wind Ball that he was generating power for.
The two attacks collided and there was a huge explosion. Smoke was everywhere and everyone had no idea who was the winner.
The smoke faded away and Fabrizio's Scyther was on the ground, knocked out. "No, Scyther!" Fabrizio said.
But as more smoke faded away, Staravia was also knocked out cold on the ground. "Well, it looks like that was a Draw! But this time, I'll end it for you!" Falkner shouted.
"We'll just have to see about that! Go Charmander!" Fabrizio said.
Charmander appeared with a grin on his face. Charmander was full of confidence. His blazing tail was fired up more than regular.
"Well, this seems fun! Go Chatot! Use Chatty Wind!" Falkner shouted.
Chatot flew into the air and circled Charmander a few times and then shouted over him. The wind hit Charmander and he fell down hitting the cold ground of the arena.
"Come on Charmander, let's use another one of our combos on Flying pokemon" Fabrizio said.
Charmander sprinted towards the wall. He put one foot on the wall and then ran up it like those Martial Arts people.
He then ran on the ceiling and grabbed onto Chatot's wing. The weight of Charmander was a little too much for the light weight Chatot.
Then with Charmander's other hand, he slashed Chatot's other wing, making him drop altitude.
"Now, finish him off!" Fabrizio said.
Charmander then let go of Chatot's wings. Chatot was so relieved that he did not see the Ember attack coming right at him.
It crushed Chatot and he was finally knocked out. "You defeated him!" Falkner said in shock.
"Ya, me and Charmander had a lot of training against Flying pokemon after the "incident." Some flying pokemon tried to kidnap him but I finally got him back with the help of a Police Officer.
"Well, that is a touching story. Here is your Zephyr Badge!" Falkner said as he handed him the shiny, metal item.
"Thank you very much" Fabrizio said as he stepped to the side.
"Now, who's next?" Falkner asked. Ryan got up from his little seat outside the arena.
He then entered through the smalls doors and met face to face with Falkner. "That'd be me" Ryan said.
Alright, comment, as always. I don't know why I keep saying comment. I just feel like if I don't say it, you won't read it.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 9)
Yeah, I'm a beast. Nice Chapter.
Yeah, I'm a beast. Nice Chapter.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 9)
Good Good. I like the chapter! Must be one of your best!
Good Good. I like the chapter! Must be one of your best!
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 11 Soon)
Ch. 11
“Alright, well, get ready for a hard on battle! Go Doduo!” Falkner shouted. The two headed bird flailed around.
“Well, seems like we have one pokemon in common. But I’ll save it until later! Go Growlithe!” Ryan said.
Growlithe starred at Doduo, like it did to every other opponent. “Growlithe, use Fire Tackle!” Ryan said.
Growlithe started to run towards Doduo. It then used Ember right in front of him. This made his body fly right through the fire. But since Growlithe had Flash Fire, it didn’t hurt him.
The burning dog was running at high speed and the bird just stood calmly. “Growlithe, full throttle!” Ryan added.
Right before Doduo was about to get hit, it moved to the side and used Peck on Growlithe.
Growlithe slid into the ground and whimpered in pain. “Growlithe, use Ember!” Ryan commanded.
Doduo easily dodged it and jumped into the air. It landed right on Growlithe, who was then knocked out, easily.
“Whoa, that is one strong Doduo. But I know one pokemon that is stronger, go Dodrio!” Ryan said.
The three headed pokemon grinned at the Doduo who was now scared out of his mind. It started to run around in circles.
Dodrio without any command walked up to the flailing bird. As Doduo passed him, Dodrio used Drill Peck and Doduo’s eyeballs were as wide as one of its heads.
Doduo hit the ground and whimpered in pain, just like Growlithe. “Come back Doduo, you fought well. It looks like your Dodrio has amazing strength!” Falkner complimented.
“And the funny thing is that this is just the beginning of his power” Ryan said. As impressed as Falkner already was, he still was determined to win.
“I’ve saved the best for last! Go Honchkrow!” Falkner shouted.
“He seems to be elite, but I doubt he’ll bat this guy” Falkner thought.
“Dodrio, use Tri Attack!” Ryan shouted. Dodrio powered up an Ice Attack on the left head, Fire Attack on the right head, and Thunder Attack in its middle head.
“Honchkrow, show them what you’ve got!” Falkner said. Dodrio’s stupendous attacks were blasted towards Honchkrow.
“Now, Honchkrow!” Falkner said. Honchkrow flapped its wings and the attacks were blown right back at Dodrio.
“Dodrio, dodge!” Ryan shouted. The birds just barely dodged it. All 3 heads were panting.
“Dodrio, use Rush Flash!” Ryan shouted. Dodrio’s body started to shine. It was as if it was covered in metal.
Dodrio started to lunge towards Honchkrow. “Honchkrow, now!” Falkner said.
Honchkrow opened up its wings and flapped, but nothing happened. Dodrio was still coming at full speed.
This left Honchkrow’s stomach out in the open for a Critical Hit.
Dodrio stuck out the three heads and rammed into Honchkrow. If Dodrio had attacked hard enough, he would have cut through Honchkrow’s body!
Honchkrow hit the ground and was knocked out. “This is amazing! How could this be? You defeated Honchkrow!” Falkner shouted in disbelief.
