Seth's journey... a fan-fic (Chapter 1 Section B Complete!)

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Chapter 1 Section A – A Start of a Journey!

A Bidoof alarm clock started ringing. Seth slowly stuck his hand out from under his covers and hit the bedroom’s head. The ringing stopped. Seth slowly sat up stretching his arms, yawning, and rubbed his eyes. He stood up.
He got dressed with his usual cacky pants with a poke ball symbol on them. (Identical to the one on May’s headband) He put on a black undershirt then put on his poke vest which consisted of one poke ball symbol and designs assorted. They were red, black, and white… same with his clothes! He then put his pokemon hat over his bushy hair and slowly started to walk downstairs as he grabs his backpack. He’s treated to the sweet smell of pancakes, eggs, and bacon. He eagerly digs into the food lied out for him. He swallows down some fresh moo moo milk. He wipes his mouth and grins.
“That was delicious mom! I’m all pumped up now!” Seth states.
“Your welcome Seth, now do you have everything packed?” asks Seth’s mother.
“Yup, but just to make sure I made a checklist!” he says. He pulls out a pen from a drawer and pulls out a sheet of paper from his pocket. He puts his tongue on his lips as he furiously starts marking things here and there and referring to his backpack.
His mother quickly waved her hands in a stopping motion. “That’s okay honey, I trust you!” she smiles.
“That’s alright, I’m done! I’m already.” He says.
“I’m going to miss you honey.” She frowns.
“I love you mom. “He says as he starts to head off.
“Wait,” his mom quickly blurted out. He turned and saw her hand extended to him. He looked in her hand. “Here” she said.
He looked and saw a master ball and some assorted items1
“Whoa! Where’s you get all this stuff!” he said excitedly.
“Your father… he wanted me to give them to you when you left for your journey.” She said.
“Dad…” he said glooming, “Thanks mom I’ll use them wisely!” he suddenly said cheerfully!
She could see the determination in his eyes. As Seth started to walk off she thought to herself, “So much like your Father used to be…”

Later Seth started walking to professor Rowans’ Lab. As he finally got there he couldn’t help but look around. “Gorgeous!” he thought to himself. He headed inside.
“Ah, Seth Welcome!” a voice said.
“Professor Rowan?” he asked.
A man appeared from another room, “I’m not Professor Rowan, I’m Professor Oak!” Professor Oak said.
“Well then where’s Professor Rowan?” Seth asked.
“He and his crew went to do some experiments up in Mt.Cornet.” Professor Oak stated. “So I’m filling in!”
“Oh, ok. So what pokemon do you have for me?” he asked.
“Well I have a surprise! I managed to bring one Johto starter and one Kanto starter over here!” said Professor Oak.
“Awesome where are they?” he asked.
“Uhm… funny thing… All the Johto and Kanto pokemon ran off. They aren’t used to Sinnoh yet so they instinctively ran away. They headed into Jubilife City…” Professor Oak said.
Seth sighed, “Just my luck” he said sadly.
“No worry, take the one Sinnoh pokemon with you as you go so it can aid you. Then take the pokemons' balls and the pokedex to identify the pokemon!” Professor Oak said.
“Thanks I’ll try my best!” Seth said.
“Good luck, and the pokemon missing, their names are Totodile, and Charmander!” he shouted as Seth left.
To be continued…
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Chapter 1 Section B – A Start of a Journey!

