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nice....so ummm where's Ricky??? he only had 1 line...*siffles*
nice....so ummm where's Ricky??? he only had 1 line...*siffles*
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RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!
Lol....
Probably he will give you a BIGGER line in the next episode/chapter
Lol....
Probably he will give you a BIGGER line in the next episode/chapter
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yes, Ricky does have a bigger part. If you payed attenetion to chapter one, you will see that Ricky is on the first mission, just like everyone else. This will not always happen. it is hard to write the part of six characters at one time throughout an entire chapter. after this upcoming chapter, expect no more than three trainers per mission.
yes, Ricky does have a bigger part. If you payed attenetion to chapter one, you will see that Ricky is on the first mission, just like everyone else. This will not always happen. it is hard to write the part of six characters at one time throughout an entire chapter. after this upcoming chapter, expect no more than three trainers per mission.
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!
So when's the episode/chapter???
So when's the episode/chapter???
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!
on its way. these chapters will take some time, especially today (My dad is getting a pool put into our backyard!)
on its way. these chapters will take some time, especially today (My dad is getting a pool put into our backyard!
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Chapter 2: The Prince of the Sea!
In the meeting room…
“I have been contacted by the Fiore Region,” said Abad.
“Really?” said Shadow, “I heard that there aren’t many trainers there.”
“Which is when the Pokémon Rangers called. They say that one of there rangers, Jack Walker, was entrusted with a very peculiar Pokémon egg. His mission was to get it to Fall City, where one of their top professors would examine it. However, he hasn’t arrived there yet.”
“So,” said James, “He wants us to send someone out to help them. You see, normally, we wouldn’t waste our time, except for that THIS is the egg:”
He turned on a computer monitor, in which and egg appeared.
“No…” said Shadow.
“That looks like a-” said Jay.
“Manaphy egg,” said Max.
“Exactly,” said Abad, “It is a legendary Pokémon egg, which means this is probably the work of the LPC.”
“So who’s going out?” asked Shadow.
“I will be having Max go on all these missions, as he is most acquainted with the LPC. The five of us will be going, along with Raptor, one of our newest recruits.”
“When do we leave?” asked Max.
“Tomorrow morning.”
Later that evening…
Max was outside by a river, and he had his Squirtle with him, a Pokémon who he rarely, if ever used.
“Here,” he said to him, “Take this to Lindsey,” he handed Squirtle a small box, “Make sure she gets it.”
“Squirtle-Squirt!”
The little Pokémon dove into the river, and sped off toward the NPZ.
The next morning, the gang went off toward Fiore, and they rode on none other than the black Rayquaza.
“Last night,” said Abad, “The Rangers sent me his last coordinates. We’ll start there.”
They landed on a beach, and Rayquaza went above the clouds.
There were tracks leading into the water.
“Masika,” said Max.
“Must be,” said Shadow.
“Aggron, Mew, lets go!” yelled Max.
“Vaporeon, Dragonite, c’mon out!” yelled Abad.
“Feraligatr, I choose you!” yelled Raptor.
“Alright guys,” said Max, “Go down, see if you can find anything.”
“Max,” said Abad, “Have Mew Transform into Kyogre, it may lure them out.”
“You heard him Mew.”
The Pokémon dove into the water, and as Mew did, he Transformed into the legendary Pokémon of the water, Kyogre.
The five Pokémon stayed under for a few minutes, and came back up, and Mew transformed back as he did.
“Well?” asked Ricky.
Mew sat down on the sand, and then, used Kinesis to write in the sand. Shadow read it out loud.
“It says,” said Shadow, “ “They have gone too deep. Only Aggron was able to go farther due to his steel hide. None of the others got too far because of the severe pressure.” ”
“Great,” said Abad, “Now what?”
“I’ve got it!” said James as the group turned to look at him, “Abad, Max, use your Mews to create a psychic bubble around us. Perhaps then we can find there underwater lair, and then they can teleport us inside. Once we’re in, we snatch the Manaphy egg faster than greased Jolteons using Quick Attack!”
Shadow’s Jolteon popped out, and Thunderbolted James.
“JOLT!!!!”
“I meant metaphorically!” he yelled.
“Jolteon, return!” yelled Shadow.
“Anyway…” said Abad, “Lets do this! Go, Mew!”
Abad’s blue Mew came out, and then, his Mew and Max’s Mew created a pink and a blue psychic bubble. But, before anyone could get into them, the two Mews began bouncing back and forth on them!
“Um…” said Jay.
“I never thought the most powerful Pokémon would be this cute or playful,” said Ricky.
