The Dark Magic

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Story Line: Long time ago before Pokemon were used as Pokemon there were people called Mages.The Mages were not all evil and not all good.There was a group of villages that started to fight other villages for certain jewels.These jewels weren't jewels like the ones we have now....They were jewels made from magic that helped your mage and there were weapons...The Yurinos, the people who made the jewels and were the most powerful magicians who controlled the land.After seeing the people fight for the Jewel they sacerficed themselves to hide the jewels.After 100,000 years later people still kept on looking so three magicians Trent(12), Roy(12), and Christy(11) search for the jewels.

1.Sound Jewel
2.Water Jewel
3.Fire Jewel
4.Dark Jewel
5.Techic Jewel
6.Electric Jewel
7.Control Jewel
8.Slice Jewel
9.Dizzy Jewel
10.Sky Jewel
11.Metronome Jewel
12.Weather Jewel


Trent:"Hey Roy want to see Christy turn into a frog?"

Roy:"Stop acting so stupid and get back to work.Besides we have to look for the Hunt Belt for our mission.Do you want to become a Trencho again?We always failed because of you Trent..."

Trent:"Hey I am not the one who flunked all of us everytime you know!"

Christy:"Sure....Whatever..."

Roy:"Besides we are already failing and if we don't make this one we will get kicked out!I sure wanted to join Hongi and Reno but because of Magician Horn...."

Christy:"Why do we have to be stuck with you?Anyways I am a fire magician so I can't find the belt and Roy is a Dark Magician so he can't find the belt so since you are a Fighting/Sky/Metronome Magician you find it!"

Trent:"Fine.....Metronome Spell...Random Darkness!"

The whole weather becomes dark...Everything becomes so dark you can even see anything...

Christy:"What the heck....We told you find it not hide it!Fire Spell....Flaring Fox!"

Everything becomes light and it turns into evening...

Roy:"Hurry up we only have 8hours left!I guess I'll have to....

Christy and Trent:"No don't do it!"
 
does this have anything to do with pokemon? Or will have to do with pokemon? Im just wondering.....or is it under a whole new grounds?
 
pokemonfreak359 said:
Story Line: Long time ago before Pokemon were used as Pokemon there were people called Mages.The Mages were not all evil and not all good.There was a group of villages that started to fight other villages for certain jewels.These jewels weren't jewels like the ones we have now....They were jewels made from magic that helped your mage and there were weapons...The Yurinos, the people who made the jewels and were the most powerful magicians who controlled the land.After seeing the people fight for the Jewel they sacerficed themselves to hide the jewels.After 100,000 years later people still kept on looking so three magicians Trent(12), Roy(12), and Christy(11) search for the jewels.

1.Sound Jewel
2.Water Jewel
3.Fire Jewel
4.Dark Jewel
5.Techic Jewel
6.Electric Jewel
7.Control Jewel
8.Slice Jewel
9.Dizzy Jewel
10.Sky Jewel
11.Metronome Jewel
12.Weather Jewel


Trent:"Hey Roy want to see Christy turn into a frog?"

Roy:"Stop acting so stupid and get back to work.Besides we have to look for the Hunt Belt for our mission.Do you want to become a Trencho again?We always failed because of you Trent..."

Trent:"Hey I am not the one who flunked all of us everytime you know!"

Christy:"Sure....Whatever..."

Roy:"Besides we are already failing and if we don't make this one we will get kicked out!I sure wanted to join Hongi and Reno but because of Magician Horn...."

Christy:"Why do we have to be stuck with you?Anyways I am a fire magician so I can't find the belt and Roy is a Dark Magician so he can't find the belt so since you are a Fighting/Sky/Metronome Magician you find it!"

Trent:"Fine.....Metronome Spell...Random Darkness!"

The whole weather becomes dark...Everything becomes so dark you can even see anything...

Christy:"What the heck....We told you find it not hide it!Fire Spell....Flaring Fox!"

Everything becomes light and it turns into evening...

Roy:"Hurry up we only have 8hours left!I guess I'll have to....

Christy and Trent:"No don't do it!"
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I like it!
 
Thanks guys!I don't know if people want pokemon i'll put pokemon in it.

Roy:"Hurry up we only have 8hours left!I guess I'll have to....

Christy and Trent:"No don't do it!"

Roy:"I'm not tranforming into a dark wizard i'm just going to use my Itemfinder Spell.Itemfinder Spell....Item Identify!"

Roy looks around with his spell and can see through anything as he looks around he sees Trent and then Christy and turn around quickly since he doesn't want to be a pervert.He keeps on looking when he sees that Trent has it in his pocket...

Roy:"What the heck?Trent you had that Hunt Belt all along and you didn't tell us!"

Trent:"Oh ya I forgot that I had that..."

Christy:"No time to argue we have to go quickly....We only have 2minutes to spare hurry up gather around i'm gonna ahve to use my transportation spell....Although I only have a few mana left... Transportation Jitsu.....Train Choot!"