“Yes, we used Rush Flash. That is an attack that cannot be stopped. Even by the strongest forces of the wind” Ryan said.
“Well whatever it was, you were amazing! Here, the Zephyr Badge. You deserved it” Falkner said.
The big smile landed on Ryan’s face as he took the Badge and put it in his Badge case. ‘
“You guys have come a long way, but I am just the first Gym Leader. The strongest enemies will lay ahead” Falkner said.
The three kids exited the gym. Meanwhile, Falkner was mumbling to himself.
“The kids won’t know what hit them. They will all be wrapped into this, and my plan to release Darkrai shall work. Hail Darkrai!”
I liked this chapter a lot when I wrote it. I hope you like it too!
Ch. 11
“Alright, well, get ready for a hard on battle! Go Doduo!” Falkner shouted. The two headed bird flailed around.
“Well, seems like we have one pokemon in common. But I’ll save it until later! Go Growlithe!” Ryan said.
Growlithe starred at Doduo, like it did to every other opponent. “Growlithe, use Fire Tackle!” Ryan said.
Growlithe started to run towards Doduo. It then used Ember right in front of him. This made his body fly right through the fire. But since Growlithe had Flash Fire, it didn’t hurt him.
The burning dog was running at high speed and the bird just stood calmly. “Growlithe, full throttle!” Ryan added.
Right before Doduo was about to get hit, it moved to the side and used Peck on Growlithe.
Growlithe slid into the ground and whimpered in pain. “Growlithe, use Ember!” Ryan commanded.
Doduo easily dodged it and jumped into the air. It landed right on Growlithe, who was then knocked out, easily.
“Whoa, that is one strong Doduo. But I know one pokemon that is stronger, go Dodrio!” Ryan said.
The three headed pokemon grinned at the Doduo who was now scared out of his mind. It started to run around in circles.
Dodrio without any command walked up to the flailing bird. As Doduo passed him, Dodrio used Drill Peck and Doduo’s eyeballs were as wide as one of its heads.
Doduo hit the ground and whimpered in pain, just like Growlithe. “Come back Doduo, you fought well. It looks like your Dodrio has amazing strength!” Falkner complimented.
“And the funny thing is that this is just the beginning of his power” Ryan said. As impressed as Falkner already was, he still was determined to win.
“I’ve saved the best for last! Go Honchkrow!” Falkner shouted.
“He seems to be elite, but I doubt he’ll bat this guy” Falkner thought.
“Dodrio, use Tri Attack!” Ryan shouted. Dodrio powered up an Ice Attack on the left head, Fire Attack on the right head, and Thunder Attack in its middle head.
“Honchkrow, show them what you’ve got!” Falkner said. Dodrio’s stupendous attacks were blasted towards Honchkrow.
“Now, Honchkrow!” Falkner said. Honchkrow flapped its wings and the attacks were blown right back at Dodrio.
“Dodrio, dodge!” Ryan shouted. The birds just barely dodged it. All 3 heads were panting.
“Dodrio, use Rush Flash!” Ryan shouted. Dodrio’s body started to shine. It was as if it was covered in metal.
Dodrio started to lunge towards Honchkrow. “Honchkrow, now!” Falkner said.
Honchkrow opened up its wings and flapped, but nothing happened. Dodrio was still coming at full speed.
This left Honchkrow’s stomach out in the open for a Critical Hit.
Dodrio stuck out the three heads and rammed into Honchkrow. If Dodrio had attacked hard enough, he would have cut through Honchkrow’s body!
Honchkrow hit the ground and was knocked out. “This is amazing! How could this be? You defeated Honchkrow!” Falkner shouted in disbelief.
“Yes, we used Rush Flash. That is an attack that cannot be stopped. Even by the strongest forces of the wind” Ryan said.
“Well whatever it was, you were amazing! Here, the Zephyr Badge. You deserved it” Falkner said.
The big smile landed on Ryan’s face as he took the Badge and put it in his Badge case. ‘
“You guys have come a long way, but I am just the first Gym Leader. The strongest enemies will lay ahead” Falkner said.
The three kids exited the gym. Meanwhile, Falkner was mumbling to himself.
“The kids won’t know what hit them. They will all be wrapped into this, and my plan to release Darkrai shall work. Hail Darkrai!”
I liked this chapter a lot when I wrote it. I hope you like it too!
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 11 Soon)
lulz, Falkner is Evil. Too bad he doesn't know about my super keen sense of hearing....Anways, good chapter, there's some minor spelling errors, but it's no problem.
lulz, Falkner is Evil. Too bad he doesn't know about my super keen sense of hearing....Anways, good chapter, there's some minor spelling errors, but it's no problem.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 11 Soon)
Thank you. Well, for the spelling errors, I guess I'll just go back to Word and revise everything...
Ch. 12
Dark rain fell from the heavenly sky. The storm was imminent. The rain was a sign, a sign of something yet to come. Something that will wipe out the whole nation.
“Stupid storm, now we have to stay in the pokemon center for the night” whined Len.
“Oh, come down. Things could be much worse” said Ryan as he looked out the window. “Hey, isn’t that Falkner?” he said.
“What is he doing out there with that big jar?” questioned Len. Then, out of the jar shadows of all shapes appeared in front of him.