“Trust us,” said Max.
“Neither did we,” said Abad.
After a few minutes of playtime, the gang was plunging into the deepest, darkest depths of the ocean.
It was very dark, and they couldn’t see anything.
“I’ve got this,” said Shadow, “Go, Umbreon!”
Umbreon came out, and the darkness caused the yellow ring markings on his body to glow a bright light.
All around them, they saw Gyarados, Dewgong, Lapras, Relicanth, Wailord, Huntail, Kingdra, and other such Water-Types swimming all around them.
“Wow…” said Jay.
“It’s beautiful down here!” said Shadow.
“Sure is,” said Ricky, “……Look!”
They all looked below them, and saw a sub almost as big as the flying machine from two days earlier.
“Teleport!” Max and Abad said together.
The whole gang disappeared.
When they reappeared, they were in some kind of cargo room. In the center, a pedestal with the Manaphy egg!
“Yes!” yelled Jay, “Nice! Right on target!”
He ran to grab the egg.
“Jay! No! there might be a-” said Ricky as Jay grabbed it. A siren went off, and Ricky finished in a high, squeaky voice, “Trap!”
Within seconds, they were surrounded with LPC goons, and then, there was a break in them, and a girl with blue hair and all blue and black clothes walked through.
“Masika!” yelled Max.
“Max,” she said, “I see you brought friends…restrain all of them! Take their Mews too! Psych will love them!”
“Not today lady!” said Ricky, “Go, Metagross and Glalie! Use Psychic!”
Metagross levitated the egg to Shadow.
“Now, Glalie!” he said, “Ice Beam and spin around!”
Glalie began spinning rapidly, using ice beam on the goons’ feet to immobilize them.
“Nice work!” said Abad.
“That’s it!” yelled Masika, who had jumped up before she was hit, “Go Blastoise and Poliwrath!”
“Metagross, Glalie, return!” said Ricky, “Feraligatr, Victreebel, go!”
“Ice Beam, Blastoise! Poliwrath, Submission!”
“Feraligatr, Hydro Cannon! Victreebel, Vine Whip!”
Feraligatr Hydro Cannoned Blastoise before it could attack Victreebel, and then Victreebel grabbed Poliwrath before he could grab Feraligatr.
“Now! Solarbeam and Crunch!” yelled Ricky.
The attacks KOed Masika’s Pokémon.
“Gah!” she cried, “That is it!”
She pressed a button that released a cage that captured the gang and their Pokémon.
“Go, Tyranitar!” yelled James, “Use Iron Tail!”
Tyranitar slammed his tail into the cage, but no affect!
“Let me try!” yelled Jay, “Machamp, Strength!”
The large Fighting-Type grabbed the bars with all four arms, and pulled as hard as he could.
“Nothing!” yelled Max.
“I’ve got it!” said Abad, “Max use your Charizard!”
“Try all you want!” yelled Masika, “That cage is impenetrable!”
She took the egg and left.
“Alright, go Charizard! Blast Burn!!”
Charizard made the bars scorching hot.
“Go, Dragonite!” yelled Abad, “Blizzard!”
Dragonite quickly cooled and froze the bars. He turned to Jay and James and nodded.
“Strength!” yelled Jay.
“Iron Tail!” yelled James.
The two behemoths slammed the bars open, and the gang escaped.
“Now,” said Ricky, “Lets get that egg!”
“Already covered,” said Max as he held up a custom-made pink PokéBall.
While Ricky and James were plain confused, the others knew what it meant.
Masika was in the control room, barking orders while holding the egg. Then, a Furret came out of nowhere and began jumping all over her.
“Get this thing off of me!” she screamed.
As goons came to her aid, Furret burst herself into flames, scorching her hair.
She dropped the egg, and cried, “MY HAIR!”
The egg rolled toward the door, and then, was stopped by a black boot.
Masika followed the trail then followed up the leg of the boot to the face, of Max!
“WHAT?!?” she screamed.
“Great job Furret!” said Max as she jumped onto his shoulder, “Now, HYPER BEAM!”
Furret began blasting the controls, and everything began blowing up!
“Abad!” yelled James, “Get us outta here!”
“You got it!” yelled Abad, “Mew, Teleport!”
Just before they disappeared, James yelled, “Greetz!”
The team was teleported straight back to base, where Abad contacted the Rangers in Fall City.
“I’m sorry,” said Abad, “Jack wasn’t there.”
He hung up.
“Well?” asked Max.
“They're a bit ticked, but I think the fact we got the egg calmed them down.”
