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Max Shade IV

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....First, let me apoligize to a few people:

Metogross88: Probably my most loyal Ultimate Battle Pokemaniac

ShadowSong and Nercinator: Shadow and Jay, i'm sorry for not continuing.

BUT!!!!!! (hehe....but...)

My new story is in progress!??

Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC Vs. The LPC Seventeen!

***Prelude
***Chapter 1: The Return of Max!
***Chapter 2: The Prince of the Sea!
***Chapter 3: Ho-oh: Follow The Rainbow!
***Chapter 4: Disturb Not The Harmony Of Fire, Ice or Lightnig!
***Chapter 5: Max and Abad Under Attack!
***Chapter 6: LPC's Fighting Champ!
***Chapter 7: Let Me Spell it Out for Ya!
***Chapter 8: Rising From the Ashes of the Burned Tower!
***Chapter 9: Guardian of the Sea!
***Chapter 10: Time-Traveling Grant!
***Chapter 11: A Passion for Poison!
***Chapter 12: Blind as a Rock! And Ice...and Steel Too!!!!
***Chapter 13: To Eon Island!
***Chapter 14: Two Bigger Things to Worry About Than the LPC!
***Chapter 15: The Brothers Rayquaza!
***Chapter 16: When You Wish Upon Jirachi!
***Chapter 17: DNA: DEOXYS-Ribose!
***Chapter 18: PMC! He's Bugging Me!
***Chapter 19: The Three Beings!
***Chapter 20: Breaking the Time-Space Continuum!
***Chapter 21: A Magma Storm!
***Chapter 22: o_O Off With the PMC's Head?!?!? o_O
***Chapter 23: Once in a Cresselia Moon!
***Chapter 24: Prince Imposter?!?
***Chapter 25: The Real Prince of the Sea!
***Chapter 26: And You Thought Darkrai Was a Nightmare?!?
***Chapter 27: Looks Like a Flower, Stings Like a...Well, It's Just Cute!
***Chapter 28: Arceus And The LPC's #1:___!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
***Chapter 29: The Final Showdown!
***Chapter 30: Max Says Goodbye For Now!
***Epilogue

*In Progress
**Finished
***Posted

This FanFiction is finished.

-Max Shade IV
 
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Heres my info for my character!



Name: Abad [Andrew's character]
Aliases: B-Ray, Black Rayquaza, the PMC leader, the one and only.
Gender: Male
Main team: I made a TC to show everyone my team.
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reserves: Breloom, Alakazam, Gengar and adding some.

Pokemon to call apon: Black Rayquaza
Mini Bio- Bout 5'5 Black short haired white boy....very athletic. My title is the PMC Leader.

Other comments- Loves sports, and pokemon of coarse! Loves to ride pokemon on the water!

Thanks!
 
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Okay! I am going to start writing later tonight. if i dont have more characters, i dont care, i've gotta write!
 
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Ricky

Age:15

a.k.a the "Raptor"

Pokemon on team: Feraligatr,Mightyena,Metagross,Glalie,Victrebel & Camerupt

Pokemon in box/reserve: Flygon,Gardevoir,Ampharos,Steelix,Gengar,Alakazam,Charizard,Sceptile,Garchomp,& Mamoswine

Bio: Male, dark hair, cool shades, black vest, jeans, & a nice bike:D, former assitant to Prof. Elm so is considered a tech specialist, Silver Conference Champ & Hoenn Leag Champ, has a reaserch camp in hoenn, his sister works for Mary in Goldenrod City, he lived in Blackthorn for a year training under Clair,favours Dragon Pokemon.Da Bad boy, who is good(Sasuke-like behavior)

ok so i guess the physical aspect of him is similar to me, but he's me in my dreams...day or night...
 
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Pokémon Max’s Story: The PMC Vs. The LPC Seventeen!!!!