“Darkrai, oh Darkrai, appear before me oh great one!” Falkner shouted.
The shadows merged into one shadow. The shadowy figure used a Dark Pulse attack that broke the windows of the Pokemon Center.
“We have to go stop him” Len said. But before he could rush out, a jet landed in the middle of Violet City.
“I am Lance, I command you to stop the spells and come with us or we will have to battle it out!” Lance said.
Falkner and Darkrai looked at him. Falkner started to laugh maniacally. “You can’t defeat us! Darkrai, attack!” Falkner shouted.
The Dark Pulse struck Lance and he crashed into the jet. “He’s too strong, we’ll have to retreat and come back later!” Lance said as he jumped into the jet.
“Darkrai, do the honors” Falkner said. Another Dark Pulse attack was blasted and it hit the jet which was about to fly away.
“Lance, the jet is falling, we won’t be able to escape!” the pilot shouted.
“Oh no, this can’t be the end” Lance said.
“I’m afraid it is” Falkner said. Darkrai used Shadow Ball and the jet exploded in mid-air.
“Haha, nice one Darkrai” Falkner said as he disappeared with Darkrai.
“Oh my gosh! It can’t be! They shot it down! We have to go see if they survived!” Len said as he ran out.
He was soaking wet. He went over to the destroyed jet. Lance was holding his hand out for help. “Help me” he said quietly.
“I knew someone had to survive. And you were closest to the window, it’s hard to believe!” said Len as he picked him up.
Ryan came over to help. They carried Lance back to the pokemon center and he was put in the serious medical part of the pokemon center.
“You guys, the night will be free on us. You saved Lance, the pokemon master! He’d be very proud of you” Nurse Joy said.
“He would be?” Len asked.
“Yes, unfortunately he is in a coma. The doctors don’t know when he’ll come out of it” Nurse Joy replied.
“My idol is in a coma! We have to save him! Help him!” Len said hysterically.
“Len, calm down, everything will be alright!” Ryan said. Then a girl with red hair walked over to them.
“I overheard and learned that your name was Len. You don’t have to worry, it will be okay” she said.
“Ya, ya, ya! That is what everyone says!” Len said angrily.
“My name is Kirara. You might not know me, but I know you all!” she said.
“You do?” they all said.
“Yes, my friend Solin fought Len. That is how I know” Kirara said.
“That is great! But we have to get going! The next gym awaits us!” Len said, as if he was in a hurry to get away from her.
“You know you can’t leave. They’ll keep you here by force if they have to” Kirara warned.
“Ya, I guess you’re right. Well, I guess I’ll go to my room, I’m pretty sleepy.” He yawned and headed off to bed.
“Crazy kid, huh?” Ryan said as he followed him. Fabrizio said nothing and followed Ryan.
“Weird people, really weird people” Kirara said as she walked over to her mom.
Wow, I didn't think I'd have two chapters in one day. But this is where the story pretty much starts. They have defeated the first gym, they realize Falkner is a freakishly evil person controlling Darkrai.
I'll give you a spoiler, the next Chapter is about them trying to find a Legendary Pokemon that will help lead them to Darkrai and Falkner.
Thank you. Well, for the spelling errors, I guess I'll just go back to Word and revise everything...
Ch. 12
Dark rain fell from the heavenly sky. The storm was imminent. The rain was a sign, a sign of something yet to come. Something that will wipe out the whole nation.
“Stupid storm, now we have to stay in the pokemon center for the night” whined Len.
“Oh, come down. Things could be much worse” said Ryan as he looked out the window. “Hey, isn’t that Falkner?” he said.
“What is he doing out there with that big jar?” questioned Len. Then, out of the jar shadows of all shapes appeared in front of him.
“Darkrai, oh Darkrai, appear before me oh great one!” Falkner shouted.
The shadows merged into one shadow. The shadowy figure used a Dark Pulse attack that broke the windows of the Pokemon Center.
“We have to go stop him” Len said. But before he could rush out, a jet landed in the middle of Violet City.
“I am Lance, I command you to stop the spells and come with us or we will have to battle it out!” Lance said.
Falkner and Darkrai looked at him. Falkner started to laugh maniacally. “You can’t defeat us! Darkrai, attack!” Falkner shouted.
The Dark Pulse struck Lance and he crashed into the jet. “He’s too strong, we’ll have to retreat and come back later!” Lance said as he jumped into the jet.
“Darkrai, do the honors” Falkner said. Another Dark Pulse attack was blasted and it hit the jet which was about to fly away.
“Lance, the jet is falling, we won’t be able to escape!” the pilot shouted.
“Oh no, this can’t be the end” Lance said.
“I’m afraid it is” Falkner said. Darkrai used Shadow Ball and the jet exploded in mid-air.
“Haha, nice one Darkrai” Falkner said as he disappeared with Darkrai.
“Oh my gosh! It can’t be! They shot it down! We have to go see if they survived!” Len said as he ran out.
He was soaking wet. He went over to the destroyed jet. Lance was holding his hand out for help. “Help me” he said quietly.
“I knew someone had to survive. And you were closest to the window, it’s hard to believe!” said Len as he picked him up.
Ryan came over to help. They carried Lance back to the pokemon center and he was put in the serious medical part of the pokemon center.