“I’ve sent the egg to Professor Oak, he thinks it will do good around some of my Pokémon, and hopefully, it will hatch.”
“Good, I just hope that we can catch these guys soon.”
“Me too, I mean, with so many legendaries, they are bound to-”
“Abad!” yelled James as he ran into the room.
“What?” asked Abad.
“The Tin Tower is under attack in Ekruteak City!”
“Ho-oh…” said Max.
Max ran toward the open window Abad had in his office, and sent out his Charizard, landed on him, and they flew off.
“James,” said Abad, “Max has a close relationship with Ho-oh. I don’t want him getting into trouble because of careless thinking. Go after him.”
“Got it,” said James, “Go, Flygon!”
James flew off chasing Max.
Pokémon Featured in this Chapter:
Chapter 2: The Prince of the Sea!
In the meeting room…
“I have been contacted by the Fiore Region,” said Abad.
“Really?” said Shadow, “I heard that there aren’t many trainers there.”
“Which is when the Pokémon Rangers called. They say that one of there rangers, Jack Walker, was entrusted with a very peculiar Pokémon egg. His mission was to get it to Fall City, where one of their top professors would examine it. However, he hasn’t arrived there yet.”
“So,” said James, “He wants us to send someone out to help them. You see, normally, we wouldn’t waste our time, except for that THIS is the egg:”
He turned on a computer monitor, in which and egg appeared.
“No…” said Shadow.
“That looks like a-” said Jay.
“Manaphy egg,” said Max.
“Exactly,” said Abad, “It is a legendary Pokémon egg, which means this is probably the work of the LPC.”
“So who’s going out?” asked Shadow.
“I will be having Max go on all these missions, as he is most acquainted with the LPC. The five of us will be going, along with Raptor, one of our newest recruits.”
“When do we leave?” asked Max.
“Tomorrow morning.”
Later that evening…
Max was outside by a river, and he had his Squirtle with him, a Pokémon who he rarely, if ever used.
“Here,” he said to him, “Take this to Lindsey,” he handed Squirtle a small box, “Make sure she gets it.”
“Squirtle-Squirt!”
The little Pokémon dove into the river, and sped off toward the NPZ.
The next morning, the gang went off toward Fiore, and they rode on none other than the black Rayquaza.
“Last night,” said Abad, “The Rangers sent me his last coordinates. We’ll start there.”
They landed on a beach, and Rayquaza went above the clouds.
There were tracks leading into the water.
“Masika,” said Max.
“Must be,” said Shadow.
“Aggron, Mew, lets go!” yelled Max.
“Vaporeon, Dragonite, c’mon out!” yelled Abad.
“Feraligatr, I choose you!” yelled Raptor.
“Alright guys,” said Max, “Go down, see if you can find anything.”
“Max,” said Abad, “Have Mew Transform into Kyogre, it may lure them out.”
“You heard him Mew.”
The Pokémon dove into the water, and as Mew did, he Transformed into the legendary Pokémon of the water, Kyogre.
The five Pokémon stayed under for a few minutes, and came back up, and Mew transformed back as he did.
“Well?” asked Ricky.
Mew sat down on the sand, and then, used Kinesis to write in the sand. Shadow read it out loud.
“It says,” said Shadow, “ “They have gone too deep. Only Aggron was able to go farther due to his steel hide. None of the others got too far because of the severe pressure.” ”
“Great,” said Abad, “Now what?”
“I’ve got it!” said James as the group turned to look at him, “Abad, Max, use your Mews to create a psychic bubble around us. Perhaps then we can find there underwater lair, and then they can teleport us inside. Once we’re in, we snatch the Manaphy egg faster than greased Jolteons using Quick Attack!”
Shadow’s Jolteon popped out, and Thunderbolted James.
“JOLT!!!!”
“I meant metaphorically!” he yelled.
“Jolteon, return!” yelled Shadow.
“Anyway…” said Abad, “Lets do this! Go, Mew!”
Abad’s blue Mew came out, and then, his Mew and Max’s Mew created a pink and a blue psychic bubble. But, before anyone could get into them, the two Mews began bouncing back and forth on them!
“Um…” said Jay.
“I never thought the most powerful Pokémon would be this cute or playful,” said Ricky.
“Trust us,” said Max.
“Neither did we,” said Abad.
After a few minutes of playtime, the gang was plunging into the deepest, darkest depths of the ocean.
It was very dark, and they couldn’t see anything.
“I’ve got this,” said Shadow, “Go, Umbreon!”
Umbreon came out, and the darkness caused the yellow ring markings on his body to glow a bright light.