Prelude: The PMC

Five years ago, three powerful Pokémon trainers fought side by side in what truly was the Ultimate Tournament. Their names were as follows:
Shadow: A girl who was abandoned as a child, she was rescued by the legendary Eon Pokémon Latias and Latios. She was raised on the Southern Island in the Orange Islands. During her travels, she won many small leagues, but her greatest achievement was winning the Orange League, and continuing her rein as the champion.
During the tournament, many evil organizations were out to get her and her friends, and they not only stole her favorite companion, Jolteon, but her “parents” Latias and Latios.
Upon all of their returns, she played a major role in the second No Pokémon Zone (NPZ for short) war. Thanks to her premonitions that she has in her sleep, she was able to assist in the downfall of the NPZ during the war.
Jay: Not exactly the sharpest pencil in the box, his battling skills are beyond others. During his travels, he had an obsession with Erika, the gym leader of Celadon City.
After becoming the Kanto Champ, he entered the Ultimate Tournament with Shadow, and, upon their arrival at Celadon, he saved Erika’s life, and since, they have had a great relationship.
During the tournament, his Starmie was stolen, his greatest fighter and his closest Pokémon. He even met with his older, kidnapped sister and her Dragonite, but it was short, as she was recaptured. Though Starmie returned eventually, his sister is still missing, and he searches tirelessly for her.
During the war, his, what some would call complex, battle tactics combined with Shadow’s premonitions he brought down major NPZ bases.
Max: The son of Grant and Liza Shade, he was named for his grandfather, Max Shade III. At an infant age, his father mysteriously disappeared, and his mother remarried Chris Pesos, the leader of the NPZ.
Never knowing of his families legendary Pokémon past, Max “Pesos” visited his aunt, Delia Ketchum in Pallet Town. Falling in love with Pokémon at Professor Oak’s lab, his parents agreed he could live their, instead of the NPZ.
After years of training, and taking Delia’s maiden name of Shade, Max won in Kanto, Orange Islands, Johto, Hoenn, and is the current Frontier champ.
During the first NPZ war, he learned that it was Chris who forced Celebi, the keeper of time, to send his real father thousands of years into the past.
During the first war, Grant returned when Max wished that Jirachi could bring the greatest trainer ever to help. Grant, who in his new life in the past was needed, left Max two of his Pokémon: a Mew and his black Charizard, nicknamed Lizardon.
In the tournament, Max teamed up with Shadow and Jay, losing his prized Furret with their Jolteon and Starmie.
During the war, he teamed up with Shadow and Jay, along with to guys, Abad, who controlled the black, smaller and younger Rayquaza, who was disowned due to his size and color.

After the war, Abad started the Pokémon Masters Clan; a collection of the greatest trainers alive, who’s sworn duty is to protect the world from the evils that constantly attack. And, for five years, the world was quiet. The worst that had happened since the war was a small resistance of Team Rocket rebelling on the SS Tidal, which lasted two days.

And, with the formation of the Clan and the world at peace, the Clan separated, but, stayed in contact with each other, in case something like this was to happen again.
But, no one ever expected the events that would happen five years after their formation……….



NO MORE APPLICATIONS FOR CHARACTERS!!

PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!11
 
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nice! wheres James?
 
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no no, BRay's character was alread incorperated, RR. your character is incorperated into chapter one, dont fear!
 
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Name: mark

Aliases: blastoise king,M Dizzile

Gender: Male

Main Team:Blastoise,shiny Pidgeot,shiny Togakiss,shiny
Umberon,shiny Flygon,heracross

Reserves:swampert,grodon,jaraci,tree regi
(this is my ruby team)

Mini-Bio:male,small,smart i beat alll kanto gym and houen gym
but not the elite 4
 
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Glad to see you starting up again MPM. I'll definitely be reading.
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!

Hey MPM will i come out :p
BTW:yeah where's james???
Please continue it i'm getting excited!!
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!