“You guys, the night will be free on us. You saved Lance, the pokemon master! He’d be very proud of you” Nurse Joy said.
“He would be?” Len asked.
“Yes, unfortunately he is in a coma. The doctors don’t know when he’ll come out of it” Nurse Joy replied.
“My idol is in a coma! We have to save him! Help him!” Len said hysterically.
“Len, calm down, everything will be alright!” Ryan said. Then a girl with red hair walked over to them.
“I overheard and learned that your name was Len. You don’t have to worry, it will be okay” she said.
“Ya, ya, ya! That is what everyone says!” Len said angrily.
“My name is Kirara. You might not know me, but I know you all!” she said.
“You do?” they all said.
“Yes, my friend Solin fought Len. That is how I know” Kirara said.
“That is great! But we have to get going! The next gym awaits us!” Len said, as if he was in a hurry to get away from her.
“You know you can’t leave. They’ll keep you here by force if they have to” Kirara warned.
“Ya, I guess you’re right. Well, I guess I’ll go to my room, I’m pretty sleepy.” He yawned and headed off to bed.
“Crazy kid, huh?” Ryan said as he followed him. Fabrizio said nothing and followed Ryan.
“Weird people, really weird people” Kirara said as she walked over to her mom.
Wow, I didn't think I'd have two chapters in one day. But this is where the story pretty much starts. They have defeated the first gym, they realize Falkner is a freakishly evil person controlling Darkrai.
I'll give you a spoiler, the next Chapter is about them trying to find a Legendary Pokemon that will help lead them to Darkrai and Falkner.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 12)
Wait, I don't say anything during this whole chapter!
WORST CHAPTER EVER
j/k, nice chapter. But why is Falkner evil? And how did he get Darkrai into a jar? And why am I asking you when I know you're just going to say 'You'll find out later'?
Wait, I don't say anything during this whole chapter!
WORST CHAPTER EVER
j/k, nice chapter. But why is Falkner evil? And how did he get Darkrai into a jar? And why am I asking you when I know you're just going to say 'You'll find out later'?
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 12)
Falkner became evil because he was tired from losing to weaklings that came to him for their first gym badge. He acquired the power of evil from his time away over the last sumer. He found a cave with a jar. He picked the jar up, and Darkrai was hidden inside. The legendary pokemon put him in there because his power was too much.
I hope that answers your questions...
Falkner became evil because he was tired from losing to weaklings that came to him for their first gym badge. He acquired the power of evil from his time away over the last sumer. He found a cave with a jar. He picked the jar up, and Darkrai was hidden inside. The legendary pokemon put him in there because his power was too much.
I hope that answers your questions...
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 12)
Ch. 13
The sun rose from the East and Fabrizio got out of his bed. "Wow, that was a good night sleep except the fact that Lance was almost killed and a ferocious pokemon is now in the wild" Fabrizio said to himself.
"Come on Z, we have to get going to Azelea Town!" Len complained. Fabrizio put on his clothes and joined Ryan and Len outside of the Pokemon Center.
"So, we just need to pass those trees over there and we'll get to the cave!" Len said. He ran and turned a wrong turn, and both Ryan and Fabrizio followed him.
They went past two identical trees and they found a cave! "Wow, and when I thought we took the wrong turn!" Len said.
They entered the cave and small rocks and shadows were creeping around the cave. "Are you sure you took the right turn?"Ryan asked. They all looked back.
Then a huge Fire Blast passed right over their heads. "I believe you guys are in the wrong cave" said a deep voice.
They all looked forward again. A huge flaming wolf like pokemon was standing on a rock. "Is it, is it really him?" Len wondered to himself.
"Yes, it really is me. Now, if you would like, you can escort yourself out of here, or I'll burn you to cinders!" it shouted.
"Entei, please, if you could just hear me out!" Ryan shouted.
"Get out of here! I don't want to see your faces ever again!" he growled.
"We need your help to stop Darkrai! Please!" Len shouted. Entei was furious inside, but his expression seemed like he wanted to help them.
"Darkrai? He's back?" Entei asked. Len nodded. "Then it is done. But you must become stronger! Go defeat some of the other gyms, at least the 6th gym. Until then, us Legendary Pokemon will try to fight him off" Entei said.
"Alright, we'll do that!" Fabrizio said. Fabrizio, Len, and Ryan left the cave. "Alright, so did you hear what they said. They'll fight him off" Fabrizio said.
"OK, but when we beat the 6th gym, we must fight the evil! We'll become stronger!" Len said, creating more hope.
Real short chapter, but now, we'll be having chapters from Legendary Pokemon points of view and Len, Fabrizio, and Len's points of view.
Ch. 13
The sun rose from the East and Fabrizio got out of his bed. "Wow, that was a good night sleep except the fact that Lance was almost killed and a ferocious pokemon is now in the wild" Fabrizio said to himself.
"Come on Z, we have to get going to Azelea Town!" Len complained. Fabrizio put on his clothes and joined Ryan and Len outside of the Pokemon Center.
"So, we just need to pass those trees over there and we'll get to the cave!" Len said. He ran and turned a wrong turn, and both Ryan and Fabrizio followed him.
They went past two identical trees and they found a cave! "Wow, and when I thought we took the wrong turn!" Len said.