"Man that Oak guys so weird..." Seth thought to himself... he looked at the Pokemon's poke ball that Professor Oak gave him to use. "I wonder who it is? Never hurts to see huh?"
He threw the poke ball and it landed with a thud. "What, maybe that's the wrong one..." he rummaged through his backpack. He threw another poke ball. It still landed with a thud. "Why do I even bother" he frantically looked for the last poke ball. He finally found it but he juggled it has he accidentally let it fall. Just his luck once again a river was right up ahead.
"No..." he thought to himself. "Come back!" he dove for the ball... he barely missed and it fell into the lake. "No!!!!" Seth shouted.
He dove into the water. He started to go under. "Oh yeah... I can't swim..." It just wasn't Seth's day. He sat there sputtering for air every time the current pulled him up. "Hel...gahhbkjajdhl... he...aujhjhbcj" he said as he went up and down. As he arms flailed in the air he felt a smooth hand grab his. "I'm saved?" he said. He blacked out after this.
Later he woke up and found himself on the shore of the river he had almost drowned in. He looked next to him and saw the poke ball. He really wasn't in the mood for something bad to happen again but he threw the poke ball finally. It burst open... and it held a ...
"Turtwig?" he said groaning. Out of every Pokemon he was stuck with Turtwig. His head hung low and sighed. "Hi..."
"Turt..." it said angrily. It jumped at Seth and tackled him.
"Hey!" Seth shouted. "I'm not in the mood right now. I just nearly drowned, almost lost the poke ball and my... MY BACKPACK!" he looked around the area frantically. It must be up the river where I fell. But who knows who or what has gone off with it. He suddenly heard a rustle in the bushes...
He looked at the bush slowly. He didn't know what was there. Suddenly a huge figure jumped from out of the bushes and grabbed Turtwig. It was so fast he didn't know what just happened. "Turtwig..." he mumbled. "I'm sorry..." he said as he fell down to the ground and started to cry. He slowly got back up a minute later wiping away his tears. "Might as well go find my backpack" he said walking back upstream. He found that he went a lot further down the river than he though when he was washed away. But he then noticed a twig and a rock sitting in the same place. "Haven't I seen that before?" he thought...
He kept walking and pretty son he saw it again. He was lost... It just wasn't Seth's day. He then heard a loud roar. "What was that?" he thought to himself. As he heard it again he saw a little figure in the distance. It's ears were perked. It was A Buneary. He then saw it get closer. It was running... from what?
He then looked above him as he saw a huge flock of Starly, Staravia, and Staraptor fly away quickly the same way Buneary was. Soon after he saw herds after herds of misc. Pokemon running... "Why are they running!?" he thought to himself once again.
He started to walk up where all the Pokemon had been. As he was walking a small Pokemon hit his leg and fell over. It was a small Charmander. "Charmander... CHARMANDER!" he thought excitedly. He tried to pick it up but it started to light his mouth with fire and it ran away quickly. "Wait!" he shouted... "But why wasn't he in the city... did he not get there" he was interrupted by a loud roar. He looked around, he saw trees falling over and powerful beams going everywhere right in the thick trees to his right. These started fires and he wasn't worried about those as much as his own life. He then saw the tree in front of him fall and a Pokemon appeared. "Holy co...." Seth said before the Pokemon's roar defended his shout out. "I'm going to die... I just know it... he closed his eyes trying to escape the truth. "I'm sorry Turtwig, I'm sorry dad, I'm sorry Charmander, I've let you all down" he thought for his few final moments... he peeked one quick sight at hs attacker... but there wasn't just one, there were over 20 easily... they all roared in unison and charged at Seth. He fell to the ground has he clasped his ears as he prayed... "Don't let me die, don't let me die" and then the heard of Pokemon ...
To be continued…
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Ok here's the main plot...

A guy named Seth starts his journey in Chapter 1... he heads off but has to help people on misc. things. He comes to be a great gym battler and he plays contests on the side for fun. He learns that there's a nefarious group that is causing so many things to go wrong that make him fix it. He stes out to rescue the prof. Rowan, get all gym badges, defeat the nefarious group and become the pokemon master!

Here's my chapter format so far:
Chapter 1: A start of a journey Sections: ***A ***B **C
*Chapter 2: Sections: *A *B *C
*Chapter 3: Sections: *A *B *C
*Chapter 4: Sections: *A *B *C
etc.

***=done
**=needs to be typed
*=nothing


I have made Chapter 1 on paper I just need to type it. Also, I divide my Chapters into sections A, B, and C. This way, when I post something it won't be a "whole" chapter yet. Like I've only written Chapter 1 Section A:p

Characters:
Seth (Main Character)
Seth's Mom (Seth's Mom XD)
Proffesor Oak
Professor Rowan
Gym Leaders
Samuel (Rival)
Pokemon Contestant Rival (to be announced)
Rob (travels with Seth)
...

