Hello everybody! I am currently undergoing a large project, in that I'm creating a comic of my adventures through the Pokemon games. I plan on doing 6 Nuzlockes all together (I'm currently doing three). The first comic is of FireRed, and I will be updating this thread with the comics hopefully on a regular basis. However, they are very rough, and if you couldn't tell, my handwriting here is less than stellar. I'm actually looking for somebody who can help me along the process by taking my drafts and graphically enhancing them into a beautiful cartoon comic. Basically, I'd make the comic, send it to you, then you flesh it out. If you're interested, please let me know asap, because I'd like to get this done quickly.
So here they are:
Chapter 1 - FireRed
Episode 1 - Renaissance
Episode 2 - Paper Covers Rock
Sorry if it's slightly hard to read, but this is what it says:
Panel #2 Red: Today's the day! I'm finally gonna start my adventure!
Panel #2 Mom: I wish I wasn't poor.
Panel #3 Mom: Really? I can finally rent out your room!
Panel #4 Mom: GET OUT!!
Panel #4 Red: OH NO! IT'S GRASS!
Panel #5 Red: It's terrifying to think I could be assaulted at any moment!
Panel #6 Red: THE CONSTANT FEAR PLAGUES MY BEING!!!
Sorry that it's hard to see, but the panel on the bottom is supposed to be a GBA top-down view of what's going on... yeah.
Episode 3 - Rock Beats Scissors
Again, sorry that it's hard to read. Here's the script for this one:
Panel #1: All those people are Prof. Oak's Aides. Actually, they're gonna be a running gag of zombie-like people who crowd around Oak in some crazy fascination.
Panel #1 Oak: This is my lab!
Panel #2 Gary: Gramps! I've been waiting for two days!
Panel #2 Oak: Be quiet! I only told you to come because you have no friends!
Bulbasaur Cloud: Bulbasaur would be great for the first three gyms, but he's not as cool.
Squirtle Cloud: Squirtle's cute and awesome. He's good against Brock, and Gary would have to pick Bulbasaur.
Charmander Cloud: Charizard is plain awesome. Plus, there aren't that many Fire-types.
Episode 4 - Scissors Cuts Paper
Here's the script if you can't read it.
Panel #3: CHARMANDER FAINTED.
Panel #4 Charmander: Sorry. We'll get him next time.
Panel #4 Gary: SHUT UP! I'm a Pokemon Master, not ...
What's that thing in the sky? FORESHADOWING...
Episode 5 - Belue
Here's the script
Panel #1 Red: Look! A Pokemon Mart. Finally, I can do some capturing.
Panel #2 Red: Hi! Do you sell Poke Balls? I just came from Pallet Town and...
Panel #3 Clerk: Pallet Town? Could you deliver this to Professor Oak?
Panel #3 Red: What about my Poke Balls?
Panel #3 Clerk: I'll sell them to you when you get back.
Panel #4 Belue: My name is Belue! This here is Squirtle! We're on an adventure together!
Episode 6 - All A-Freaking-Long (WARNING - THIS COMIC CONTAINS FOUL LANGUAGE - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)
Here's the script:
Panel #1 Red: Professor! I got your package.
Panel #1 Oak: Shoo! Get away!
Panel #1 Prof. Oak's Aide: But I'm your Aide!
Panel #2 Oak: Thanks, Red! Now I can complete this introduction! FIVE POKE BALLS!
Panel #2 Red: FFUUCCK! All a-freaking-long!
Panel #4 Red: Whatever, at least we can start capturing.
Panel #4 Lea: Honey, you said it.
Panel #8 Red: GARY?! Oh no, you guys aren't ready.
Panel #8 Lea: Honey, I'm afraid to admit it, but you're right.
Panel #9 Red: How about we make a few more captures?
Panel #9 Flick: Doesn't matter. I'm gonna die soon anyways.
Panel #10 Flick: Shocking, right?
Panel #13 Red: Perfect. Time to grind.
Episode 7 - First Loss (WARNING - THIS COMIC CONTAINS FOUL LANGUAGE - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)
Here's the script.
Panel #1 Flick Tombstone: You were a Pokemon.
Panel #2 Red: He never got to grow up.
Panel #2 Lea: Ok, Red, you need to snap out of it! Flick is dead, there's nothing to be done. But there is one thing.
Panel #3 Lea: We can avenge his death!! Let's get Gary!!
