the pokemon war (fanfic)

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Part 1 the war has begun

Long ago not long after arceus had created the world kyogre leader of the water empire comanded battle with groudon leader of the ground empire he told his best comannder genral regigigas to lead
them to battle as they rose there flag high they saw the water empire with there best commander, commander empoleon with many blaltoises in there army commander empoleon told every blastiose to use hydro cannon commander regigigas told his army of tyranitar to do the same thing with hyper beam and the war has begun.
 
pretty interesting, i dont see groudon as much as a ground even though its grou-don it seem more of a fire type. still good though cause there barely any ground team. reggigas? not sure if its in a ground type version or something. What i like about is the feeling of the action what will come next a ground type vs. water either side has a advantage (I think for the ground) I'll give you a 7.3/10 keep it up
 
part 2 the first battle

after the hydro cannons hyper beams had hit with great force the armys had ran up for hand to hand combat commander Regigigas came ready with a focus punch and killed one of the blastoises but commander empoleon had done the same thing but with hydro pump
and on a tyranitar then commander regigigas had an Idea he told everybody to get ready to use an eathquake and bam half of what was left was killed command empoleon told his army to do the same thing but with skull bash and half of what was left was killed both army had retreted back to there base
 
Part 3 the night shift

commander regigigas after there battle had to rest and think then he had a great Idea he would have his best 2 spys sneak in the water empires base so he got his best spys and they were gilscor and marowak so commander regigigas told gilscor and marowak to have gilscor to carry and fly marowak to the water empire's base and figure out what there doing tommorow just don't get caught doing it after gilscor had flew marowak to the base they saw 2 swamperts gaurding the door so marowak used a bonerang attack knock them both out cold they went inside and saw 2 floatzel coming up around the corner but gilscor rushed up and used gullitone to kill them both then they saw the door that leads to where there planing what there gonna do tommorow they couldn't look though the door and if they opened the door someone was bond to see them then they saw the room had a glass celing so gliscor took marrowak up on the roof they carved a hole in the glass and they heard kyogre saying that that they will invade the ground empire at dawn gilscor and marrowak came back to the ground empire and told everybody and then they got ready for the invasion
 
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