Okay, before i post the nex chapter, i would like to say:

NO MORE CHARACTER INFO!!!!

if i need more characters, i will personally ask someone for it, thank you.

and now:

Chapter 1: The Return of Max

The PMC HQ was packed with its members in its meeting room, Abad standing in front, James next to him, with Shadow and Jay right behind them.
People were bustling with crazy reasons why everyone was called in, since it hadn’t happened in five years.
“ATTENTION!!” yelled Abad.
Everyone quieted down.  
“James has called this meeting, and its something we need to hear,” he continued.  He stepped aside, and allowed James to take center stage.
“Greetings,” said James, “It’s nice to see you all again, it has been very long.  Before I get started, has anyone heard from Max?”
“Last I heard,” said Jay, “He had left for Mount Silver.”
“When was this?”
“Four-and-a-half years ago…”
“Great…the greatest trainer, second only to his father, is MIA, and a crisis worse than the NPZ is at hand.”
“What?” asked a guy named Raptor.
“Several attacks across the globe have been reported over the past month or so.  It was people trying to capture the legendary Pokémon, such as Articuno or Entei.  The authorities brushed these attacks aside, as local trainers stopped all of them.”
“So why are we here?!?!?” yelled everyone.
“About a week ago, Shadow paid me a visit.  She had a vision, more clear than any.  These attacks were coordinated by the Legendary Pokémon Clan, a group of evil-doers whose focus is capturing rare and legendary Pokémon.  Their leaders are called the LPC Seventeen: one leader for each type.  If you don’t know the types, walk out right now.  Moving onward: we have a plan set to try and track their base, drawn up by none other than Jay.  Be ready in one week to execute it.  Which means train and pack your bags, because-”
An alarm sounded loudly, and the whole Clan ran outside.
“In the name of Starmie,” gasped Jay as they all stared at the sky.
“What is it?” asked Shadow.
“WE ARE THE LPC!” roared a loudspeaker coming from a giant flying machine, “WE KNOW THERE IS A LEGENDARY POKÉMON IN YOUR FACILITY!  GIVE IT UP OR WE WILL ATTACK!!!!!!!”
“No one threatens us!” yelled Abad, “Masters, ATTACK!”
A whole slew of powerfully raised Pokémon came out, with their trainers ordering powerful attacks on the machine.  But, the machine began firing missiles at the base, setting it ablaze!
Then, tanks came rolling through, shooting a sticky, metal-like substance, that captured the Pokémon!
Then, a giant magnet came out of the center of the machine, and it sucked up all the Pokémon!
“I don’t think so!” yelled Abad, “RAYQUAZA!”
Abad’s black Rayquaza came soaring out of the sky, and Abad jumped on, ordering a Hyper Beam as he did.
It had no affect, and then, a capture net made of lead caught Abad and Rayquaza!
*Cue cheesy inspirational music from title screen of Fire Red Version!!!!*
A black blur flew through the sky, and sliced the net open.  The blur stopped, revealing a not so well shaved man with blue hair and a black cape.
At first, the facial hair threw Abad off, but, nothing could mask who it was riding the only black Charizard.
“Max!” he yelled.
“In the flesh!” Max replied, “Go Charizard!”
Max’s own regular-colored Charizard came out of his PokéBall, and Max jumped off Lizardon, the black Charizard.  Abad and Rayquaza caught him as he yelled, “Charizard, Lizardon, Blast Burn!!!!”
The double Blast Burn tore through the magnet, and the Pokémon fell to the ground to their trainers.
James recovered him favorite Pokémon, Tyranitar, and yelled, “HYPER BEAM!!!!”
As the beam blasted through the machine, James couldn’t resist in yelling, “GREETZ-A-LA-VISTA BABY!!!!”
The machine retreated, but the tanks were still coming!
Max landed, and called, “MEW!”
The Mew that belonged to Max’s father came soaring down, and both Charizard’s landed.
“Nidoking, Furret, Sceptile, Feraligatr, Aggron, go!” yelled Max.
“Jolteon, Umbreon, Arcanine, Salamence, I choose you!” yelled Shadow.
“Sceptile, Ampharos, Shiftry, Starmie, c’mon out!” yelled Jay.
“Metagross, Typhlosion, Blastoise, go!” yelled James.
“Vaporeon, Gyarados, Swalot, Dragonite, MEW!” yelled Abad, “C’mon out!”
“Max,” asked James.
“Do us the honors,” said Abad.
“With pleasure!” yelled Max. “Everyone!  HYPER BEAM!!!!”
Twenty-six Pokémon of the five best trainers in the world using Hyper Beam, one of the strongest attacks known, and three of them were legendary…very bright, very loud, and the tanks…well, um…no longer are in existence.
Turning his attention to the burning HQ, Max yelled, “Mew, Feraligatr, Hydro Pump! Furret, Nidoking, Aggron, Water Pulse!”
The massive amounts of water put the fire out.
With the chaos over with, Abad walked up to Max, and Max said, “I leave for five years and you almost get killed…”
Shadow and Jay, two of Max’s oldest friends, ran up and hugged him.
Then, James said, “Max, I know the HQ looks bad, but, its just the exterior, there is a fire-proof material under it…can we get you anything?”
“A razor would be nice.”