Panel #4 Red: HEY SHITSTAIN!!
Panel #5 Red: Prepare for battle.
Panel #5 Renald : Oh, hey! I evolved!!
Panel #6 Gary: NO FAIR! YOU HAVE 3??!!
Panel #7 Red: U mad?
Panel #8 Gary: I'M GONNA WIN!!
Panel #9 Foe Pidgey: DON'T KNOW GUST? SUX TO BE U!
Panel #10 Takeo: Takeo says, "Even the plant which blows in the wind... can grow into a mighty beanstalk!"
Panel #12 Charmander: Remember me? I know a lot more than Scratch now!
Panel #12 Lea: You may know more than Scratch, but that's all you're gonna use!
Panel #13 Charmander: DUMB pain!!
Panel #14 Charmander: NO WORRIES! GARY WILL HEAL ME, AND-
Panel #14 Text: Foe CHARMANDER was sapped by LEECH SEED!
Episode 8 - Mind-Numbing Fun
Script:
Panel #1 Teachy TV: Glitches around Cinnabar Island have finally been solved!
Panel #1 Old Man: Consarn it! Where are all mah programs?!
Panel #2 Old Man: Hey, whippersnapper!
Panel #2 Teachy TV: Researchers attribute 8 years of improved technology.
Panel #3 Old Man: Do you know how to program this Teachy TV?
Panel #5 Red: Thanks, geezer!
Panel #5 Old Man: Dagnabbit! You kids with your tomfoolery and your rap music!
Panel #6 Teachy TV: Now back to Pokemon Hoarders!
Panel #7 Host: Hello, and welcome to another episode of Pokemon Hoarders. Today, we meet Rodrick. So, Rodrick. I heard you like Mudkips.
Panel #8 Rodrick: That doesn't even begin to describe it! My Mudkip. I love it...so charming...sleep with it...cuddle with it...caress it...It's exotic!!
Panel #8 Host: Stop.
Panel #9 Rodrick: In order to understand the severity of Rodrick's problem, we searched his PC. The results will shock you.
Panel #10: ...Yeah. Just imagine that it's a Box filled with Mudkips. I didn't feel like drawing 30 individual Mudkips, so this is the best you get.
Panel #11 Rodrick: What can I say?
Panel #12 Rodrick: I love me some KIP!
Episode 9 - My New Bestie
Script:
Panel #1 Bug Trainer: Go Weedle!
Panel #1 Red: Great. I don't have the money for Antidotes!!
Panel #2 Renald: Master, can I try?
Panel #2 Red: Sorry, Renald, but Poison will kill you! I'll just go the safe way.
Panel #3 Red: Go, Takeo!
Panel #3 Renald: Takeo can get Poisoned too, you know.
Panel #4 Bug Trainer: Weedle! Poison Sting!
Panel #4 Weedle: The Illuminati will be missing you!
Panel #4 Takeo: I am not afraid!
Panel #5: Takeo has been Poisoned.
Panel #6 Red: Crap! Return!
Panel #7 Red: I don't know who to send in!
Panel #7 Renald: I'll do it!
Panel #8 Renald: You're welcome.
Hopefully you can read the rest.
Episode 10 - Company
Script:
Panel #1 Red: Finally, we're out of the forest.
Panel #1 Lea: Now, off to the gym!
Panel #3 Picknicker: Stop! You're light years away from Brock!
Panel #3 Red: Oh really? LEA!
Panel #4 Lea: Oh honey, don't you know? Light years are a measure of distance
Panel #7 Red: Let's rock.
Panel #8 Geodude: Hey! You look lost, little girl! The Day Care's in Cerulean!
Panel #9 Lea: Don't come back 'till you learn how to speak to a lady!
Panel #10 Onix: Perhaps I'll be a bit more accommodating.
Panel #13 Red: LEA!! You can't give up! Without you, I'd ragequit! Don't forget, we're a part of something!
A new character is going to be introduced soon. Can you tell who it is?
Episode #11 - The Shorts Brigade (WARNING - THIS COMIC CONTAINS FOUL LANGUAGE - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)
Script:
Panel #1 Red: Um...Takeo.
Panel #1 Prof. Oak's Aide: I'M PROF. OAK'S AIDE!!!
Panel #2 Takeo: Get back, HELLION!
Panel #2 Prof. Oak's Aide: I'M HIS AIDE!!!
