The Jewel Water (Fanfic)

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OKAY!,So I'm gunna make a Story Series called The Jewel Water,And I know that people usually just pass by noob storys,or give a bad review when they hav'nt even read it,but I'm gunna make it Baby! no matter what.
Chapter 1:The Begining of the End
"Now Registeel! use Superpower!" Said A Teenage Boy with Black hair,A blue vest,and a Strange Necklace, Boulders flew up in the air,and fired at a Mysterious Shadow man."Mewceus! Shadow Ball!" Said A mysterious Shadow man.A giant Monsterish Beast Let out a Big ball of Dark...and fired at Registeel."Registeel! No!" the teenage boy said.But it was to late...Registeel Became Possesed,a Yellow eye appeared on Registeel and It then joined the mysterious shadow man."It's Over! Why don't you just give up?" he said in a ghostly and deep voice."I....Don't....Give...Up..." Said the Teenage boy."It can't end like this...it can't...mabye if I go to the past,I can fix this so it never happened...but how?" He said again.Just then the teenage boy ran from the battle,in search for something."Running away are you?,Mewceas! Find Him now!" Said the mysterious shadow man.The Monstorish Beast Did what it was told.Meanwhile,in Littleroot town,Far,Far away from that other place,A new trainer Seems to of gotton his first pokemon.It was a Small green pokemon with a twig in it's mouth."I'm so exited that me and Treecko get to start our Journy Right now!" A young boy said,he had blue jeans,A Red Baseball cap,and a Red T-shirt,His name was Red."Oh! I almost forgot,I'm going to test out this Poke'nav Proffeser Birch gave me," Red said.He dialed Prof.Birch's number and the poke'nav started to ring."Hello?" said the Poke'nav."Hi,Birch! I just wanted to know,What is Treecko's eveloution path?" Red said. "Well,Treecko is first,then at level 16 he becomes a Grovyle,then at level 36 he becomes a Sceptile,But you have a long way to go before he evolves,Red" Said Birch."Thanks," Red said.Red put away the Poke'nav in his Bag,but then he heared somewon talking...It sounded like Professer Birch..."Red!,Red!" it screamed.But then it said:"Red! You Forgot to Turn the Pokenav off!" "Oops!,sorry" Said Red.He took out the Poke'nav and shut it off.Then he said:"Today...My pokemon journy begeins...And One day...I'll be the greatest Trainer in the world..."

So reply,and tell me what you think,and sometime soon i'll make chapter 2. (chapter 2 will be longer) (please reply soon)

And The More Replys I get,The faster i'll make the next chapter!
 
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Ok i'll keep going.
Chapter 2:Back in time
"Huff...Huff...Where is it?" Said the teenage boy.He heared deep breathing...everywhere..."A-ha!,oh-shoot!" said the teenage boy,he had attracted the Monsterish Beast."ROARTTEW!!" The beast screamed."Bye-Bye Beasty!" the teenage boy said as he held up a rock and started to teleport to a different universe.The Teenage boy found himself in a grassy area in a blink of an eye,Then He saw Red,He was in the middle of a Wild pokemon Battle,it was Treecko vs Deliberd,"Now treecko,use Pound!" Treecko aimed his fist at the wild deliberd,and managed to hit it.Deliberd then Shot a Ball of Ice at Treecko,And Treecko Became Frozen."T-re-e-ck-o-o" Treecko screamed.Suddenly The teenage boy threw some kind of pokeball at it,It was a Master ball.And of coarse,Deliberd was caught."Hey,What's the big idea? I'm the one who weakend it!" Said Red."Than It's yours" The teenage boy said.He tossed the Master ball to Red."y'know,Deliberd is a rare pokemon in theese areas,My name is Grey." Grey said."Uhh...Thanks...I'm Red." Red said."Nice to meet you,Red,Now tell me,Where are we?,And will you join me?" Said Grey."We are on route 4,and I'll join you...as long as your not a member of team Magma or Aqua..."Said red. "Me? of coarse not." Grey said. "Oh yeah,Why did you waste a master ball on delibrd?" Red said."Waste?,psh,I have plenty of em." Said Grey. "Wow!,Are you a pokemon Master?" asked Red."Sigh...It's a long story...but I guess you can hear it...I used to be a Pokemon Trainer like you...I had just gotten my Bulbasaur...when...the thing happened.....Or actully,I'm not going to tell you...it's to harsh on my soul...now come on,let's get out of here before a group of wurmple show up and String shot us to death.So Grey and Red Left Route 4.