All around them, they saw Gyarados, Dewgong, Lapras, Relicanth, Wailord, Huntail, Kingdra, and other such Water-Types swimming all around them.
“Wow…” said Jay.
“It’s beautiful down here!” said Shadow.
“Sure is,” said Ricky, “……Look!”
They all looked below them, and saw a sub almost as big as the flying machine from two days earlier.
“Teleport!” Max and Abad said together.
The whole gang disappeared.
When they reappeared, they were in some kind of cargo room. In the center, a pedestal with the Manaphy egg!
“Yes!” yelled Jay, “Nice! Right on target!”
He ran to grab the egg.
“Jay! No! there might be a-” said Ricky as Jay grabbed it. A siren went off, and Ricky finished in a high, squeaky voice, “Trap!”
Within seconds, they were surrounded with LPC goons, and then, there was a break in them, and a girl with blue hair and all blue and black clothes walked through.
“Masika!” yelled Max.
“Max,” she said, “I see you brought friends…restrain all of them! Take their Mews too! Psych will love them!”
“Not today lady!” said Ricky, “Go, Metagross and Glalie! Use Psychic!”
Metagross levitated the egg to Shadow.
“Now, Glalie!” he said, “Ice Beam and spin around!”
Glalie began spinning rapidly, using ice beam on the goons’ feet to immobilize them.
“Nice work!” said Abad.
“That’s it!” yelled Masika, who had jumped up before she was hit, “Go Blastoise and Poliwrath!”
“Metagross, Glalie, return!” said Ricky, “Feraligatr, Victreebel, go!”
“Ice Beam, Blastoise! Poliwrath, Submission!”
“Feraligatr, Hydro Cannon! Victreebel, Vine Whip!”
Feraligatr Hydro Cannoned Blastoise before it could attack Victreebel, and then Victreebel grabbed Poliwrath before he could grab Feraligatr.
“Now! Solarbeam and Crunch!” yelled Ricky.
The attacks KOed Masika’s Pokémon.
“Gah!” she cried, “That is it!”
She pressed a button that released a cage that captured the gang and their Pokémon.
“Go, Tyranitar!” yelled James, “Use Iron Tail!”
Tyranitar slammed his tail into the cage, but no affect!
“Let me try!” yelled Jay, “Machamp, Strength!”
The large Fighting-Type grabbed the bars with all four arms, and pulled as hard as he could.
“Nothing!” yelled Max.
“I’ve got it!” said Abad, “Max use your Charizard!”
“Try all you want!” yelled Masika, “That cage is impenetrable!”
She took the egg and left.
“Alright, go Charizard! Blast Burn!!”
Charizard made the bars scorching hot.
“Go, Dragonite!” yelled Abad, “Blizzard!”
Dragonite quickly cooled and froze the bars. He turned to Jay and James and nodded.
“Strength!” yelled Jay.
“Iron Tail!” yelled James.
The two behemoths slammed the bars open, and the gang escaped.
“Now,” said Ricky, “Lets get that egg!”
“Already covered,” said Max as he held up a custom-made pink PokéBall.
While Ricky and James were plain confused, the others knew what it meant.
Masika was in the control room, barking orders while holding the egg. Then, a Furret came out of nowhere and began jumping all over her.
“Get this thing off of me!” she screamed.
As goons came to her aid, Furret burst herself into flames, scorching her hair.
She dropped the egg, and cried, “MY HAIR!”
The egg rolled toward the door, and then, was stopped by a black boot.
Masika followed the trail then followed up the leg of the boot to the face, of Max!
“WHAT?!?” she screamed.
“Great job Furret!” said Max as she jumped onto his shoulder, “Now, HYPER BEAM!”
Furret began blasting the controls, and everything began blowing up!
“Abad!” yelled James, “Get us outta here!”
“You got it!” yelled Abad, “Mew, Teleport!”
Just before they disappeared, James yelled, “Greetz!”
The team was teleported straight back to base, where Abad contacted the Rangers in Fall City.
“I’m sorry,” said Abad, “Jack wasn’t there.”
He hung up.
“Well?” asked Max.
“They're a bit ticked, but I think the fact we got the egg calmed them down.”
“I’ve sent the egg to Professor Oak, he thinks it will do good around some of my Pokémon, and hopefully, it will hatch.”
“Good, I just hope that we can catch these guys soon.”
“Me too, I mean, with so many legendaries, they are bound to-”
“Abad!” yelled James as he ran into the room.
“What?” asked Abad.
“The Tin Tower is under attack in Ekruteak City!”
“Ho-oh…” said Max.
