Writing Pokemon The Movie 13th The War of the Apocalyptic Arceus

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RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Why, I'm very Flattered. Coming from a great Fan Fic Writer that means alot.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Very Good!
I like the opening scene and how your bringing back old charecters
so far !0/!0 (10/10)
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Well Tonio and Alice's wedding is going to be a big part in this.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

I also cant wait to see if theres a bigger fight between the legands!
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Hehehe, you will see...

Jirachi did say...

THIS MIGHT MEAN THE END OF THE WORLD.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Yea but what do some of the legands care
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Their God is Coming. The most powerful deity in existence.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

True but if the world dies arceus will create a new world for his children
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

All will come in time,

Is Arceus Good?
Will the world be destroyed?
Will Ash and Co. Face a Fatality?

There Is More Yeses in that than you expect...


Muhhahahaha...
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Muehehehehehehehehehe
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

I'm working on the next scene; Expect Team Rocket!
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

lol, sounds awfully dementing...
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

Scene: Inside Terdeheeel Castle Gardens, with Team Rocket.

James: Groowl. I'm starving. Meowth did you bring the lady fingers
Meowth: Belchhh. What, lady fingers? Oh, Jessie the fat lump ate the all.
Jessie: HOW DARE YOU CALL ME A FAT LUMP???
Meowth: Waaa!
James: Let's take a bathroom break.
Meowth: Jessie scared it outta me! I'm good.
James: You might be a cat, but you look like a flea bag.
Meowth: Whadaya expect, we've been on steakout for days.
James: Liar. I haven't had a steak in weeks.
Meowth: (Slaps Face) Whatever. But-
Jessie: SHHHHH! Someone's coming
James: Hide!
Bush Ruffles

The King arrives at the fountain of the garden.

King: Well, well, well, it seems that it was just yesterday you came to me and asked for a job, Tonio.
Tonio: Yes, and I am grate for it. But I really need the gardens for the wedding. I want the hills and flowers to collide in beautiful scenery just like Alice's beauty.
King: Not a manly word came from that. But for $5,000, deal.
Tonio: $5,000? Are you joking
King: HOW DARE YOU DEFY MY FACTUAL IMPULSE FROM ANYTHING!
Tonio: Sorry, it's just a lot of mo-

The chat was interrupted by lightning on the horizon.

King: Lightning? Wow, I can't believe it's raining.
Tonio: Sir, those clouds are, purple and, red, and black, what th-

BOOOOM!!

Lightning struck the ground in mad desperation. The garden was burning.

Tonio: Oh my god!
King: Let's get out of here!

James: Wusses. A little electricity isn't something to cry about.

(Flashbacks of hundreds of times Pikachu has blasted them off with a mere thunderbolt)

James/Jessie/Meowth: Let's Skedaddle!
 
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Scene: Inside Terdeheeel Castle Gardens, with Team Rocket.

James: Groowl. I'm starving. Meowth did you bring the lady fingers
Meowth: Belchhh. What, lady fingers? Oh, Jessie the fat lump ate the all.
Jessie: HOW DARE YOU CALL ME A FAT LUMP???
Meowth: Waaa!
James: Let's take a bathroom break.
Meowth: Jessie scared it outta me! I'm good.
James: You might be a cat, but you look like a flea bag.
Meowth: Whadaya expect, we've been on steakout for days.
James: Liar. I haven't had a steak in weeks.
Meowth: (Slaps Face) Whatever. But-
Jessie: SHHHHH! Someone's coming
James: Hide!
Bush Ruffles

The King arrives at the fountain of the garden.

King: Well, well, well, it seems that it was just yesterday you came to me and asked for a job, Tonio.
Tonio: Yes, and I am grate for it. But I really need the gardens for the wedding. I want the hills and flowers to collide in beautiful scenery just like Alice's beauty.
King: Not a manly word came from that. But for $5,000, deal.
Tonio: $5,000? Are you joking
King: HOW DARE YOU DEFY MY FACTUAL IMPULSE FROM ANYTHING!
Tonio: Sorry, it's just a lot of mo-

The chat was interrupted by lightning on the horizon.

King: Lightning? Wow, I can't believe it's raining.
Tonio: Sir, those clouds are, purple and, red, and black, what th-

BOOOOM!!

Lightning struck the ground in mad desperation. The garden was burning.

Tonio: Oh my god!
King: Let's get out of here!

James: Wusses. A little electricity isn't something to cry about.

(Flashbacks of hundreds of times Pikachu has blasted them off with a mere thunderbolt)

James/Jessie/Meowth: Let's Skedaddle!



James: Groowl. I'm starving. Meowth did you bring the lady fingers
Meowth: Belchhh. What, lady fingers? Oh, Jessie the fat lump ate the all.
Jessie: HOW DARE YOU CALL ME A FAT LUMP???
Meowth: Waaa!
James: Let's take a bathroom break.
Meowth: Jessie scared it outta me! I'm good.
James: You might be a cat, but you look like a flea bag.
Meowth: Whadaya expect, we've been on steakout for days.
James: Liar. I haven't had a steak in weeks.
Meowth: (Slaps Face) Whatever. But-
Jessie: SHHHHH! Someone's coming
James: Hide!
lol

i loved the bathroom part xd
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

I thought it'd be funny. The steakout part's funnier.

Btw, sorry for not updating, I was at Office Depot getting school supplies, and my sister took 4 stinking hours. Hurricane's gone, yah!

But school's here ftl.
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

pls post new chapt!


Edit: *Scene*
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

I might. It'll be kinda short, though. Must ready for school tomorrow. I'm in Gifted.

But next scene: The Castle is Setting Up
 
RE: Pokemon The Movie 13th The Wrath of the Universal King, ARCEUS

I'm making the scene don't worry...
 
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