Okay,I admit that chapter 2 wasn't longer than chapter 1,but tell me if the story is a yay,or a nay by replying,(I f I get a good review sometime today then i may just make chapter 3 today)
 
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Okay,I'm making chapter 3 now...
Chapter 3:By Dog Villans
It was 7:34 AM on Thursday morning,"Yawn!,'Morning Grey,'Morning Treecko," Said Red.But for some reason Grey wasn't there,and neither was Treeckoo's Pokeball!,After lunch Red wen't out to look for them,"GREY!!!....TREECKO!!!...".But Grey and Treecko were nowhere to be found.but then Red hered something,"Help!,Help!,Treeeeckoooo!!!," And that's when Red knew where they were!,they were at Dewford town! that's where his Grandma used to live,"GREY!,TREECKO!!!!" Red yelled,So Red ran to Dewford town as fast as he could,he raced through the tall grasses,and when wild pokemon appeared,he just ran them over,and when he reached a new town,he just ignored it,he was determined to get to Dewford town,When he finaly got there,Grey,and Treecko were tied up to a strange looking pole,they each had there own,and in front of them was a giant fire and a pool as deep as Trout lake,and in fron't of them were 2 teams,1 team had a red uniform and on there hood it looked like devil horns,on there toreso they had a big ''M'',and the other team wore a blue uniform,instead of a hood,they had bandanas,and on there toreso was a big ''A'',there were probably millions of these grunts,but the leaders were in front,they looked like the toughest Grunts of them all,there names were Maxie,for team Magma,and Archie for team Aqua."Give us what we want,Grey,and We'll set you free" Said Archie in a commanding voice."Never!,the world will plunge into chaos if I do!" Grey Yelled."Alright,have it your way,if you don't give us what we want,we will drop your little Green freind into this Fire,and may I remind you that this fire is 800 degrees farenhight!,Mwahahahah!" Said Maxie in an Evil voice."Treecko!,Grey! Noo!" Said Red."Huh? an Introuder? Well,Well,Welly,Well,Well,You are a Brave Young boy for coming here,But as the boss of team Magma,I have to do my duty...GRUNTS!,GET HIM!!!" said Maxie."Not if I can help it!,GO DELIBERD!" Said Red as Deliberd flew out of it's Pokeball,"Deliberrd!" Said Deliberd."Deliberd,use Blizzard!!!,Suddenly A giant Snowstorm came into place,it was Deliberd's Blizzard attack,When Red looked All of the Team Aqua and Magma Grunts were frozen solid,until a Mysterious Black Grunt said:"Salamence! Hyper Beam,GO!" Suddenly a Giant beam shot at Deliberd,And in a blink of an eye,Deliberd had fainted."Grr..Deliberd,Return" Said Red as He withdrew Deliberd to it's pokeball."Well we would love to stay and watch you kick our but,but wev'e gotta run" Said Archie as he pressed a Button and flew off.Suddenly Treecko fell of the pole and landed in the Fire,"TREEEEECKOOOO!!!!" Yelled Treecko."Quick,Red,Grab The Pokeball in my left pocket and tell it to use Hydro Pump,NOW!!!" Demanded Grey."I don't know..." Red said."RED!!! LISTEN TO ME!!! IF YOU WANT TO SAVE TREECKO YOU HAVE TO DO IT!!!,YOU MADE A PROMISE TO YOURSELF,AND TREECKO THAT YOU WOULD SAVE HIM AS LONG AS HE SAVED YOU,AND THAT YOU WANTED TO BECOME THE GREATEST TRAINER EVER,BUT YOU CAN'T DO THAT IF YOUR STARTER IS DEAD!!! NOW DO IT BEFORE TREECKO BURNS!!!" Yelled Grey."Okay!" said Red.He Grabbed the pokeball and shouted:"Go,Pokeball! Hydro Pump now!".Inside that pokeball was Suicune,It Opened it's mouth and a Giant Waterfall went towards the fire.The fire was gone,But treecko fainted,"Treecko!!!,Are you Okay???" Asked Red."T-re-eck-k-oo" Treecko said in a Weak voice,Suddenly Treecko turned really pale."We have to Get him to a PokemonCenter,Fast!!!" Yelled Grey.So they ran to a pokemon center as fast as they could...Treecko was About to die.