They entered the cave and small rocks and shadows were creeping around the cave. "Are you sure you took the right turn?"Ryan asked. They all looked back.
Then a huge Fire Blast passed right over their heads. "I believe you guys are in the wrong cave" said a deep voice.
They all looked forward again. A huge flaming wolf like pokemon was standing on a rock. "Is it, is it really him?" Len wondered to himself.
"Yes, it really is me. Now, if you would like, you can escort yourself out of here, or I'll burn you to cinders!" it shouted.
"Entei, please, if you could just hear me out!" Ryan shouted.
"Get out of here! I don't want to see your faces ever again!" he growled.
"We need your help to stop Darkrai! Please!" Len shouted. Entei was furious inside, but his expression seemed like he wanted to help them.
"Darkrai? He's back?" Entei asked. Len nodded. "Then it is done. But you must become stronger! Go defeat some of the other gyms, at least the 6th gym. Until then, us Legendary Pokemon will try to fight him off" Entei said.
"Alright, we'll do that!" Fabrizio said. Fabrizio, Len, and Ryan left the cave. "Alright, so did you hear what they said. They'll fight him off" Fabrizio said.
"OK, but when we beat the 6th gym, we must fight the evil! We'll become stronger!" Len said, creating more hope.
Real short chapter, but now, we'll be having chapters from Legendary Pokemon points of view and Len, Fabrizio, and Len's points of view.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 13)
You shouldn't not put up chapters just because no one has commented. You post it because you like to write, not to hear others opinions. Still, good chapter.
You shouldn't not put up chapters just because no one has commented. You post it because you like to write, not to hear others opinions. Still, good chapter.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 13)
I know that, I do write because I like to. But if nobody comments, I might as well just keep writing by myself and not post it.
Alright, I'll put up the next chapter right now. It is from the Legendary Pokemon's point of view.
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Ch. 14
Entei appeared on the huge, open, watery pathway. "What is it, Entei?" said a deep voice.
"Darkrai, he's returned" Entei whispered.
The ground rumbled and the water arose and created a huge wave. But the wave just stood in mid-air. Two glowing eyes appeared.
A huge dragon-like pokemon flew out of the water and the whole wave crashed down. The dragon landed on the ground right next to Entei.
It opened his wings and a huge Air Wave was blown across the sea. "What will we do now, Lugia?" Entei asked.
"We wait until the storm is more imminent. Until then, recruit the rest of the Legendary Pokemon and make sure they are up to the job" Lugia replied.
"Yes, sir" Entei said. Lugia flew into the air and dived back into the water and disappeared.
Entei disappeard and appeared on an Electric Field. "Raikou, we need you" Entei said.
"Why? What is it now?" Raikou asked. He walked over to the same ground level as Entei.
"It is Darkrai. He's returned. You know the gym leader Falkner?" Entei asked. Raikou was shocked!
"What does Falkner have to do with this?" Raikou asked. Entei walked closer to Raikou.
"I was investigating the area. I found him, but Lugia didn't let me attack. It isn't the real Falkner. It is a fake. The real one was murdered" Entei said.
Raikou was even more shocked than before. "You can count me in" Raikou replied.
"Thank you" Entei said. He then disappeared and appeared again near a waterfall. "Hello, Suicune."
"Ughh, what is it now? The last time you saw me was when we had to lock Darkrai up" Suicune said.
"That is exactly why I am here. He escaped. I'll explain things later. If you come with us, we will meet with Raikou and investigate this more. So, are you in?" Entei asked.
"I'm in, definitely. Let's go!" Suicune said. They both disappeared and were with Raikou.
"You guys ready?" Raikou asked. They both nodded back. "So let's go" Raikou said. All 3 pokemon disappeared. The Legendary Revolution has begun.
I know that, I do write because I like to. But if nobody comments, I might as well just keep writing by myself and not post it.
Alright, I'll put up the next chapter right now. It is from the Legendary Pokemon's point of view.
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Ch. 14
Entei appeared on the huge, open, watery pathway. "What is it, Entei?" said a deep voice.
"Darkrai, he's returned" Entei whispered.
The ground rumbled and the water arose and created a huge wave. But the wave just stood in mid-air. Two glowing eyes appeared.
A huge dragon-like pokemon flew out of the water and the whole wave crashed down. The dragon landed on the ground right next to Entei.
It opened his wings and a huge Air Wave was blown across the sea. "What will we do now, Lugia?" Entei asked.
"We wait until the storm is more imminent. Until then, recruit the rest of the Legendary Pokemon and make sure they are up to the job" Lugia replied.
"Yes, sir" Entei said. Lugia flew into the air and dived back into the water and disappeared.
Entei disappeard and appeared on an Electric Field. "Raikou, we need you" Entei said.
"Why? What is it now?" Raikou asked. He walked over to the same ground level as Entei.
"It is Darkrai. He's returned. You know the gym leader Falkner?" Entei asked. Raikou was shocked!
"What does Falkner have to do with this?" Raikou asked. Entei walked closer to Raikou.
"I was investigating the area. I found him, but Lugia didn't let me attack. It isn't the real Falkner. It is a fake. The real one was murdered" Entei said.
Raikou was even more shocked than before. "You can count me in" Raikou replied.