Max ran toward the open window Abad had in his office, and sent out his Charizard, landed on him, and they flew off.
“James,” said Abad, “Max has a close relationship with Ho-oh. I don’t want him getting into trouble because of careless thinking. Go after him.”
“Got it,” said James, “Go, Flygon!”
James flew off chasing Max.
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RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!
Cool!!!
I love the part when all of you teamed up to break the cage!!!
Keep on going!
Cool!!!
I love the part when all of you teamed up to break the cage!!!
Keep on going!
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As always you did a great job. You did well handling six characters at once.
As always you did a great job. You did well handling six characters at once.
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WHOOOOO I was Sooo Awsome!!!!GREAT FIC MAX!!!
WHOOOOO I was Sooo Awsome!!!!GREAT FIC MAX!!!
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!
thank you, thank you. as you can guess, chapter three will only have two characters, Max and James...or will it?
anyway, if anyone is a pokemon artist (NOT ON PAINT, A REAL LIFE ARTIST) who would like to draw for me, please post!
Chapter three on its way!
thank you, thank you. as you can guess, chapter three will only have two characters, Max and James...or will it?
anyway, if anyone is a pokemon artist (NOT ON PAINT, A REAL LIFE ARTIST) who would like to draw for me, please post!
Chapter three on its way!
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awww...man
well even heroes need a break, but ummm if u could, Ricky could be a tech specialist, & communicate to the 2 ppl via walkie talkie earpeice???
awww...man
well even heroes need a break, but ummm if u could, Ricky could be a tech specialist, & communicate to the 2 ppl via walkie talkie earpeice???
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two things:
1. PokéGear
2. P/M me your ideas, or contact me at one of the following
e-mail: [email protected]
AIM: Nightshade0004
MSN: [email protected]
Rickraptor77 said:awww...man
well even heroes need a break, but ummm if u could, Ricky could be a tech specialist, & communicate to the 2 ppl via walkie talkie earpeice???
two things:
1. PokéGear
2. P/M me your ideas, or contact me at one of the following
e-mail: [email protected]
AIM: Nightshade0004
MSN: [email protected]
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so when's the next one???
so when's the next one???
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i knew i forgot something!....well, it doesnt matter, your flygon has a nice part in c3. working on it as we speak
James said:nice chapter MPM, keep it up!
on a small side note: with the ''pokémon featured in this chapter'', you forgot to post my flygon!
i knew i forgot something!....well, it doesnt matter, your flygon has a nice part in c3. working on it as we speak
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will i be in your story my bio was on the first page
sorry if this is annoying
will i be in your story my bio was on the first page
sorry if this is annoying
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UNfortuanatly, no. you may have posted on the first page, but it was also AFTER i began the story. i have an outline, and i cant incorperate anymore chartacters...maybe next time, sorry
UNfortuanatly, no. you may have posted on the first page, but it was also AFTER i began the story. i have an outline, and i cant incorperate anymore chartacters...maybe next time, sorry
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ok that find
ok that find
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!
i will have chapter three by tomorrow. i have a major headache, causing major writers block!
i will have chapter three by tomorrow. i have a major headache, causing major writers block!
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!
Chapter 3: Follow the Rainbow Pokémon!
Max and Charizard were off, James not far behind.
“Max!” yelled James, “Slow down!”
“I can’t!” he replied, “Ho-oh is in trouble!”
“I didn’t want to do this…Flygon, Hyper Beam!”
Flygon nicked Charizard’s wing so that he had to land.
“James!” yelled Max, “What the-”
“Shut up!” yelled James. Max did so, as James rarely lost his temper.
“You will listen to me!” he continued, “I know you and Ho-oh look out for each other, you have since your early adventures, but that gives you no right to run into this the way you are!” he breathed in and out, “Look, you are acting out of compassion, you always have, it is a gift, but a curse as well. I’m not saying to ignore this, but you have to take it one step at a time, not jump five ahead. To be brutally honest, you always get into trouble that way. You have risked both your Pokémon and your own life to save others, and in the end, people have thanked you eternally for it, and those people have risked their lives to save yours, myself included. But I am here to tell you that one day, your luck WILL run out. Now, you can barge in like a headless, rampaging Primeape, or, you can take Slowbro, and get the job done right and safely. Take your pick.”
Max nodded, and they flew off to Ekruteak.
They landed outside Tin Tower, and it was surrounded with bright red tanks.
“The Fire-Type leader,” said James.
“Could be flying,” said Max.
“No, the fact is, its red and it isn’t airborne.”
“Good point…. Look up there!”