So You know the drill,REPLY,REPLY,REPLY!
 
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Dude,I haven't had any replys for the past few days (exept for mine)
But i'm still gunna make 2 chapters a day.
Chapter 4: Death Comes first,Work comes last.
As Grey and Red Scurried to a Pokemon center,they were blocked by a tourist,His name was Scott."Hey! Grey,Long time no see,Buddy!" Said Scott."Scott,Now is really not the time," Said Grey."Suicune! Hydro Pump!," Commanded Red.Suicune Shot a Big waterfall at Scott,and Scott flew up into space.When Red and Grey finaly got to the pokemon center,Red yelled:"I'M CARRYING A DYING TREECKO!!!,
DON'T JUST STAND THERE!!!! DO SOMTHING!!!!!".A Nurse Joy Ran Into
the Center,And Picked up Treecko,"Follow me!" She said.So our hereos wen't into the emergency room."Is He going to be Alright?" Grey asked."Uhh...Grey? Is it? I need to have a privite chat with the real trainer of this Treecko...I'm afraid i'm going to have to ask you to leave" Said Nurse Joy."Oh...Alright" Grey said as he left the room."Red,You are a great trainer,you really are,and I know that you only knew him for a short time now,but.....I'm afraid that Treecko is going to die".Nurse joy said.Red Suddenly Broke into tears,and he thought of all the times he had with Treecko...and then he thought of team Magma and Aqua...He knew that they would pay...he knew that justice would get revenge on evil...One day they would die...Red felt Flames in his eyes...flames of Revenge..."AARRGHH!!!,TEAM AQUA AND MAGMA MUST DIE!!" Red screamed as he ran out of the room."Red,What's wrong?,Where are you going???,RED!" Grey said as he chased Red out the door.At 11:54 PM Grey finaly found Red,he was on Route 116."Get away!!!,I'll kill you to!! I'm a monster!" said Red."Your Not a monster,And what do you mean by 'I'll kill you to'?" Asked Grey as he sat Down with Red."Well...Treecko...he's dead...".Said Red."Oh...,It's not your fault that he died,it's Team Magma and Aqua's" said Grey."ARRRGHHH!!!! I HATE THOSE NAMES!!!" Screamed Red."sigh...I didn't want to have to tell you this...but if your determined to bring Treecko back to life...we have to find
Ho-oh." Said Grey."How will that help!?!?!?!?" Yelled Red."Haven't you played any vidieo games? in Gold/Silver/Blue,they say that Ho-oh can bring back dead Pokemon." Answered Grey."I don't care what we have to do to get there! Were going tomorow morninig and that's final!" Yelled Red.

And that's the end of chapter 4.
 
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thankx superbla96,for a second i thaught you were somewon else,but then I looked at the username and it was you.

P.S. I won't do the next chapter until tommorow.(Or actully...I might do another one today...I don't know)
So Right Here Is called the Character panel,every time a New charachter comes into the story,i'll edit this reply so a new bio will be added,so here it is!

Red:A fun loving Male who Chose Treecko for his Starter,He is Nice,Kind,Funny,and sometimes He's kinda Stupid.But most of the time,he's just a nice guy.