"Thank you" Entei said. He then disappeared and appeared again near a waterfall. "Hello, Suicune."
"Ughh, what is it now? The last time you saw me was when we had to lock Darkrai up" Suicune said.
"That is exactly why I am here. He escaped. I'll explain things later. If you come with us, we will meet with Raikou and investigate this more. So, are you in?" Entei asked.
"I'm in, definitely. Let's go!" Suicune said. They both disappeared and were with Raikou.
"You guys ready?" Raikou asked. They both nodded back. "So let's go" Raikou said. All 3 pokemon disappeared. The Legendary Revolution has begun.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 13)
Ch. 15
The three boys were standing face to face with the opening of the correct cave. "Well, we got lucky since we didn’t run into that Kirara girl. She was at the pokemon center at Violet City! Hopefully, she isn’t in this one right here" Len hoped.
Just his luck. Kirara stepped through the sliding doors and gave a big smile. "Hi!" she shouted in joy.
Len groaned. "Ughh, hello." Len didn't seem too happy to see her.
"Well, since we are both here, how about a pokemon battle?" she asked. Len looked at his pokeball. He knew he could never refuse a challenge.
"Alright, go Magby!" Len shouted. Kirara did not say anything. Was she thinking of what pokemon to send out next?
"Well, I have my mind set! Go Torchic!" she shouted. The flaming little squirt made a mean face, but Magby was not scared at all!
"Magby, use Tackle!" Len shouted. Kirara said nothing, but only nodded her head. Torchic put out his beak.
"Magby, watch out!" Len shouted. Magby ran right into Torchic's beak. It was a pretty quick battle. Magby was wiped out from the crushing blow to the stomach and then the bad landing on his head.
"Maybe you should train some more. You beat my friend Solin, but not me. I feel strong" she said. She giggled into the cave and the echoes could be heard from outside.
"Wow, that was quite comical" Fabrizio said as he entered the pokemon center.
"Just get your pokemon healed. We need to get going" Ryan hurried. Len got his pokemon healed and they zoomed into the cave.
Zubat's and Geodude's were crawling all over the place. Water dripped from the ceiling. Trainers were battling out their hearts. It was crazy, but thankfully they crossed the cave without trouble.
When they saw sunlight again, they looked for a sign telling them where Azelea Town was. There was a small fence with a HUGE sign on it. It wrote "Azelea Town, left."
"Alright, that is a pretty bold statement, let's get going" Ryan said. As they were passing the trees, they saw a small cave opening and 4 people talking to each other.
One man had an R on his shirt. One girl had a totally blue outfit. One girl was wearing a shirt with a G on it. And another boy was wearing a completely red outfit.
"Well, seems like Azelea has style" Fabrizio joked. He glanced at them one more time, and he knew that face was familiar.
"Isn't that Falkner? The one in the shirt that says G?" Fabrizio said. The man glanced back at him. A dark void was around him. It wasn't like the attack but more like Dark Energy. A Dark glow surrounded his malicious body.
"Alright, we'll ignore them. We just got to beat the gym leader and then we'll handle this" Ryan said.
They entered the city and Team Rocket had taken over all of it. "Wait a second! This can't be! Their plan to take over the world has nothing to do with Darkrai. They are just using his power. When it is all over, Darkrai will be no more" Fabrizio told both Len and Ryan.
"Hey, you over there! Hand over your pokemon!" the Rocket Grunt said.
"Not on my watch! Go Charmander!" Fabrizio said. His tail was flaming bigger than usual.
"So, you wanna fight? Go Arbok!" the trainer said. The Arbok wrapped around Charmander in a chokehold.
"Charmander, Fire Spin!" Fabrizio commanded. The fire was exerting from Charmander's body and got Charmander out of Arbok's hold.
"Arbok, give him a lovely Poison Sting!" the grunt shouted. Little poison darts came flying at Charmander.
Charmander closed his eyes and the attack hit him. There was an explosion and smoke was everywhere.
There was something shining in the smoke. It was visible, very visible. "Charmander?" Fabrizio wondered.
The smoke had disappeared and a strong as ever looking pokemon was looking straight at Arbok. "You're no Charmander anymore, you're a Charmeleon! Now, use Dragon Rage!" Fabrizio said with lots of confidence.
A small energy ball was charging up in Charmeleon's mouth. "End this now!" Fabrizio said. The immensely strong attack struck Arbok with great force, knocking him out.
"Leave this Town before I destroy all of you!" Fabrizio commanded. Just saying that, they all fled. "Well, shall we head to the gym?"
Well, no comment on Ch. 14? Well, please read it and comment. I also just put up Ch. 15, don't forget about this story. You're gonna make me cry
Ch. 15
The three boys were standing face to face with the opening of the correct cave. "Well, we got lucky since we didn’t run into that Kirara girl. She was at the pokemon center at Violet City! Hopefully, she isn’t in this one right here" Len hoped.
Just his luck. Kirara stepped through the sliding doors and gave a big smile. "Hi!" she shouted in joy.
Len groaned. "Ughh, hello." Len didn't seem too happy to see her.
"Well, since we are both here, how about a pokemon battle?" she asked. Len looked at his pokeball. He knew he could never refuse a challenge.
"Alright, go Magby!" Len shouted. Kirara did not say anything. Was she thinking of what pokemon to send out next?
