Pokemon:The Ventro Region!

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CrazyAipom

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Introduction

In the world of pokemon,there are many stories.Stories of heroes,villians,and legends.Stories of humans and pokemon working together.This is the story of Josh.He has turned 10 years old,meaning he gets to choose his first pokemon....

Chapter 1:To the lab!

*knock on door*
"Josh get up!"
"I'm up already mom!"
"Sorry,it's just that today's the day"
"I know!Why do you think I got up so early?I'm so excited!"
"Do you know what pokemon you're going to choose?"
"I.....no."
"Don't worry,I'm sure you'll you make your mind up."
*Josh and his mom sit down to eat breakfast*
It's just awsome that I'll be able to choose any starter from any region!"
"Yes,it' good that Proffesor Taro is able to raise so many pokemon"
*later that day*
"Bye mom!I'll be back with a new pokemon!"
"Good Luck!"
*thinking*"Man I can't belive I finaly get a pokemon!"
*Runs to lab*
*rams into someone*
"Hey!Look where your going!"
"Sorry!I'm here to get my pokemon."
"You won't last a second in a battle!I feel sorry for the pokemon who gets picked by you."
Josh:"....WHAT DO YOU KNOW ANYWAYS!!!GRR!WHAT"S YOUR NAME?!"
"Name's Wes,later.*walks away*
Josh:"Hey!GET BACK HERE!(wait until I get a pokemon,then we'll see who's sorry)
Prof. Taro:Are you here for your pokemon?
Josh:*calms down*"Yes!"

Next:Chapt.2,Battle Blues

Tell me what you think so far!
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

AH! The suspense is building what Pokemon will he pick or will he get an Aipom...

Nice FanFic just keep making the good stuff happen in the next episode.
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

I like it! I think hes gonna get an aipom... but now ive said that, hes not...
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

Thanks!

Chapter 2:Battle Blues
*inside the lab*
Pro.Taro:"And thats all you need to know about the all you need to know about the lab"
Josh:"Right so where are the pokemon!"
Prof.Taro:*sighs*"Just go down the hall to the first door."
Josh:"You're not going to come with me?"
Prof. Taro:"No,I have some research to do.But don't worry,there are other trainers in there that can help you."
*walks to the door*
"....tackle.....dodge"
Josh:"what the-"
*opens door*
Trainer:"Torchic use scratch!"
Trainer 2:"Piplup dodge and use tackle!"
Josh:"Cool!"
*Torchic faints*
Trainer 2:"Alright Piplup!"
Josh:"What's going on?"
Trainer 2:"We're trying out the pokemon before we pick it,but so for Piplup is my choice!"
Piplup:"Plup!"
Josh:"So what's your name?"
"My name is Kari."
Josh:"So where are the pokemon?"
Kari:"On that table."
Josh:I'll try out this one.
Kari:You can battle my friend Lewis.
Josh:Is he a new Trainer?
Kari:Yes.
Josh:O.K!I'll battle him!
*After a while*
Josh:"O.K,how does this work?"
Lewis:"....YOU MEAN TO TELL ME YOU DON"T KNOW HOW TO BATTLE!!!"
Josh:...well I ,uh,seen it on T.V,but I never battled before!"
Lewis:...just throw your pokeball,and tell it to attack or dodge."
Josh:"Right!Go,Pokeball!"
"Turtwig!"
Lewis:"Turtwing huh.Alright then!Go!Totodile!
Totodile:"Toto!"
Josh:Turtwing use...(what attacks does it know)..use..
Lewis:WATERGUN!
"Totodile!"
*Turtwig is hit*
Lewis:"Scratch!"
*hit again*
Josh:"This is going great....."
*1 minute later*
"Turtwing is unable to battle!"
Kari:"Maybe you sould try another pokemon."
Josh:"Yea,I'll do better next time"
"Mudkip is unable to battle!"
Josh:Third times the charm!"
"Cyndaquil is unable to battle!"
Josh:"..."
"Bulbasaur is unable to battle"
*quiet*
Trainer:You suck!