Character Form:

Name:
Gender:
Team:
Personalitly:
Background:
*TC:
Appearence:

*=not required


This is still just coming along and I hope this one won't die like the last...

thanks:p
~bonsly1994
 
RE: Seth's journey... a fan-fic (Chapter 1 Section A Complete!)

does this mean we can suggest things to be in the story?

like characters and their pokemon?
 
RE: Seth's journey... a fan-fic (Chapter 1 Section A Complete!)

That was pretty good!Moo moo milk I wonder what it tastes like he had a BIG breakfast!

Name:Samuel (Likes to be called Sam)
Gender:Male
Team:Ditto, Eevee, Squirtle
Personalitly:He has a temper but he likes to battle.He can be furious some times but he likes to cool down.During his travels he befriended with Ditto which he likes to play with.
Background:He came from a rich family of four but he decided to run away to become a pokemon master.Since everyone was looking for him he wears disguises.
*TC:
Appearence:Rival?Friend?Travels with Seth....I don't know you pick.
 
RE: Seth's journey... a fan-fic (Chapter 1 Section A Complete!)

Sam should be Seth's friend and pf359, plase post your surfbvoard in the contest!
 
RE: Seth's journey... a fan-fic (Chapter 1 Section A Complete!)

oh cool. what about...

Name : rob
Gender: male
Team: totodile(the missing one), a mysteroius egg
personality: he is a breeder, fairly new. he found the totodile when leaving the pokemon school to set off to see professor rowan, and he keeps it, before bumping (literally) into seth.
background: secretly is the son of a famous contest mother, but does not mention it- he wants to be seen as a good breeder on his own.
*tc:
appearance: long green baggy trousers,(rolled up) a green t shirt with a purple 6 sided star on it (like colourless enegy star on the cards) and a purple scarf. he also has black hair with yellow highlights.

is that ok?
 
RE: Seth's journey... a fan-fic (Chapter 1 Section A Complete!)

awesome 4me4them! I'll definetely add him! pf359... he'll be his rival and he'll be alot less nice...XD
also I think this should be his pokes:

at the start: Squirtle, Munchlax
 
RE: Seth's journey... a fan-fic (Chapter 1 Section A Complete!)

[attachment=3124]also i have sprited a representaion of the character for visual purpose if oyu want. it s in the atchment.
 

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wow did you make that? I like everything but the yes and that hair... could you fix that? that's awesome! and how do you like section b so far?
 
RE: Seth's journey... a fan-fic (Chapter 1 Section A Complete!)

cool ill fix the hair, no problem! (i didnt really like it eaither but i will try again!) :)

section B looks awesome cant wait to read on!

Edit: i have redone the hair, what do you think of it?

i have also gave him an egg. if you want i can change the colours to match a different pokemon.
 

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make it yellow:p thanks so much!
 
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like... this?
 

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yeah! thanks so much... section B should be done by later today!:p
 
loooks good, but it need to have more characters added, like the person who stole turtwig and stuff. you should get other people to send in trainer names.
 
Name: Ryan
Gender: Male
Team: Jolteon (Starter), and Buizel
Personalitly: Always looking for a battle, very fast on his feet, smart thinker
Background: Started on his pokemon journey barely a week ago, but has already found a Buizel to acompany him. He travels with Seth.
Appearence: Dark green hair, grey collared tee shirt, blue jeans, black and green shoes

If i'm in, can i please travel with Seth?
 
thanks for the advice 4me4them...

uhm.... I already have another guy traveling with him... could you make a girl character? And no Jolteon, I don't like that... thanks though!
 
well I need a girl to travel with him... I don't know what I'll do with another boy... o_O
I know, that'll be his contest rival! But I still need a girl!
 
can i be the contest friend then
Character Form:

Name:kiony
Gender:male
Team: espeon umbreon roserade(contest buddy's) gabite ursaring (powerhouses) empoleon (starter
Personalitly: hard working and prepared but also quick to be mad
Background:is in contest for a long time and won the jotho grand festival then began his training in mt silver before he began he's journey in sinnoh
*TC:later
Appearence:dark hair (like sasuke look at my avatar) with a black and red jacket with jeans he's rather cool but as said quick temperd sees seth in his first contest in sinnoh he's seth's friend but still he travels alone but sees seth when there's a contest

and it's super ti'll now i hope the fan fic because cooler and cooler by the minute
 
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