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WARNING: DON'T POST ON POKEBEACH SINCE IT IS AGAINS THE RULES! THIS IS FOR POKECOMMUNITY ONLY! This is rated R for a reason, so please don't read it if you can't stand thinking about let alone reading about blood. The first few chapters make look harmless, but it does get...

@DNA: I don't know if I should take that as a compliment or as an insult... Anyways, congratulations aggiegwyn and Unique Username. Loved your stories. =D

RE: The Official PokéBeach Writer's Corner Competition 2011- The submissions have been posted! These are all amazing. I think I'm going to lose. But now I had more experience, I think I'm ready for the next one.

RE: The Official PokéBeach Writer's Corner Competition 2011- The submissions have been posted! I'm just curious, when do you think the judging will be over? Also, I just realized we all have 3/5 chance of at least placing. =D Also, good luck to all.

RE: The Official PokéBeach Writer's Corner Competition 2011- Time is running out! PM me all submissions NOW! I just sent mine in. I thought I had more time...I hope I'm not too late. Dx

RE: The Official PokéBeach Writer's Corner Competition 2011- Only two more days left! PM ST17 your submission! @SinnohTrainer: Oh really now? Then I have more time! =D I'll try to get it done today though...It's 10 pm here... Edit: I'm 3/4 done. Should be finished soon.

RE: The Official PokéBeach Writer's Corner Competition 2011- Only two more days left! PM ST17 your submission! I haven't completed mine yet, but I am worried about the word limit... Also, I just converted my time to EST, and I just find out that it's Friday where I live, but it's Saturday in...

RE: The Official PokéBeach Writer's Corner Competition 2011 I'll try...I hope I have enough motivation to get it done though...

Was it really necessary to make chapter one like this? It's not bad if it has a purpose... I was confused because of the jumps forwards and backwards.

RE: The Lounge @Zyflair: I guess I've experienced it, but I've never heard of it until now. =/

RE: The Lounge @aggiewyn: The white light reflected off the snow seemed to be a cold, winter light that shined off the ground. There's a couple problems. I don't think light can be cold, and I've never heard of a winter light. What does this winter light look like? Is it just light in...

RE: The Lounge I think introducing the character's name in a later period is fine as long as it's not too far away from the beginning, but if it seems like you're trying to avoid saying the character's name for no reason or you could have mentioned the character's name earlier on without...

RE: The Lounge @Hatman: No. Introduction does not equal information time. You explain names, settings, and other description through showing. You don't say, "My name is Ash Ketchum". Instead, you can have someone else call out his name, or some other way. You don't say, "I live in an area with...

RE: The Lounge @ShadowLugia: Pro-tip: Show, don't tell. Telling: The assassin was a skilled killer. Showing: The assassin swiftly sliced the man's neck with such precision that the cut turned out to be a perfect straight line. Know the difference. @Hatman: You shouldn't have any reason to...

The turn off switch is there for a reason. 3D is nice eye candy, but if it's causing problems I'll probably turn it off(I'm very forgetful, so I might unknowingly play 1 hour with the 3D on. >.<). Besides, I'm playing the 3DS for the games, not the 3D.