Next:Chapt.3,Fight Fire with Fire!
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

Hmm, what well Josh get, keep the Suspense Coming.
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

Chapt.3 Fight Fire with Fire

"Treecko is unable to battle"
"Told you you would last a second."
Josh:"Wha-YOU AGAIN!!"
Wes:Yea it's me,and looks like you have a bit of a problem."
Josh:Like you can do better!"
Wes:I already have my pokemon.Go! Torchic!
Josh:"...."
Wes:"Well,unlike you,I have to go off on my journey.Later."
Josh:*sighs*"How can Iget badges when I lose every battle."
*pokeball falls on Josh's lap*
Josh:"what the-"
*opens*
"Chimchar!"
Josh:"Cool,I Chimchar!"
Chimchar:Char!
*jumps up and down*
Josh:"You know,you seem a great pokemon!"
Chimchar:Chim!:D
*Fire blast out of Chimchar's mouth*
Josh:"...."
Kari:"Looks like Chimchar likes you."
Josh:"Yea,and that was a strong Ember!"!:)!Hey Chimchar,want to battle with me!
"Chimchar!"
Josh:*Great!*Hey Wes!"
Wes:"What do you want!"
Josh:"A pokemon battle!"
Wes:".....No way!I'll destroy you!"
Josh:"We'll see !Go Chimchar!
Wes:If you insist...Go! Torchic!I'll let you have first attack.It'll be your last....
Josh:!!!Chimchar Scratch!"
Wes:"Torchic dodge and the use tackle!"
Josh:Chimchar,Ember!
"Chimchar!"
*hits Torchic*
Wes:*that's one powerfull ember,better be carefull*

Next:Chapt.4,Chimchar vs.Torchic!

If you like,you make can a character and I might add it to the story(I'll only accept 3 or 4)!
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

Chapter 4:Chimchar vs. Torchic

Wes:"Torchic use Tackle!"
Josh:"Chimchar use scratch!"
*both pokemon get hit*
Wes:"Torchic use scratch!"
Josh:"Chimchar,jump out of the way!"
Wes:"Tackle Chimchar while it's in the air!
Josh:"NO!"
*Chimchar is sent flying*
Wes:"Fire Spin,now!"
Josh:"Chimchar,start spinning!Now,tackle!"
*Torchic is hit by the attack*
Josh:My Chimchar was able to turn Fire Spin and Tackle into a Flame Wheel,what do you think of that."
Wes:"Don't get the idea that this battle is over.Torchic!Use Peck followed by Fire Spin!
*Chimchar is hit*
Josh:"Chimchar,Ember!"
Wes:"Torchic,dodge it!"
*Torchic is hit*
Wes:"I will not lose to you!Peck!"
Josh:Ember!"
Wes:"Torchic if you lose this battle...!"
Josh:"Chimchar scratch!"
Wes:"Peck!"
*Chimchar is hit*
Wes:"Fire Spin!"
Josh:"Ember!"
*explosion*
*smoke surrounds the room*

What will happen when the smoke clears?

Next:Chapt.5,Tools for the Trainer.
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

Hey I have a Character Idea.

But what do you want to know, like What Pokemon you he has etc.

This is all I hvae as of now:
Name: Andy
Pokemon: Bulbasuar
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

Just what pokemon and a little background.
Also if he's a trainer,gym leader,ect....
 
RE: Pokemon 101:My first fanfic!

Chapter 6:Tools for the Trainer

*heavy smoke*
Josh:*coughs*"Chimchar!"
Wes:"Torchic!"
*smoke clears*
Wes:"...."
Josh:"...."
"Chimchar!"
"Torchic is unable to battle,Chimchar wins!"
Josh:"Yea!You rock Chimchar!"
Wes:"Torchic,return!"
*Prof.Taro walks in*
Prof.Taro:"If you have choosen your pokemon,follow me."
*Wes,Lewis,Kari,and Josh follow*
Prof.Taro:"What I have here is a pokedex.It tells you many things about pokemon.Attacks,locations,and much more.You need this not only for catching pokemon,but also as you I.d and to register for the league.I have one for each of you.
Lewis:"Sweet!"
Kari:"Awsome!"
Josh:"Nice!"
Wes:"I' guessing it's too late to pick another pokemon."
Prof.Taro:"Yes,I already made your Trainer cards:
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Josh:"This is so cool!"
Prof.Taro:"They change when you win badges and catch pokemon.Here are pokeballs for all of you."
*at home*
Josh's mom:"So you chose Chimchar."
Josh:"More like it chose me."
Mom:"Please call every now and then."
Josh:"Don't worry,we will,right Chimchar."
Chimchar:Chimchar!Char!

Next:Chapt.7,The Journey Begins!
 
RE: Pokemon 101:CrazyAipom's Fanfic!

