MOT6K's Fake Card Tournament Royal: The Crowning

[Master of the Six Kings]

Welcome all! This is the biggest spolier-making contest in Pokebeach history. All are welcome but only the winner will be declared as the Ultimate card faker, bar none. All who wish to enter must simply post round 0 spoilers within one week of this thread. There may or may not be prizes depending on people's willingness. These are the points for each category.

Grammar: 30
Following Directions: 10
Appropriate Text: 10
(Stage 1, evolves from ect)
HP: 5
Type: 5
Pokemon Originality (Orig.): 10
(Flygon, Salamence ect are low scores)
Poke-Power/Body Orig.: 10
(Not required, points may move to Body)
Attack Orig.: 10
(Tackle, Horn Attack, Retaliate ect. are low scores)
Body: 45
(This judges Length, flow, Energy per attack, Usefulness/Brokenness of Attack/Power/Body ect.)
Bottom Stats: 15
(Weak, Resis, Treat)
Total = 150pts.

Judges: MOT6K, Lt. Houndoom, Flygon
All 3 judges will grade each card then find the average.

So let it begin!
Round 0: Note this round is worth 50 points and is not required.
Card: A basic Pokemon (Must evolve)

Edit, Here is an example card:

Combee lv.13 HP 60 (G)
Basic Pokemon

Poke-Body: Sent of Nature
Once during your turn (before you attack), you may discard a (G) energy attached to Combee. If you do, search your deck for a (G) type Basic Pokemon and put it on your bench.

(G)(C) Queen's Order 10+
If you have a Vespiquen in play this attack does 20 more damage.

A strange honeycomb Pokemon that only evolves as a female. This Pokemon able to find honey even during natural disasters.

Weakness: (R) +10
Resistance: (F) -20
Retreat Cost: (C)

Contestants:
PMJ
Shiny Marstomp
Pimpwalkin'

 

[Master of the Six Kings]

Quick note, since this thread is made possible by the Battle frontier and their staff, i'd recomend that if your not already signned up that you do. just say i sent you and they'll let you in. It's a fun experience that costs nothing and does not require devotion. You can pop on whenever but you'll be recorded forever as one who tried.
MOT6K: The Bug Catching Supremecy

 

[Andyman]

I'll join, I'm short on idea now, so I'll post my fake later.

 

[Lieutenant Houndoom]

MOT6K, Lt. Houndoom reporting for duty, sir! *salutes*

And why is this "funded" by the BF?

 

[Palmer]

It's too bad that Flygon isn't that active anymore.

 

[Master of the Six Kings]

True but I PM'd him. Anyway Sol I'm sure the genius who invented the battle frontier and keeps making new games could breeze a spolier contest, you should join.

It's not funded it's supported.

 

[PMJ]

Questions. Is this advanced format or D/P format? And if it's advanced format, are we restricted to 386 or can we go all 493 with it?

 

[Lieutenant Houndoom]

Um, are we judging this as an individual card or in the metagame?

And my opinions upon card judging may differ a lot between yours... and probably will be that you'll need another judge.

 

[silent swordsman]

do we have to make a card scan?

 

[Master of the Six Kings]

Pimp: This D/P and below so you can do any Pokemon released. (this means Arceus, Shaymin and Darkaria are the only one not allowed)

LT.: individual cards and that's why we have Flygon.

SS: Pmed

 

[PMJ]

I mean are we supposed to do the cards advanced style, example

Growlithe - 50 HP - R

as opposed to D/P style, example

Growlithe Lv.16 - HP 60 - R

Like that.

 

[Master of the Six Kings]

Deimand and pearl way. Second example

 

[PMJ]

Well... all right. I guess I'll make an entry and hope others join too.

Growlithe Lv.16 - HP 60 - R
Basic Pokemon

Poké-Power: Flare Up
Once during your turn (before your attack), if there are any [R] Energy attached to Growlithe, you may flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokemon is now Burned. This power can't be used if Growlithe is affected by a Special Condition.

C - Claw Graze - 10
Flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokémon is now Paralyzed.

It is very loyal to its Trainer and will fight to its last breath to protect him or her.

WK: W+10 / RS: None / RC: C

 

[abaxter94]

I'll join to, but I'm a better faker in advanced style.
Q: Do we have to put a pokedex entry?

Drifloon-lv.22-psycic-50HP

PokeBody: Aftermath
If Drifloon is knocked out by an opponent's attack, put two damage counters on that Pokemon.

[p] Ominous Wind
Does 10 damage to one of your opponent's Pokemon. (don't apply weakness and resistance for benched pokemon)

WK: D x2
RS: C -10
RC: -

Good?

 

[Master of the Six Kings]

You do but your not graded on what it says as long as it makes sence.

 

[Lieutenant Houndoom]

Well, may as well start.  If this is at the wrong place... well, something.

Pink PMJ:  
Grammar:  30.  What do you expect... but I would say "To its last breath to protect them".
Directions: 10.  Yep.  CAn't get any more basic.
HP:  5. It's happened before.
Type: 5.  How can you miss this...
Originality: 9. They're kinda common, but not that common now.
Power:  10  Nice idea.  Don't think I've seen that.
Attack Orig: 10  Interesting name.
Body: 43 Well, with extreme luck, you can KO them in Turn 2.  It's also bench-usable.  Not going to lower too much as it IS DP, and some basics have 60 HP.
Bottom stats: 15.  Not much to say.

147, I'd say.

 

[Master of the Six Kings]

PMJ: 147(Basiclly the same as Lt. Hound)
Lt. Hound, your points total 140 because you forgot appropriate text score.Not big but lettin you know.

Abaxter
Grammar: 30
Directions: 10
Ap. Text: 5 Didn't type basic
HP:5
TP: 5
Originalety: 10
Power: 10
Attack: 7 Been done on driffy b4
Body: 45 Good sniper with well rounded effect.
Bottom stat:10 No x2 weakness plz
Total: 137

 

[Lieutenant Houndoom]

Well, yeah, he got 10 for that...
Abaxter:
Grammar: 29 You missed the caps in the brackets.
App. Text: 7 Yes, same as above, though not as harsh...
HP: 5
Type: 5
Poké origin: 10 It's a DP, where else would it be...
Power/Body: 10
Att Orig: 7 Name is original, attack has come up so many times...
Body: 45 Good enough, if not a little boring.
Bottom: 13 x2 weakness? Bad.

141.

 

[pichu brothers]

Eidolon joining!
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Kadabra Lv.21 HP80 [P]
Stage 1 - Evolves from Abra
[P] Confuse Ray 20
The Defending Pokémon is now Confused.
[C] [C] [C] Trade of Evolution
Switch Kadabra 1 of your Benched Pokémon. Then, search your deck for Alakazam and put it on top of Kadabra (this counts as evolving Kadabra). Shuffle your deck afterward.
It's spoons can control psychic powers. It's much more powerful than his pre-evolved form, Abra.
Weakness: [P]+20
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: [C] [C]

 

[Master of the Six Kings]

Eidolon joining!
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Kadabra Lv.21 HP80 [P]
Stage 1 - Evolves from Abra
[P] Confuse Ray 20
The Defending Pokémon is now Confused.
[C] [C] [C] Trade of Evolution
Switch Kadabra 1 of your Benched Pokémon. Then, search your deck for Alakazam and put it on top of Kadabra (this counts as evolving Kadabra). Shuffle your deck afterward.
It's spoons can control psychic powers. It's much more powerful than his pre-evolved form, Abra.
Weakness: [P]+20
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: [C] [C]

Read the instructions and space correctly, then I'll rate the card.