Grey:A Partly Serious Male who chose Bulbasaur for his starter,but what happened to it,is Unknown,He got to Route 2 by teleporting,because he wanted to change the past so that the world dosen't plunge into darkness,he is from the future,and has alot of legendarys.

Team Aqua/Magma:A Group of crimanals who only want to take over the world,Scince They killed Red's Treecko,Red has a Grudge on them,and will one day get his revenge.

Denny:A fast talking Lovable Selfish Annoying little Skunk (he is not really a skunk)
his starter is unknown.

The Shadow Hunter:no description

Scott: A Tourist who ocasinaly shows up everywhere,other then that,no description.
 
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Uhhh...Thanks PantsDude...
So I'm feeling genourious,I'll make chapter 5 today,but i'm only making 1 chapter tommorow.
Chapter 5:A Flygon for Fire
The Next day,Grey and Red Set off to find Ho-oh.They climbed tall mountians,And Swan Giant Rivers,Until they got to a giant Rock tower."Well if this is the place where Ho-oh stays,than were gunna climb it" Said Red finaly starting to calm down.So as Red said,They Climbed the giant rock tower.Until they reached a Teenage boy,Red's age,"Hold it!-Hold it!-Hold it!,I'm the Trapinch Master,but you can call me: Denny,Now Knowon get's past here unless you beat me,but be warned I'm Really-Really good,Now Challange Me to a double Battle!!!" Said Denny."How Can We Double Battle If There is two of us,but only one of you?" Asked Grey."Like I said,I'm Really good so it'll take 2 of 'ya to get past me" Denny said."Alright,But don't say that I didn't warn ya,C'mon Red,Get Deliberd out of there and lets battle!" Said Grey."Ugh...Alright,Go Deliberd!" Said Red as Deliberd Poped out of it's Pokeball.
"Registeel! I choose you!" Grey said as a Registeel poped out of it's Pokeball."Ha! A Registeel and a Deliberd,Iv'e seen better...Get your lazy tail out there Flygon!,And You two Umbreon!" Said Denny as a Flygon and an Umbreon flew out of two pokeballs."Now Registeel! use Ancientpower on Umbreon!" Commanded Grey.Light Flew up and Rocks Lifted from the ground and fired at Umbreon."Umbreon! Dodge and use Tackle! and Flygon Use Fly on Deliberd!" Commanded Denny.As They were told,Umbreon Dodged and attacked Registeel,and Flygon flew up high."Okay,It's my turn!,Deliberd use Blizzard on Flygon AND Umbreon!" Yelled Red.Suddenly Flygon Started to come towards deliberd,Red knew that if Flygon hit Deliberd that it would be over,But just as Flygon was an inch away from Deliberd,Flygon and Umbreon became frozen,and Flygon fell to the ground with a thump."Thanks For freezing 'em Red,Now Registeel Hyper Beam on Umbreon AND Flygon!" Commanded Grey.Registeel Made a giant beam of light and fired at Denny's Pokemon."NO!!!" yelled Denny as the Beam Hit his Pokemon.Flygon and Umbreon Had fainted."Grrr...Flygon,Umbreon,return" Denny said as he withdrew his pokemon."Hey You,ya you,the guy with the Registeel,you are good,but you with the Deliberd,you are bad,take this pokemon and hopefully it will make you better" Denny Said as he tossed Red a Pokeball.Red caught it."whoa...Which pokemon is it?" Red asked."Why it's a Wobbaffet of coarse," Denny answered."Thanks!" Red said."Oh,yeah,Scince I gave you that pokemon,I get to join you,okay it's officail! i'm one of you now! lets go before anywon else tries to battle us buddys" Said Denny."Let's not argue..." whispered Grey to Red.

So Denny has joined the group!
REPLY!,REPLY!,REPLY!
 
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SWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!!!!

MORE!!! MORE!!!
 
