Zapdos Fake Card (WB) (Updated Sept. 16)

[Flygon999]

Hello all, here is my Fake Card, Zapdos. The set is Wonderous Beginnings. (WB) and this is the first card. Eventually I will have a couple more to add to my set.

NEW UPDATE!

 

[Light Venusaur]

RE: Zapdos Fake Card (WB)

I like it.
How ever the person who drew the pic is: Aragornbird.

 

[darkrai1246]

RE: Zapdos Fake Card (WB)

Broken but good! 9/10

 

[Flygon999]

RE: Zapdos Fake Card (WB)

Okay thanks guys! As you can see, IDK how many cards to make in the set though. But this is the first one.

@ Light Venusaur: Who the freak is Aragornbird?

 

[Light Venusaur]

RE: Zapdos Fake Card (WB) (Updated Sept. 15)

Aragornbird is the owner of Arkeis.com

 

[Pokémaniac]

RE: Zapdos Fake Card (WB) (Updated Sept. 15)

Bad grammar, boring effects and generic attack names. It's underpowered, doesn't fit any particular role. It's sorta a spreader, sort of a Starter and sort of an attacker, but it doesn't do a great job of any of these.

People need to start thinking about how they can make there cards different but not stupid. There are many effects that haven't been explored, but people always stick to the basic stuff.

I like the art though!

 

[Flygon999]

RE: Zapdos Fake Card (WB) (Updated Sept. 15)

Bad grammar, boring effects and generic attack names. It's underpowered, doesn't fit any particular role. It's sorta a spreader, sort of a Starter and sort of an attacker, but it doesn't do a great job of any of these.

People need to start thinking about how they can make there cards different but not stupid. There are many effects that haven't been explored, but people always stick to the basic stuff.

I like the art though!

Whoa, no need to blow up here! After all, it is a fake card. Therefore I have to make it unique!

 

[PMJ]

RE: Zapdos Fake Card (WB) (Updated Sept. 15)

There's no law that says every fake card has to have unique attack effects and odd names.

I created a fake Pachirisu that had an attack called "Reverberating Empennage" just to make it sound cool and not be called "Shocking Tail." Reverberating Empennage is a stupid name and I regret doing it.

Point is, you don't have to rag on the attack names. ;/

 

[Flygon999]

RE: Zapdos Fake Card (WB) (Updated Sept. 15)

There's no law that says every fake card has to have unique attack effects and odd names.

I created a fake Pachirisu that had an attack called "Reverberating Empennage" just to make it sound cool and not be called "Shocking Tail." Reverberating Empennage is a stupid name and I regret doing it.

Point is, you don't have to rag on the attack names. ;/

Wow that post really confused me. Besides, there's no law that sais I can't make my card however I want to.

UPDATE!

 

[bunniv the 3]

i like it but you could have just put 10 damege

 

[Flygon999]

Nah I wanted it to do a damage counter, not 10 damage.

 

[George2FRESH]

Weakness should be PLUS 20, not TIMES 20. haha in that case, I can OHKO with Pachirisu. =P

 

[6294]

I like it but you could have just put 10 damege

It does say to choose one of your opponent's Pokémon. That means ANY. The damage means to the defending pokémon.

9/10
I don't like the weakness or retreat cost.

 

[Flygon999]

Lol guys, most legendary pokemon have double weakness. Problem solved.

 

[6294]

Lol guys, most legendary pokemon have double weakness. Problem solved.

But they don't have x20 weakness!

 

[Flygon999]

Oh yeah my bad, it's supposed to be x2.

 

[LuckyLuigi7]

PMJ's right. The font isn't correct but the attacks are fine. I have the same trouble with the font- it isn't the same as a regular Pokemon card, but it's a great card overall. 8/10

 

[Flygon999]

Okay, thank you!