On top of the giant tower, flames were flying, literally!
“Let’s get up there, fast!” yelled James.
The duo flew as fast as their trusting Pokémon could carry them, and when they got to the top, they saw Ho-oh battling with a girl in red clothes with blond hair, using a Blaziken and Camerupt…and he was losing.
“Tyranitar, let’s go!” yelled James.
“Nidoking, let’s rock!” yelled Max.
The girl turned around, and said, “Hm…the PMC. I had a feeling I’d run into you…Masika warned me of your power, but it seems they only sent two of you…Are you saying I’m weaker than my sister!?!?!?!?”
“Wouldn’t surprise me,” said Max.
“WHAT?!?!?!?”
“Well,” said James, “Naturally, Fire-Types are weaker than Water-Types…it’s a type game.”
“That’s it! Blaze Kick! Eruption!”
Blaziken flew at Tyranitar, as magma flew at Nidoking.
“Protect!” yelled James.
Tyranitar blocked the magma for Nidoking.
“Water Pulse!” yelled Max.
The Water-Attack nailed Blaziken into Camerupt.
“Get up you fools!” yelled the girl, “No one makes a mockery out of Cinder!”
“Nidoking!” yelled Max.
“Tyranitar!” yelled James.
“Iron Tail!” they yelled together.
The duo sprung through the air, and nailed their tails into Blaziken and Camerupt. The two Fire-Types went flying…into Ho-oh!
“No!” yelled Max.
But, the Ho-oh blew up! It was a fake!
“What?” James gasped.
“Like I said!” yelled Cinder, “NO ONE makes a fool of me!”
She hopped into a helicopter that came up near her, and was off.
James went into Ekruteak’s Pokémon Center, where he contacted Abad.
“They had him?” asked Abad.
“It was a setup…” said James, “…I believe it was to lure us away from where they are really holding him.”
“And Max?”
“He’s taking it hard. He’s sitting on top of the Tin Tower since the incident.”
“Well, go get him…Ricky has some good news.”
James went to the Tin Tower, and told Max to call Ricky. Max flipped his PokéGear open, and dialed the PMC. He punched in Ricky’s extension, and Ricky answered.
“Hello?” asked Ricky.
“It’s Max,” said Max, “What’s up?”
“Check this, remember how we stored those rare items that have a close relationship to the legendaries?”
“Yeah, they were constantly being stolen, so I put them in the basement.”
“Well…I have developed a new machine, one that can find the person, or in this case, the Pokémon who is closest to it. And, for Ho-oh, we have a pouch of Sacred Ashes and the Rainbow Wing. Using two items intensifies a more exact location, which means…”
“We can find and rescue Ho-oh!”
“Exactly! And, the best part is, I can upload the coordinates to your PokéNav, so, you don’t even have to come here!”
“Start the transfer!” yelled James.
Max flipped his PokéNav, which revealed that Ho-oh wasn’t far off. He was moving, so max and James made no delay in hopping on Lizardon and Flygon.
After a long flight, they arrived behind the airship that they had seen a few days earlier.
“Wait, isn’t Ho-oh a Fire-Type?” asked James.
“And a Flying-Type,” said Max, “And don’t forget, there are seventeen of them, which means one of them is obsessed with Flying-Types.”
“So, Ho-oh is a double target.”
“Exactly. No doubt others, like Latias or Celebi will also be big targets for their dual-types.”
“Right…so, I think we need to infiltrate through the bottom. We can weld a hole using Lizardon and Flygon’s Flamethrower.”
“Good idea. Lets go!”
The two flew underneath the machine.
In a giant holding room…
“Nice work, cousin,” said a girl.
“It was easy, Harpie,” said Cinder, “Those fools were easy to doop!”
“Great work…but, didn’t you say that they were from the PMC?”
“Well, yeah, but they didn’t even give chase, do you honestly think tha-”
Ho-oh, who was in a cage, began screeching loudly.
“Shut up!” yelled Cinder.
“Just wait until we get you back to base!” said Harpie, “Our newest PokéBall will bring the first legendary to be captured without choice!”
KA-BOOOOOOOOM!!!!!
A hole the size of a Charizard and Flygon appeared along with tons of smoke and dust. When it was cleared, Max and James stood their with their respective Pokémon.
“You said they didn’t give chase!” yelled Harpie.
“Not the point right now!” yelled Cinder
“Right,” said Harpie, “Go, Gligar!”
“Torkoal, let’s go!”
“Nidoking, c’mon out!” yelled Max.
“Go, Gengar!” yelled James.