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okay,Scince I got a good reveiw,I'm gunna make 2 chapters today,and here is one of them.
Chapter 6: A Flamewheel in the road
After a long walk up the hill,(it seemed even longer because Denny was talking alot) Our hereos were finaly almost there,but just when Denny stoped talking,A group of Charmeleon,1 Charmander,and 1 Poliwrath were blocking there way."Charmeeeleoon!!!!" one of the Charmeleon said."What I think it's trying to say is:Roar,This is our teritory,you can't pass here unless you beat us,Roar!!!" Denny said."That sounds alot like you,Denny" Red said Sarcasticly."Oh,Ha ha!,How humoures..." Denny said annoyingly.Just then Grey Stuck some ducktape on Denny's mouth and said:"Let's just fight theese guys and find Ho-oh"."Okay,Go Wobbaffet!" Red Said as Wobbaffet poped out of it's pokeball."Wobba,-Wobba!!!" said Wobbaffet."My turn,Jirachi! let's show theese punks who there messing with," Grey said as Jirachi poped out of a pokeball."Murhtemmhg---lutms righd!" Said Denny with Ducktape still over his mouth,Flygon poped out of it's pokeball."Charrrrrr...MELEON!!!!" Said a charmeleon as he used Metal Claw on Wobbaffet,"Grr...Wobbaffet!,use counter attack on Charmander! go!" Red said as Wobbaffet turned red and started to punch the charmander.Charmander looked really really weak,So in a suprise turn of events,Red threw a Pokeball at it,he waited until it shaked once,twice,three times,four times,and it was caught."YA!,I gots me a Charmander!!!" yelled Red in exitment."Uhh,Red i feel happy for you that you caught a Charmander,but Remember,we are still in a battle here," said Grey."Now jirachi,Finish this up with Psychic!" Yelled Grey.Jirachi was glowing with energy,and shot it at the Charmeleon gang.They fainted."Mutrehuoh!-houghoh!!!" Yelled Denny with ducktape still over his mouth,he seemed to be pointing at something,Grey and Red looked up in the sky,it was
Ho-oh!!!."Quick! after him!,Go Articuno!!!" Yelled Grey as An Articuno poped out of a pokeball."Quick,Red!, hop on!" Grey said as Red hopped on."Whadabhyrne?" Denny asked with ducktape still over his mouth.Insted of just staying there,Denny decided to hop on Flygon."Ho-oh!,It's me,Grey! We need you to bring back this Treecko!" Grey yelled over the soar of the wind,but Ho-oh just flew away."Come Back! We need you to Bring back this Treecko from the dead!!!" Red Yelled over the soar of the wind.Red was holding Treecko's body in the air when Ho-oh actully Swooped down and grabbed Treecko's Body."NOO!!! BAD BIRD!!!! BAD BIRD!!! HE'S NOT YOUR LUNCH HE'S A DEAD POKEMON!!! NOW BRING HIM BACK TO LIFE!!!" Yelled Red."If you don't give him life,I'm gunna capture you!" Yelled Grey."Alright,you asked for it! GO MASTER BALL!!!" Yelled Grey as he threw a Mater ball at Ho-oh,but insted of sucking up Ho-oh,Ho-oh just ate the Master ball."NOO!! ARGHH!!!" yelled Grey in frusterastion.But in a moment,Ho-oh didn't eat Treecko,insted he turned all yellow,and a giant beam of Light struck Treecko's Body,and in a minute,Ho-oh turned back to it's original color,and Treecko Started to open his eyes."Tree--ckoo" Treecko said as he could start to breath again.Then Ho-oh Grabbed Treecko.Treecko didn't know what was going on,and of coarse,Treecko was strugling to break free of Ho-oh's grip,but then he looked down,and he stoped trying to strugle.And So Ho-oh handed Treecko to Red."Oh Treecko,*i missed ya' buddy*" Said Red as a Tear came to his eye."Mufmugduhduhmuuglt"
Said Denny with Ducktape STILL over his mouth.So Grey just ripped the ducktape of."OWWW!!!!!,WATCH THE FACE,MAN!!!,I THINK THE PLACE WHERE THE DUCKTAPE WAS IS RED RIGHT NOW!!! OWWW!!!!!" Said Denny in pain as Red,Grey,and Treecko laughed.