Trent, Roy, and Christy teleport to their Magic School and runs to the classroom to give Magician Horn the Hunt Belt.

Trent, Roy, and Christy:"Huff-puff....We have the Hunt Belt...."

Magician Horn:"Can I have it please?"

Roy:"Trent give him the belt."

Trent looks in his poecket but doesn't have it...

Trent:"I don't have it..."

Christy:"You idiot its not the time to joke around give it!"

Magician Horn:"I guess you guys ahve to either get kicked out or challenge the Cronos...."

Trent, Roy, and Christy:"Cronos!!!They are so hard and powerful dragon creatures...But we except!"
 
well you can say like the people use pokemon attacks or something as a special spell....just a suggestion but i like it keep going. Very interesting!
 
i don't know... i was hoping for a pokemon story... but its ok...
 
Nice idea!Oh and thanks guys my other stories were kinda of not sucess...

Trent:"I don't have it..."

Christy:"You idiot its not the time to joke around give it!"

Magician Horn:"I guess you guys have to either get kicked out or challenge the Cronos...."

Trent, Roy, and Christy:"Cronos!!!They are so hard and powerful dragon creatures...But we except!"

Magicain Horn teleports Trent, Christy, and Roy to the Battle Arena. There are alot of their friends there such as Hongi, Reno, Frensy, Floara, Exerze, and a bunch of other people.There the Crono stood as it looked like a dragon with red scaly skin and blue eyes.They were about twice Christy's size.

Floara:"I bet you guys will lose I mean you guys look like a bunch of twigs battling a bear or something."

Hongi:"That is the msot stupid quote I've ever heard!I can't believe a person in my team would say such a thing!"

Floara:"Shut up!"

Christy got ready as she pulled out her Red Staff.It looked elegant and had a shiny coat. She was indeed the first princess from the Fire Kingdom but instead she took the path to the mages instead.

Trent and Roy too got ready as they grabbed their Dark Staff and White Staff.They were all scared and nervous but they had to or else...

Referee:"You may begin your challenge!"

Crono:"Dragon Spell....Dragon Pulse!"

A burst of purple waves was going at Christy.However Christy had an idea....She tleported Trent to her area and her to his area.

Trent:"Hey!"

Christy:"Trent use your air strike to fly it off to the dragon!Dragons are weak to themselves!"

Trent:"What?!?!?!Oh....Flying Spell.....Air Back!Make the air fly it to the Crono!"

Roy:"Dark Spell.....Evil Aura!"

The Aura fly to the wave of the dragon and span around it making the Dragon Pulse more powerful!The Pulse flew to the Crono! The Crono laughed as he flew up in the air making the Pulse bounce back and hit Roy!

Roy:"Ughh......That feels...bad....My stomach.....It feels.."

Christy:"Are you ok?Trent its all your fault!"

Trent:"Why is it my fault?"

Exerze:"Here we go again...."

Crono:"Hehehe is that all you got?I bet my pet can even do better than that!Electric Spell....Volt Tackle!"

Christy:"Teleporting spell.....Teleport Aura!"

The gang teleported making the Dragon run into the Arena making the Crono get hurt and fall down!

Chrsity:"Did we beat him?"
 
#1: thats just spam. #2: he's probably sleeping or something.
 
also sorry... (i seem to get in trouble for mini-modding alot....) anyway, great story. i like the stone names.
 
Crono:"Hehehe is that all you got?I bet my pet can even do better than that!Electric Spell....Volt Tackle!"

Christy:"Teleporting spell.....Teleport Aura!"

The gang teleported making the Dragon run into the Arena making the Crono get hurt and fall down!

Chrsity:"Did we beat him?"

Crono secretly acted like he was fainted and then used a spell quietly...

Crono:"Hidden Spell.....Disappear Reappear!Hehehe think you can find me?Can you even attack me?I'll keep on attacking you with my spells to keep you busy and die..!"

Christy:"So I guess we didn't beat him...."

Roy:"Here's the plan guys.We will have to find him some how and we don't know where he is.....I will use my Dark Aura to track him while you guys distract.This takes alot of stamina so you have to make sure nothing happpens to me..."

Trent:"Why do you always get the stage?I want to be famous too!"

Christy:"Umm..How about you are so stupid so hurry up and come!"

Crono:"Hurricane Spell.....Typhoon Control!"

Trent:"I feel.....wierd it feels like I'm flying or something..."

Christy:"You dummy you are flying watch out he'll slam you to the ground!"

Exerze:"This Crono is tough..."

Floara:"Exerze you think they might lose"

Exerze:"There is a 75% chance that Crono will win...."

Trent:"Metronome Spell.....Gravity!"

Trent then flew to the ground with laughter and then smiled and Crono....

Trent:"Is that all you got?"

Roy:"Good job Trent!Dark Spell.....Dark Aura!"

Crono:"What?!?!?!?!?"
 
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