Writing Practice for my fanfic

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I ain't that good with fanfic's so I decided to practice with a episode of pokemon I made.So here is a practice but this is not going to be in the fanfic if I make it.





Ash and his friends,Brock and Misty,were walking in the woods.Pika!Pika! said Pikachu.Pikachu saw something on the path.Two strange people stopped them.This is our new Poke Pod,said one.



We want to try it out.Can we use your Pikachu?The two strange people took Pikachu.They put Pikachu in the Poke Pod.Then they took off their glasses and coats.Team Rocket!Ash cried.We tricked you,said Jessie.Now we have your Pikachu! said James.Team Rocket ran off with Pikachu.


Team Rocket had a plan.Jessie gave Pikachu to her Wobbuffet.Then Wobbuffet ran away.But Wobbuffet fell into a river.Ash caught Pikachu just in time.Now open this Poke Pod right now!Ash told Team Rocket.The Poke Pod will not open without a key,Jessie said.



Then give me the key,Ash said.We can't,Jessie said.Wobbuffet has the key!Catch that Wobbuffet!Ash cried.Wobbuffet floated down the river.Ash and his friends ran after Wobbuffet.Team Rocket chased Wobbuffet too.Thump!Wobbuffet bumped into a Quagsire.Quagsire,said Quagsire.Quagsire showed Wobbuffet how to get to land.



Wobbuffet got out of the water.It climbed up a tree.It held on to a vine.It swung from tree to tree.Everyone chased Wobbuffet through the woods.They ran down a hill.Where is Wobbuffet?Ash asked.Wobbuffet is up there!Jessie cried.A tree branch stuck out of the hill.Poor Wobbuffet was hanging from the branch.



Zoom!A truck came speeding down the road.Wobbuffet fell.It landed on the truck.Then Officer Jenny droved up.Step aside,she said.We have to catch that truck.A thief named Ganef is in that truck,said Officer Jenny.We have to catch that truck too,Ash said.He told her about Wobbuffet.Get in fast! said Officer Jenny.



Ash and his friends got into the police car.The police caught up to Ganef.I will get away in my balloon!Ganef cried.But Wobbuffet got in the baloon first!Everyone watched Wobbuffet fly away.Team Rocket got in their balloon.They chased after Wobbuffet.Wobbuffet jumped into Team Rockets balloon.But Wobbuffet broke the balloon by mistake!



Wobbuffet fell to the ground.Ash called on his Chikorita.Chikorita,Use Vine Whip to catch Wobbuffet!Ash yelled.Chikorita grabbed Wobbuffet with its vines.Wobbuffet fell into a speedboat.





To Be Continued
(It has to be continued tommorow because my mom said I have to go to bed)
 
Dude, no offense, but keep practicing, Your word choice is awful, you skip ahead ti the climax without even trying to give and introduction, and you dialog and format is completely messed. Just keep trying, and eventually youll get it right :)
 
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