So you need custom gym leaders? If so I can do all 8 a custom E4 and Champion. I need something to do over the summer so just say!
Example of Gym Leader 1:
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RE: Pokemon 101:CrazyAipom's Fanfic!

O.K!
I need some gym leades and a rival for Kari(E4 if you can)Please!
You can make one for yourself,I'll put you in it.
 
RE: Pokemon 101:CrazyAipom's Fanfic!

Alright first a rival for Kari then 1 for myself
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Then i'll do the next 2 gym leaders:
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And the first member of the E4:
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I'll get more of them up later. GL means gym leader and e4 is Elite 4. The number after is which one they are. E4 are in red, Gl are in black, the champ will be in yellow and if you want me to make some random trainers that they encounter for expeirence they'll be in blue.
Also the Champion:
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RE: Pokemon 101:CrazyAipom's Fanfic!

Thanks!
Chapter 7:The Journey Begins

Kari:"So where are you headed?"
Josh:"To the next town to win a badge."
Kari:"Can I come?"
Josh:"Sure,but why?"
Kari:"I just want to tag along for a while"
Josh:"*sarcastic*Sure you do."
Kari:"What's that suppost to mean!"
Josh:"Nothing."
Kari:"You don't think that I-"*blushes*
Josh:"Uh,no!That's not what I mean...."
Lewis:*singing*Kari and Josh sitting in a tree,K-I-S-"
Both:"SHUT UP"
Chimchar:*laughing*"Chimchar!"
Josh:"Thanks a lot Chimchar!"
Chimchar::p
Piplup:"Piplup!"*points at something*
Kari:"What is it?"
*flocks of bird pokemon fly all around them*
Lewis:"What's happening!"

I know it was a short chapter.
But whatever....
 
Chapter 8:Friends and Foes

Josh:"What do they want!"
Kari:"Ithink they got scared by something."
Lewis:"Maybe we're to close to thier homes!"
"Sorry!"
Josh:"Huh?"
"My names Lauren."
"And I'm Kadent."
Josh:"Again,huh?"
Kadent:"We were trying to catch pokemon,but we caused too much noise and scared all of them."
Josh:"Oh."
Kari:"It's getting dark,we should find a Pokemon Center."
*at the center*
Nurse Joy:We don't have enough rooms for all of you to have your own rooms;'
Lewis:"I'm sure Josh and Kari will want a room to share."
Josh and Kari:"WHAT!!!"
Joy:"O.K,Here are you keys."
Josh:"I......Hate.....you!"
Lewis::p*hums K-I-S-S-I-N-G*
*later that night*
Josh:"Well I returned the favor."
Lewis:"What?"
Josh:"Just go outside."
*outside*
Kadent:"So you want to battle me?"
Lewis:"Wha-"
Josh:"Ya,I told him about how you thought you were better than him and that you wanted to battle."
Lewis:"I....Hate ....You."
"So do I"
Josh:"You again!"
Wes:"That's no way to talk to a person."

Next:Chapt.9,Rivals!
 
Thank you!

Chapter 10:Rivals

Lewis:"Allright,so it's a double battle!"
Josh:"Right,you with Wes."
Lewis:"Why?"
Josh:"Because I hate you both of you."
Lewis:"....."
Wes:"Let's just get this over with."
Kadent:"Go!Treecko!
Josh:"Let's go!Chimchar!
Lewis":Come on out Totodile!"
Wes:"Torchic!Go!"
Josh:"Chimchar,use Ember!"
Wes:"Firespin!"
Lewis:Water Gun!
Kadent:"Bullet Seed!"
*attacks hit each other*
Kadent:"Josh,we need to work together!"
Josh:"Right!"
Kadent:"Bullet Seed!"
Josh:"Chimchar!Use Ember to give Bullet Seed more power!"
*flaming bullet seed hit both pokemon*
Lewis:"Water Gun!"
Wes:"Fire spin!"
*attacks combine and hit*
Kadent:"Slam!"
Josh:"Flame Wheel!"
Lewis:"Bite!"
Wes:"Tackle!"
*all hit each other*
"All pokemon are unable to battle!"
All:"Return!"
Josh:"Good job Chimchar!"
Lewis:"Take a rest Totodile!"
Kadent:"Nice work Treecko!"
Wes:"Your still useless as ever!"
Josh:"Hey!You should be more nice to your pokemon"
Wes:"Whatever....."
Josh:*I hate that guy*

Next:Chapt. 10,Battle for the Badge!
 
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