Zoroark's Sprite by a maniac

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IS-
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WAS-
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I love scratch spriting. C&C please?
 
Very good! The leg on the left looks a bit strange, though. Shading is good everywhere except the arm closest to us. It looks a bit strange on the right side of it...
 
squirtli said:
Very good! The leg on the left looks a bit strange, though. Shading is good everywhere except the arm closest to us. It looks a bit strange on the right side of it...
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Thanks!

I agree about the leg, but the leg in my reference was equally messed up. I messed around with it but I don't know if it's really made it any better.

I can't see the bit on the arm, but it is very repetitive there so I might break that up.
 
You could make the face thicker (less thin) and there is a yellow spot between the tail and right leg. The rest is great!
 
Thanks for the feedback! Hah, I didn't spot the yellow bit! Thanks for catching that. As for making the face thicker, I was kinda trying to get that sleek, pointy look the reference I'm using has.

EDIT- And it's updated, but barely noticeable.
 
I can actually see the change on the arm. It looks better, imo.
I also like the sleek look you were going for.
 
Well that's good to know. ^_^

EDIT- Changed the head and some other stuff. Looking back on it, the head was ridiculously huge.
 
mine is better:
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:p

Yeah, don't advertise your artwork on someone else's threads. :F

dmaster out.
 
Agreed. Anyways, now that you changed the face it looks bit better. And the yellow is gone so its perfect now! ^^'
 
Maybe it's just the hair?

Lol, not to annoy you or anything, but the face looks too short now to me. XP
 
Mr. Random said:
Maybe it's just the hair?

Lol, not to annoy you or anything, but the face looks too short now to me. XP
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Same. I actually liked the first head more...
 
But I thought you didn't like WAS's face? XD

I'm happy about IS's face now, but I think you should just add more shading to the face.
 
Now that I see them compared, what I said in my last post is my opinion =3
 
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Oh, and before anyone makes any more complaints about the bendiness of the arms/legs, I suggest you look at Zoroark's walking pose. He's pretty damn flexible!
 
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