After a shower (and a shave) Max, Abad, James, Shadow, Jay, and Erika, who had just arrived, were in a lounge, talking.
“So,” said James, “Where have you been?”
“Well,” said Max, “I trained at Mount Silver for a year, then went to the Orange Islands, where I trained with the Legendary Bird trio and Lugia for a few years. As of recently, I went undercover in the NPZ to check on things.”
“And?” asked Abad.
“Good.  Nothing is being plotted or planned.”
“And Lindsey?” asked Shadow.
“Why would I go there to see her?  The risks of seeing her involve another war…I’m only twenty-one and have fought in two wars with them, LEADING our side, with a twenty-million dollar bounty on my head both times, placed by my stepfather, and on top of that-”
“Love,” said Jay.
“What?”
“Ah,” said James, “The best and most cruel curse of them all.”
“I do not love her!  We’re just friends!  We established that a long time ago!”
“You know,” said Shadow, “If you didn’t love her, you also wouldn’t be offended.  Besides, I had a vision two months ago of you two…”
The group started laughing at him.
“Anyway,” said Max, “I see Rayquaza isn’t with you anymore?”
“Yeah,” said Abad, “He lives in the ozone with his brother now, besides, I have a new friend.”
“I saw the blue Mew, where’d ya find him?”
“Faraway Island.”
“That place exists?”
“You bet!  Of course, if it weren’t for a vision Shadow had, we never would’ve looked for it.”
“Not to be rude,” said Jay, “But what are we gonna do?  We were gonna attack in a week, and they beat us to the punch.
“Wait,” said Max, “We knew about these guys?”
“Yeah,” said Abad, “The LPC.”
“I fought those guys recently!  I was checking up on the legendaries, and some chick named Masika was trying to capture Kyogre.  She had some really rare Water-Types on her, like Kingdra and Relicanth.”
“And?”
“Hard to beat, I even had Lizardon nail her Kingdra with a massive Dragon Claw.  Direct hit; shouldve knocked it out, or at least slowed it down…no affect, their Pokémon are well trained to say the least, so if we are going to fight them, we need to train more.  We lucked out today.  They attacked the PMC HQ, and if two hundred of the world’s finest hadn’t been here, they would’ve walked away with a victory.  The next time we run into them, we won’t all be together.”
“Max is right,” said James, “We need to prepare ourselves.”
“Agreed,” said Abad, “Training starts tomorrow morning, early.  As of this moment, the PMC officially declares war on the LPC Seventeen and all their followers!


Pokemon (mentioned) in this Chapter:

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Aqua Enigma said:
COOL!
so when will you write the nxt chapter?

Should be up by tonight, if not tomorrow, i will try my best not to keep you guys waiting!
 
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dude my dudes name is rick,raptor is just what outsiders know him as...i guess i should've put that down,but i luv the fic!!!

although with so many of the same pokes it gets kinda confusing...
 
RE: Pokémon Max's Story: The PMC VS. The LPC Seventeen!

why do you get all the fun MPM? you're all like ''MPM is the best trainer in the world'' and stuff, but what about us?