"Well, I have my mind set! Go Torchic!" she shouted. The flaming little squirt made a mean face, but Magby was not scared at all!
"Magby, use Tackle!" Len shouted. Kirara said nothing, but only nodded her head. Torchic put out his beak.
"Magby, watch out!" Len shouted. Magby ran right into Torchic's beak. It was a pretty quick battle. Magby was wiped out from the crushing blow to the stomach and then the bad landing on his head.
"Maybe you should train some more. You beat my friend Solin, but not me. I feel strong" she said. She giggled into the cave and the echoes could be heard from outside.
"Wow, that was quite comical" Fabrizio said as he entered the pokemon center.
"Just get your pokemon healed. We need to get going" Ryan hurried. Len got his pokemon healed and they zoomed into the cave.
Zubat's and Geodude's were crawling all over the place. Water dripped from the ceiling. Trainers were battling out their hearts. It was crazy, but thankfully they crossed the cave without trouble.
When they saw sunlight again, they looked for a sign telling them where Azelea Town was. There was a small fence with a HUGE sign on it. It wrote "Azelea Town, left."
"Alright, that is a pretty bold statement, let's get going" Ryan said. As they were passing the trees, they saw a small cave opening and 4 people talking to each other.
One man had an R on his shirt. One girl had a totally blue outfit. One girl was wearing a shirt with a G on it. And another boy was wearing a completely red outfit.
"Well, seems like Azelea has style" Fabrizio joked. He glanced at them one more time, and he knew that face was familiar.
"Isn't that Falkner? The one in the shirt that says G?" Fabrizio said. The man glanced back at him. A dark void was around him. It wasn't like the attack but more like Dark Energy. A Dark glow surrounded his malicious body.
"Alright, we'll ignore them. We just got to beat the gym leader and then we'll handle this" Ryan said.
They entered the city and Team Rocket had taken over all of it. "Wait a second! This can't be! Their plan to take over the world has nothing to do with Darkrai. They are just using his power. When it is all over, Darkrai will be no more" Fabrizio told both Len and Ryan.
"Hey, you over there! Hand over your pokemon!" the Rocket Grunt said.
"Not on my watch! Go Charmander!" Fabrizio said. His tail was flaming bigger than usual.
"So, you wanna fight? Go Arbok!" the trainer said. The Arbok wrapped around Charmander in a chokehold.
"Charmander, Fire Spin!" Fabrizio commanded. The fire was exerting from Charmander's body and got Charmander out of Arbok's hold.
"Arbok, give him a lovely Poison Sting!" the grunt shouted. Little poison darts came flying at Charmander.
Charmander closed his eyes and the attack hit him. There was an explosion and smoke was everywhere.
There was something shining in the smoke. It was visible, very visible. "Charmander?" Fabrizio wondered.
The smoke had disappeared and a strong as ever looking pokemon was looking straight at Arbok. "You're no Charmander anymore, you're a Charmeleon! Now, use Dragon Rage!" Fabrizio said with lots of confidence.
A small energy ball was charging up in Charmeleon's mouth. "End this now!" Fabrizio said. The immensely strong attack struck Arbok with great force, knocking him out.
"Leave this Town before I destroy all of you!" Fabrizio commanded. Just saying that, they all fled. "Well, shall we head to the gym?"
Well, no comment on Ch. 14? Well, please read it and comment. I also just put up Ch. 15, don't forget about this story. You're gonna make me cry
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 15)
Yea I OWNED them there Rocket Grunts! Good chapter, I liked it alot.
Yea I OWNED them there Rocket Grunts! Good chapter, I liked it alot.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 15)
Ch. 16
They entered the gym. It was filled with Bug trainers. "Hey, aren’t you the one that got rid of all those Galactic grunts?" one of the bug trainers asked.
"Yes, that was me" Fabrizio replied. The bug trainer zoomed off and grabbed an older person's leg.
"Is that your kid?" Len asked. The man nodded. "Are you Bugsy?" Len asked. The man nodded, again.
"Are you here to challenge me?" he asked. All three nodded. "Well, so you know, my pokemon are still being healed from the horrid event. But I still have three pokemon left. We'll have a one on one battle. Got it?"Bugsy said.
"I'm going up first" Fabrizio said. He then sent out Charmeleon. Fire blazed around his small horn.
"Well, then I'll sent out Scyther!"Bugsy said. The pokemon was like Fabrizio's Scyther, except way stronger!
The Scyther made the first move and used Slash on Charmeleon. Scyther was extremely fast and powerful.
"Come on Charmeleon, let's heat this battle up!" Fabrizio said. Charmeleon's body became red and he used Fire Spin.
The whole stadium became filled with Red Smoke. Charmeleon could see easily, though. Charmeleon grabbed Scyther's hand and threw him into the air.
He then generated enough power into one Flamethrower attack and blasted it out. The burning flames crushed Scyther.
Scyther dropped onto the ground. "Looks like you haven't trained him strong enough" smirked Fabrizio.
"This is only the beginning" Bugsy said. Scyther got up and began to flash. "Now, Flash Cannon!" Bugsy commanded.
The metal cannon hit Charmeleon with a crushing blow. Charmeleon flew back and hit the edge of the stadium.