And that's the End of Chapter 6!!! REPLY!!! REPLY!!! REPLY!!!
 
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Okay,I'll make some more.
Chapter 7: the Shadow Hunter.
Deep in the forest,lives a Man,So Strong,that he is even more powerful than Grey,And His goal in life is to concour any place,become the most powerful man in the world,and not in a good way,Acording to legend,He used to be a member of team Magma,but then,he became to power hungry,and diped himself in the Jewel water.The Jewel Water is a lake,It was made by combineing all of the super jewels,The Super Emerald,the super Ruby,the super Sapphire,the Super Diamond,and the super pearl.Anywon who dips themself in the lake,will become immuned,but they will become possesed,and if they touch somewon else,the other person will become possesed.A Yellow eye will apear on there forehead,and nothing can bring them back.Plus if you have been possesed,you have the power to morph things into the most powerful thing alive.If somewon were to morph the most powerful pokemon in the world,the universe would end,That is the Shadow hunter's goal,unless somewon more powerful than the Shadow hunter beats him in a pokemon battle without touching him,the world will one day plunge into chaos.
.....

"Yawn!,What's For Dinner?" Asked Denny in a selfish voice."Dinner?,psh,Why are you asking me? go get it yourself" Said Grey."uh,Go get it MYSELF?? ARE YOU CRAZY?? WERE OUT IN THE MIDDLE OF THE FOREST,I MIGHT TRIP ON A THORNBUSH,OR STEP IN MUD!!!" Complained Denny."Meh,No pain,no game,all i'm exited about is that Treecko isn't gunna see the light anytime soon" Said Red.
"Ugh,fine i'll go get it myself....I forget,Do Steaks live in the water?" asked Denny."Do you mean Snakes? because they arn't that tasty" answerwed Grey."Uh,No,I mean Steaks,y'know,the really chewy meat,the reason that cows set foot on the earth,Duh'!" Said Denny."Just go get your supper,Me and Red are gunna hit the hey" Grey said.Denny Stook his tounge out at grey and wen't to go get some food.But When He was coming back with some Fish,He was stoped by a strange Black man."Are you tired? or just wan't a Break?" the Strange Black man said.For a second,Denny thaught that he was a tourist,but then he changed his mind."Okaaay...Whatever your selling,I don't want it,now G'night" Denny said.He was mumbling something,but you couldn't tell what."What if i make it up to you?" the Strange Black man said.Denny stoped and turned around."What are you saying?..." Denny asked."I'm Saying that you should let ME take over YOUR body,and if you agree,I'll put you in the best place in the world!" The strange Black man said."Okay,man,your starting to freak me out right now so i'm just gunna-" Denny Suddenly Got Swirly eyes in the middle of his scentene,he droped his fish,and said:"What...Can...I...Do...For you my...my...Master...?".
Insted of answering,The strange Black Man looked like he was ripping out his spirit,Then Denny did the same,The strange Black man's spirit wen't into Denny's body,and Denny's Spirit went into the sky,higher,and higher,until you could not see it.Suddenly,Denny's body snapped out of his confusion,And The Strange Black man took over."Mwahahahahahahahahah!!!" laughed The strange black man (in Denny's body),But Meanwhile,Far far away,The real Denny woke up in his own body,"W-hoa...Wha?..." He said in confusion,but he quickly snapped out of it when he looked around him,he was laying on every kind of meat he could ever imagine,Steak,Bacon,Ribs,Eveything! and it was all as far as the eye can see,But just when Denny thaught things couldn't get better,when he blinked,There was Millions of pure Gold coins,and the best part was,He was all alone..."WHOOOOOOOO!!
YA BABY!!!!,YAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!,WHOOOOOOO!!!!!" Screamed Denny.He was so happy,that he even started to do All sorts of Dances,But then when he was in the middle of doing the robot,a young girl was actuly behind him the hole time,and then she said:"What are you doing?".Denny Froze,then he turned around."HEY!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY MEAT PALACE!?!?!?!?" Denny Asked."What Meat Palace?,Are you Crazy?" Said the little girl as Denny Picked up a Steak and started to eat it."What do you mean? We are surrounded by Meat,And Gold" Said Denny."psh,Ya,I wish,we are really in the middle of nowhere,and I think that your Marage ends now" The little girl said.Suddenly Everything started to disapear,and all the Gold coins and Meat prodoucts started to dissapear,and they were replaced with sand...lots and lots of sand...but then Denny was confused,If he wasn't eating a REAL steak...than what was he eating? he quickly looked down at his so called "Steak" and it turns out that he was really eating a large tin can with sand in it,and a squishy brown thing with flys buzzing around it (that's were he took the biggest bites).Denny imeadeatly dropped the very disturbing can and froze for 5 to 10 minutes.
"AAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!" He finaly yelled,then he fainted.