Oh, and where's my bio?:p
 
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James said:
why do you get all the fun MPM? you're all like ''MPM is the best trainer in the world'' and stuff, but what about us?

being the author, i naturally write highly about myself...it will happen to anyone and everyone who writes a fanfic

James said:
Oh, and where's my bio?:p

it was never my intention of writing bios. anyone who posted bios was not paying attention to the first post, that said "DONT POST CHARACTER INFO HERE!!! P/M IT TO ME!!!!"

anyway, if you mean the bios on MAx, Shadow and Jay i made in the prelude, thats because they are my returning characters from my last unfinished fanfic
 
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James said:
why do you get all the fun MPM? you're all like ''MPM is the best trainer in the world'' and stuff, but what about us?
This is true.....seriously. Its okay for you to be the main character, but you really did take it too far.

MPM said:
being the author, i naturally write highly about myself...it will happen to anyone and everyone who writes a fanfic
This is the worst part.....so untrue. You cant say something like that without sufficent details. I dont remember me boasting about my skills in MY fanfic, and havent seen anyone else doing it in any other fanfic. Sorry to disagree with ya, have loads of respect for ya, but Its just not right sorry.

-B Ray
 
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Black Rayquaza said:
James said:
why do you get all the fun MPM? you're all like ''MPM is the best trainer in the world'' and stuff, but what about us?
This is true.....seriously. Its okay for you to be the main character, but you really did take it too far.

MPM said:
being the author, i naturally write highly about myself...it will happen to anyone and everyone who writes a fanfic
This is the worst part.....so untrue. You cant say something like that without sufficent details. I dont remember me boasting about my skills in MY fanfic, and havent seen anyone else doing it in any other fanfic. Sorry to disagree with ya, have loads of respect for ya, but Its just not right sorry.

-B Ray

okay, i was never going to post this, but i decided to, so that i can fully explain a character i have had created when i was eight, which was NINE years ago, which means this is my most developed character:

Maxamillion Shade IV, more commonly know as Max, was born in Pallet Town to Grant Shade (Son of Max Shade III) and Liza Shade. When Max was less than a year old, his father mysteriously vanished, and was adopted by his mother’s new husband, Christopher Pesos. Chris was a multi-billion dollar man of the NPZ, or No Pokémon Zone. Max and his mother moved to the NPZ, and Max never learned of his real father, nor did he know Chris was not his real father.
At age five, Max spent the summer with his mother’s sister, his Aunt Kim, in Pallet Town. Max met Professor Oak, who let him play with the Pokémon at the lab. Max grew fond of a Charmander there, who took a great liking to Max as well. Max, who had never encountered a Pokémon, knew then and there, he wanted to be a trainer. So, seeing no harm in it, Chris and Liza allowed him to stay with his aunt until he was old enough to become a trainer.
Max started his journey with his friends, Rich and J.C. Spade, brothers. Max chose Charmander, Rich chose Squirtle, and J.C. chose Bulbasaur. After many months of training and battling for badges, the trio made their way to the Indigo Plateau. In an epic battle of Max versus Rich, it came down to Max’s Charmeleon and Rich’s Wartortle.
Charmeleon used Fire Blast, and Wartortle used Hydro Pump. The attacks were equally matched, and hit dead center, and wouldn’t budge. Trying to show their loyalty to their trainers, the two Pokémon upped the power, and upped it so high, they simultaneously evolved. While Charizard was at the disadvantage type-wise, his new wings gave him an aerial advantage. After a newly learned Blast Burn, Max won his first league victory.
Max went on to Orange Islands and Johto with the same results.
But Hoenn was a different story. Shortly after arriving, Max lost all his Pokémon to Team Supreme, the alliance of Rocket, Aqua, and Magma. In his final match of the Hoenn League against Rich, it was down, once again, to Charizard and Blastoise. The rematch of Kanto. But, in the middle of the match, Supreme’s blimp flew overhead. Max hopped on Charizard, determined to retrieve his many friends lost. He blew the blimp up, barley making it out alive with his Pokémon. And then, the truth began its painful journey.
Max’s parents, Chris and Liza, saw the stunt on world-wide television, and demanded his return home. Max was beyond anger. So far beyond, he smuggled his Aerodactyl into the NPZ. It was then, Max broke out of the NPZ and became a fugitive.
Max headed to the desert region of Orre, where he worked for Team Snagem on the Snag Machine. Max then stole the machine and rescued many shadow Pokémon. But, alas, he was caught by NPZ officials, and was sentenced to life in the NPZ.
Max accepted his fate. He knew it was not right to live as a fugitive, until he received a shocking message. The new and much nicer Archie of Aqua and Maxie of Magma, had been leading a rebellion against NPZ, who had been taking over all things Pokémon! And the ring leader? Chris Pesos. He had hired Lawrence III, the collector from Pokémon 2000, to keep all the legendaries under control. After busting out of NPZ and a long, grueling war, it came down to the final battle.
Chris may have hated Pokémon, but he knew what he was doing when he took control of Mewtwo, the most powerful Pokémon to exist. Max had managed to rescue Jirachi, but he was ill, and Max’s team had fallen, and as Mewtwo was about to obliterate Max’s Pokémon into nothing, Max began to wish. He wished that someone with the power to stop his evil father could be there, to stop Chris. Then, Jirachi made the wish come true! A black Charizard tore through the air and destroyed the mind control device in Chris’s hand. Then, a rugged man with a Mew came out and said to Chris, “Stay away from my son!”
It was Grant Shade, son of Max Shade III…Max’s true father! After Grant finished Chris, he explained how Chris had used Celebi to warp him back in time, just so Chris could be with Liza! And, despite Max’s pleading with his father to stay, he had to return to the past, where he had become part of an ancient legend. Max never saw his father again.
During a treaty making at the Indigo Plateau, it was decided that Lindsey, a girl from the NPZ Max had fallen in love with, and had fought along side with, was to return to the NPZ in order for Max to remain there.
He went on to Battle Frontier, where he is the Frontier Reigning Champion.

However, The Ultimate Tournament came about, in which teams of three would have to acquire all badges of Kanto, Johto, Hoenn, and Orange Islands, along with the seven Frontier Symbols.
Max teamed up with Jay, not the brightest crayon, but when it came to Pokémon, there were few trainers better than him.
Max’s second partner was Shadow, a girl raised by the Eon Pokémon Latias and Latios who has visions in her sleep of the future.
Together, the trio won the tournament and found that every evil Pokémon trainer and group had been hired by Chris and the NPZ, thus, another war began.
Lindsey returned to Max’s side, and a Totodile that she had given Max caught PokéRus.
When Lindsey almost died by drowning in a battle at sea, Totodile went down after her, and the PokéRus caused him to evolve straight into Feraligatr, totally skipping Crocanaw.
Max met two new trainers, Abad and James, two friends who were as tired of the NPZ wars as Max was.
Abad had a black-colored Rayquaza, who helped to win many key victories alongside James’ Tyranitar, his favorite and most powerful Pokémon. These two fought alongside Max, and together, they nearly brought the war to an end.
But, even they could not win. Max once again called the help of his true father, who once again used his black Charizard, Lizardon and his Mew to win. This time, Grant went to the past, leaving Max Lizardon and Mew to protect him.
Abad and James then created the Pokémon Masters Clan, a gathering of the most elite trainers on earth. But, even though Max argued extensively, everyone else agreed Lindsey had to return to the NPZ…again.
Max went off to train with the legendary Pokémon, as the evil grew quite. And now, upon his return five years later, he returns just in time to help his old friends take on the Legendary Pokémon Clan and their leaders, the LPC Seventeen!


Not only do i have an entire history made for him, the story is called "Pokemon MAX'S Story" and Max is the focus of all my stories...if this offends anyone (No offense to you, b-ray) just dont read it.
 
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