Writing Shaymin's "Web" Comics!

Discussion in 'Creative Works' started by The Last Shaymin, Apr 14, 2018.

  1. go fish.jpg
    First color comic!

    Not to sound whiny or anything, but can I have some feedback?
     
    Last edited: May 31, 2018


  2. GamePhoenix Halfpop Enthusiast
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    As someone who reads a lot of comics, these are pretty good! I Like the art style as well, it has a charm kind of like GradeAUnderA's videos do. I like the puns and wordplay a lot, everyone has made me chuckle so far. Also, the name ('web" comics) is pure gold!
     
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  3. AggroAggron Pokemon "Specialist"
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    Lol you told me to read this a ton irl, but its good anyways. xD
     
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  4. sorry about the slow post... Webtoon style comic! how do you like it?
    monster.jpg

    lol thanks to whatever mod put it in a spoiler...

    didnt think of that
     
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  5. hopefully this will make up for how bad last comic was :(
    fan.jpg
     
    Last edited: Aug 3, 2018
  6. Lord Goomy Got Goomies?
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    What’s to feed back about? These are PERFECT!!!!
     
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  7. Thanks!

    For feedback, I'm looking for opinions of art style, story, etc. If one of them is complete garbage, TELL ME. PLEASE.
     
  8. I'm sorry guys, but "web" comics will be on hiatus over the summer. maybe. *wink*
     
  9. GamePhoenix Halfpop Enthusiast
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    NUUUUUUU!
     
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  10. notice the wink
     
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  11. sketch-1531841903778.png here's a logo...

    Drawing this on a smartphone screen was kinda difficult...

    Oh and @bbninjas can you put it into the OP? I can't edit the logo thing
     
  12. Lady Jirachu Corni Triox Aspiring Trainer
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    Those are very good, you are very creative.
    Great job
     
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  13. Hi so web comics will be on webtoons eventually so here is a tidbit of new art done by my friend who will be drawing the new comic

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  14. that ivy guy Aspiring Trainer
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    Not to diminish your own art, but this is a significant upgrade, and I'm genuinely excited for what this collab has in store!
     
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  15. yeah, my friend has a ipad/apple pen unlike me who is stuck using styluses on my mobile phone
     
  16. GamePhoenix Halfpop Enthusiast
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  17. *her, but shes probably not offended or anything so dont flip out

    oh, and she responded...
    yay?
     
    Last edited: Aug 21, 2018
  18. Lord Goomy Got Goomies?
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    Next episode: Spider Man!
     

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