“Gligar, Aerial Ace!” yelled Harpie.
“Flamethrower Torkoal!” yelled Cinder.
“Night Shade on Nidoking!” yelled James.
Gengar encompassed his partner in a dark cloud with himself. Gligar entered the cloud, and didn’t come out. The Flamethrower went in, then came back out, slamming Torkoal!
Then, the smoke cleared, with Nidoking using Iron Tail to crush him.
“Torkoal, use Overheat!” yelled Cinder.
The massive Fire-Attack began scorching Nidoking’s hide, and Gengar disappeared.
“Nidoking, Rage!” yelled Max
Nidoking ran through the attack, and began going all out on Torkoal.
“Shadow Punch!” yelled James.
Gengar reappeared and punched Gligar into Torkoal, knocking both of them out.
“Nidoking, Ice Beam that cage!” yelled Max.
Nidoking froze the cage, then Max yelled, “Ho-oh, Ancientpower!”
Ho-oh burst through the cage, and he was angry.
“Sacred Fire!” yelled Max.
Ho-oh blasted them with the most intense flame ever seen, and a hole in the wall.
“Return!” Max and James said to their Pokémon.
They hopped onto the Rainbow Pokémon and flew out, towards the PMC HQ.
At the HQ…
“Great work guys!” said Abad.
“Thanks,” said James.
“I’ve convinced Ho-oh to stay here, with us. I think he’ll be safer,” said Max.
“That’s fine with me,” said Abad, “But, you wont be here long.”
“Why?”
“The Orange Islands are under attack, Shadow has already left with Jay. I want you there ASAP.”
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Chapter 3: Follow the Rainbow Pokémon!
Max and Charizard were off, James not far behind.
“Max!” yelled James, “Slow down!”
“I can’t!” he replied, “Ho-oh is in trouble!”
“I didn’t want to do this…Flygon, Hyper Beam!”
Flygon nicked Charizard’s wing so that he had to land.
“James!” yelled Max, “What the-”
“Shut up!” yelled James. Max did so, as James rarely lost his temper.
“You will listen to me!” he continued, “I know you and Ho-oh look out for each other, you have since your early adventures, but that gives you no right to run into this the way you are!” he breathed in and out, “Look, you are acting out of compassion, you always have, it is a gift, but a curse as well. I’m not saying to ignore this, but you have to take it one step at a time, not jump five ahead. To be brutally honest, you always get into trouble that way. You have risked both your Pokémon and your own life to save others, and in the end, people have thanked you eternally for it, and those people have risked their lives to save yours, myself included. But I am here to tell you that one day, your luck WILL run out. Now, you can barge in like a headless, rampaging Primeape, or, you can take Slowbro, and get the job done right and safely. Take your pick.”
Max nodded, and they flew off to Ekruteak.
They landed outside Tin Tower, and it was surrounded with bright red tanks.
“The Fire-Type leader,” said James.
“Could be flying,” said Max.
“No, the fact is, its red and it isn’t airborne.”
“Good point…. Look up there!”
On top of the giant tower, flames were flying, literally!
“Let’s get up there, fast!” yelled James.
The duo flew as fast as their trusting Pokémon could carry them, and when they got to the top, they saw Ho-oh battling with a girl in red clothes with blond hair, using a Blaziken and Camerupt…and he was losing.
“Tyranitar, let’s go!” yelled James.
“Nidoking, let’s rock!” yelled Max.
The girl turned around, and said, “Hm…the PMC. I had a feeling I’d run into you…Masika warned me of your power, but it seems they only sent two of you…Are you saying I’m weaker than my sister!?!?!?!?”
“Wouldn’t surprise me,” said Max.
“WHAT?!?!?!?”
“Well,” said James, “Naturally, Fire-Types are weaker than Water-Types…it’s a type game.”
“That’s it! Blaze Kick! Eruption!”
Blaziken flew at Tyranitar, as magma flew at Nidoking.
“Protect!” yelled James.
Tyranitar blocked the magma for Nidoking.
“Water Pulse!” yelled Max.
The Water-Attack nailed Blaziken into Camerupt.
“Get up you fools!” yelled the girl, “No one makes a mockery out of Cinder!”
“Nidoking!” yelled Max.
“Tyranitar!” yelled James.
“Iron Tail!” they yelled together.
The duo sprung through the air, and nailed their tails into Blaziken and Camerupt. The two Fire-Types went flying…into Ho-oh!
“No!” yelled Max.
But, the Ho-oh blew up! It was a fake!
“What?” James gasped.
“Like I said!” yelled Cinder, “NO ONE makes a fool of me!”