"Charmeleon, use Exerting Flames!" Fabrizio commanded. Charmeleon ran towards Scyther and grabbed him.
He jumped into the air and exerted all the flames he had stored. Scyther was burned and was dealt with a lot of damage.
"Scyther, show him your Final Power Crush Attack!" Bugsy said. Scyther gathered Energy between his two blade hands.
He lunged at Charmeleon and his blades began to shine. Then his whole body, too!
Right before Charmeleon was about to get hit, Scyther disappeared. "What happened?" Fabrizio wondered.
Scyther appeared right above Charmeleon and dropped onto Charmeleon with a strong crush! "Wow, that is one talented Scyther. But Charmeleon still has some life left!" Fabrizio said.
Charmeleon barely got up and lunged at Scyther. "Wow, he thinks he can pull off my move" Bugsy thought.
"Scyther, just stand in place, you'll know what to do" Bugsy said. But he underestimated Charmeleon's intelligence.
Charmeleon was about to do the exact same move as Scyther, but then got another idea. "Now, Charmeleon!" Fabrizio said.
"Wait, what are you doing?" Bugsy shouted. Charmeleon wasn't using Scyther's move. He was smarter than that.
Charmeleon slammed into Scyther head on. This finally knocked out Scyther and he slid on the ground. "Wow, that was an amazing battle. You are a truly strong trainer. Here is the Hive Badge" Bugsy said proudly.
"Thank you" Fabrizio said. Bugsy took out another pokeball. "Ryan, you're up next" Fabrizio said.
Ryan walked onto the stadium. "So, this is it. I will defeat you and gain my second Gym Badge" he said.
"Don't get too cocky" Bugsy replied.
Thanks for the compliment...here is Ch. 16.
Ch. 16
They entered the gym. It was filled with Bug trainers. "Hey, aren’t you the one that got rid of all those Galactic grunts?" one of the bug trainers asked.
"Yes, that was me" Fabrizio replied. The bug trainer zoomed off and grabbed an older person's leg.
"Is that your kid?" Len asked. The man nodded. "Are you Bugsy?" Len asked. The man nodded, again.
"Are you here to challenge me?" he asked. All three nodded. "Well, so you know, my pokemon are still being healed from the horrid event. But I still have three pokemon left. We'll have a one on one battle. Got it?"Bugsy said.
"I'm going up first" Fabrizio said. He then sent out Charmeleon. Fire blazed around his small horn.
"Well, then I'll sent out Scyther!"Bugsy said. The pokemon was like Fabrizio's Scyther, except way stronger!
The Scyther made the first move and used Slash on Charmeleon. Scyther was extremely fast and powerful.
"Come on Charmeleon, let's heat this battle up!" Fabrizio said. Charmeleon's body became red and he used Fire Spin.
The whole stadium became filled with Red Smoke. Charmeleon could see easily, though. Charmeleon grabbed Scyther's hand and threw him into the air.
He then generated enough power into one Flamethrower attack and blasted it out. The burning flames crushed Scyther.
Scyther dropped onto the ground. "Looks like you haven't trained him strong enough" smirked Fabrizio.
"This is only the beginning" Bugsy said. Scyther got up and began to flash. "Now, Flash Cannon!" Bugsy commanded.
The metal cannon hit Charmeleon with a crushing blow. Charmeleon flew back and hit the edge of the stadium.
"Charmeleon, use Exerting Flames!" Fabrizio commanded. Charmeleon ran towards Scyther and grabbed him.
He jumped into the air and exerted all the flames he had stored. Scyther was burned and was dealt with a lot of damage.
"Scyther, show him your Final Power Crush Attack!" Bugsy said. Scyther gathered Energy between his two blade hands.
He lunged at Charmeleon and his blades began to shine. Then his whole body, too!
Right before Charmeleon was about to get hit, Scyther disappeared. "What happened?" Fabrizio wondered.
Scyther appeared right above Charmeleon and dropped onto Charmeleon with a strong crush! "Wow, that is one talented Scyther. But Charmeleon still has some life left!" Fabrizio said.
Charmeleon barely got up and lunged at Scyther. "Wow, he thinks he can pull off my move" Bugsy thought.
"Scyther, just stand in place, you'll know what to do" Bugsy said. But he underestimated Charmeleon's intelligence.
Charmeleon was about to do the exact same move as Scyther, but then got another idea. "Now, Charmeleon!" Fabrizio said.
"Wait, what are you doing?" Bugsy shouted. Charmeleon wasn't using Scyther's move. He was smarter than that.
Charmeleon slammed into Scyther head on. This finally knocked out Scyther and he slid on the ground. "Wow, that was an amazing battle. You are a truly strong trainer. Here is the Hive Badge" Bugsy said proudly.
"Thank you" Fabrizio said. Bugsy took out another pokeball. "Ryan, you're up next" Fabrizio said.
Ryan walked onto the stadium. "So, this is it. I will defeat you and gain my second Gym Badge" he said.
"Don't get too cocky" Bugsy replied.
Thanks for the compliment...here is Ch. 16.
RE: Pokemon: Lunar Legends (Ch. 15)
Now I own Bugsy too! Sheesh, can I get any MORE awesome?
Now I own Bugsy too! Sheesh, can I get any MORE awesome?
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