And that's the end of chapter 7! this one had alot of comedy!
REPLY!,REPLY!,REPLY!
 
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Chapter 8 is now aboard! with comedy,(Denny Style) so here it is!
Chapter 8: Spying With A Jerk
And so,The Strange black man (in Denny's body) picked up the fish and wen't to the campsite,Red and Grey were asleep,So the fake Denny walked up to Grey,and kneeled down,he tried to get his pokeball for Registeel,but Grey had a tight grip on it.
"Ugh!,C'mon,C'MON!!!!,BUDGE ALREADY!!!" The Fake Denny shouted.But then It seemed That Grey woke up."Uhhh....What are you doing with my Registeel?" Grey asked.The Fake Denny was still in the pose that he was when Grey was asleep."Uhhhh...I brought Breakfeast!" The Fake Denny Lied."Breakfeast? It is 1:56 AM!!!! and Scince when do you offer YOUR food to other people?" Asked Grey."Scince Now! I have learned that Money Can't bye happyness" The Fake Denny lied again."I think something is wrong with you,were going to take you to a non-Pokemon Doctor in the morning,now good night" Grey said as he rolled over.
Meanwhile,In the middle of nowhere...
"Huff...Huff...IS THERE ANY WAY TO GET OUT OF HERE????" Asked Denny to the little girl."Well...Do you see that tree?" said the little girl.
"Uhhh....Yes..." said Denny."There is a button on that tree,it will teleport you to where your brain wants you to go...but there is only
enough energy for 1 person to go...and me and my freinds all need foster homes,we are also orphans,and we found out that if we don't get to a doctor in time,we might die...so we don't know who is the sickest,whoever is the sickest get's to-" The little girl was interupted by Denny As he ran to the tree."Whoo!!! thanks for the way out!!! So long Suckers!!!!" Denny then pushed the button and teleported out of there.The little girl froze."JERK!!!!!" She yelled.
Meanwhile in the middle of the forest...
"YAWN!!! G'Mornin' Treecko,G'Mornin' Grey,'Mornin Denny" Said Red. "Let's Go to a non-Pokemon doctor,Denny has been acting a little strange..." Said Grey.But then something strange happened,The fake Denny's Spirit was sucked out,and it flew into the sky,and then another spirit flew down and landed in Denny.Denny then shook his head,and said:"Whew,Alright,Funs over,let's head to To the town with the first gym in it and then lets let Red here challange it,lets just get it over with,"."Oh yeah! I forgot,Roxxane is supposed to be really tough!" Said Red.
And So,With Denny back in his own body,our hereos are of to challange the first gym.

And that's the end of chapter 8!
REPLY!,REPLY!,REPLY!
 
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COOOOL!!!!!! (lol! funny)

I'M ALWAYS GUNNA CHECK OUT YOUR FANFICS FROM NOW ON!!!
 
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