She hopped into a helicopter that came up near her, and was off.
James went into Ekruteak’s Pokémon Center, where he contacted Abad.
“They had him?” asked Abad.
“It was a setup…” said James, “…I believe it was to lure us away from where they are really holding him.”
“And Max?”
“He’s taking it hard. He’s sitting on top of the Tin Tower since the incident.”
“Well, go get him…Ricky has some good news.”
James went to the Tin Tower, and told Max to call Ricky. Max flipped his PokéGear open, and dialed the PMC. He punched in Ricky’s extension, and Ricky answered.
“Hello?” asked Ricky.
“It’s Max,” said Max, “What’s up?”
“Check this, remember how we stored those rare items that have a close relationship to the legendaries?”
“Yeah, they were constantly being stolen, so I put them in the basement.”
“Well…I have developed a new machine, one that can find the person, or in this case, the Pokémon who is closest to it. And, for Ho-oh, we have a pouch of Sacred Ashes and the Rainbow Wing. Using two items intensifies a more exact location, which means…”
“We can find and rescue Ho-oh!”
“Exactly! And, the best part is, I can upload the coordinates to your PokéNav, so, you don’t even have to come here!”
“Start the transfer!” yelled James.
Max flipped his PokéNav, which revealed that Ho-oh wasn’t far off. He was moving, so max and James made no delay in hopping on Lizardon and Flygon.
After a long flight, they arrived behind the airship that they had seen a few days earlier.
“Wait, isn’t Ho-oh a Fire-Type?” asked James.
“And a Flying-Type,” said Max, “And don’t forget, there are seventeen of them, which means one of them is obsessed with Flying-Types.”
“So, Ho-oh is a double target.”
“Exactly. No doubt others, like Latias or Celebi will also be big targets for their dual-types.”
“Right…so, I think we need to infiltrate through the bottom. We can weld a hole using Lizardon and Flygon’s Flamethrower.”
“Good idea. Lets go!”
The two flew underneath the machine.
In a giant holding room…
“Nice work, cousin,” said a girl.
“It was easy, Harpie,” said Cinder, “Those fools were easy to doop!”
“Great work…but, didn’t you say that they were from the PMC?”
“Well, yeah, but they didn’t even give chase, do you honestly think tha-”
Ho-oh, who was in a cage, began screeching loudly.
“Shut up!” yelled Cinder.
“Just wait until we get you back to base!” said Harpie, “Our newest PokéBall will bring the first legendary to be captured without choice!”
KA-BOOOOOOOOM!!!!!
A hole the size of a Charizard and Flygon appeared along with tons of smoke and dust. When it was cleared, Max and James stood their with their respective Pokémon.
“You said they didn’t give chase!” yelled Harpie.
“Not the point right now!” yelled Cinder
“Right,” said Harpie, “Go, Gligar!”
“Torkoal, let’s go!”
“Nidoking, c’mon out!” yelled Max.
“Go, Gengar!” yelled James.
“Gligar, Aerial Ace!” yelled Harpie.
“Flamethrower Torkoal!” yelled Cinder.
“Night Shade on Nidoking!” yelled James.
Gengar encompassed his partner in a dark cloud with himself. Gligar entered the cloud, and didn’t come out. The Flamethrower went in, then came back out, slamming Torkoal!
Then, the smoke cleared, with Nidoking using Iron Tail to crush him.
“Torkoal, use Overheat!” yelled Cinder.
The massive Fire-Attack began scorching Nidoking’s hide, and Gengar disappeared.
“Nidoking, Rage!” yelled Max
Nidoking ran through the attack, and began going all out on Torkoal.
“Shadow Punch!” yelled James.
Gengar reappeared and punched Gligar into Torkoal, knocking both of them out.
“Nidoking, Ice Beam that cage!” yelled Max.
Nidoking froze the cage, then Max yelled, “Ho-oh, Ancientpower!”
Ho-oh burst through the cage, and he was angry.
“Sacred Fire!” yelled Max.
Ho-oh blasted them with the most intense flame ever seen, and a hole in the wall.
“Return!” Max and James said to their Pokémon.
They hopped onto the Rainbow Pokémon and flew out, towards the PMC HQ.
At the HQ…
“Great work guys!” said Abad.
“Thanks,” said James.
“I’ve convinced Ho-oh to stay here, with us. I think he’ll be safer,” said Max.
“That’s fine with me,” said Abad, “But, you wont be here long.”
“Why?”
“The Orange Islands are under attack, Shadow has already left with Jay. I want you there ASAP.”
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