Panel #4 Lass: Who needs special shoes to run?
Panel #4 Red: I have a disability you insensitive bitch!
Panel #5 Red: WAAAH!!!
Panel #5 Lass: Cripple.
Panel #6 Staron: Hey, why so glum, chum?
Panel #6 Red: You're, the first Pokemon.
Panel #8 Youngster #1: Now!!
Panel #8 Youngster #2: Ready?
Panel #8 Red: Glad to have you on board, Staron!
Panel #9 Youngster #1: Stop right there!!
Panel #9 Youngster #2: Where d'you think you're going?
Panel #9 Red: Wuzzat?
Panel #10 Youngster #2: You're not wearing shorts! Looks like you're gonna have to pay the tax!!!
Panel #10 Red: Shorts tax?
Panel #10 Staron: Red! Don't you know who they are?
Panel #11 Staron: They're the officers of the Shorts Brigade! They're a merciless group of thugs who tax those without shorts!
Panel #13 Red: Listen! I'm not paying your stupid tax, and there's no way you're gonna MAKE ME!!!
Panel #13 Youngster #1: Looks like we're gonna have to battle!
Panel #14 Red: RENALD!!!
Panel #14 Renald: On it!
Panel #16 Red: Thank god! A Pokemon Center!
Panel #17 Gary {through watch}: Unit 1? What happened?
Panel #18 Youngster #1 {through watch}: We've got ourselves a nonpayer!
Episode 12 - A Mysterious Course of Events Pt. 1
Script:
Panel #1 Mt. Moon: CLOSED BY ORDER OF TEAM ROCKET
Panel #1 Red: You've got to be kidding. Lea!
Panel #1 Lea: On it!
Panel #2 Rocket Grunt: Give us your fossils, nerd!
Panel #2 Batman: Hey, chump. I've got no Poke-respect for criminals like you.
Panel #3 Batman: I am the Dark Knight.
Panel #3 Rocket Grunt: What?
Panel #4 Batman: I am...
Panel #5 Red: Batman!!
Panel #6 Subtitle: My 4th Freakin' Flying-type.
Panel #7 Red: And as for you!!
Panel #8 Red: Looks like you're blasting off again.
Panel #9 Super Nerd: Thanks! Take this Fossil! It'll be safer if you take it than me.
Panel #10 Red: Wow! Thanks, nerd!
Panel #10 Super Nerd: Don't mention it.
Panel #11 Red: Look! There's the exit! Let's-
Panel #13 Red: Was that a Hydro Pump?
Panel #14 Red: Huh?
Panel #15 May: You're welcome.
Ok, before you all ask, no, May did not appear in my FireRed and kill Takeo with a Hydro Pump. However, this is crucial to the story of the comic.
Episode 13 - A Mysterious Course of Events Pt. 2
Script:
Panel #2 May: Thanks, Taylor.
Panel #2 Taylor: Yeahh!
Panel #3 Red: Who are you?
Panel #3 May: I'm May. I'm from Hoenn. I'm here because, like yourself, I was a Nuzlocker.
Panel #4 Red: A Nuzlocker? Like me?
Panel #5 May: That's what I just said!
Panel #6 May: But yeah, I was a Nuzlocker. I actually did pretty well. I even beat the League. But then, I saw my destiny. There was a shadow man. He killed everyone I loved. Even my mother. He killed Brendan. He ended my Nuzlocke.
Panel #7 Red: What's this got to do with me?
Panel #8 May: I'm sparing you the heartache! Give me your Pokemon!
Panel #8 Red: Never!
Panel #9 May: I guess we gotta do it the hard way. Taylor! Hydro Pump!
Panel #11 May: Ethan.
Panel #11 Red: Who's that?
Panel #12 Ethan: Thanks, Reggie!
Panel #13 May: You just don't know when to quit, do you?
Panel #13 Ethan: May, stop this. It's not a game.
Panel #14 May: Oh, I know it's a game. And I'm gonna finish it!
Panel #14 Ethan: You can't kill Red! We need him!
Panel #15 May: Watch me. Taylor! Hydro Pump!
Panel #16 Ethan: Reggie! Fire Blast!
Panel #17 Red: Renald!
Panel #19 Red: Lea! Leech Seed!
Panel #22 Red: Good job, Lea!
Episode #14 - A Mysterious Course of Events Pt. 3 (WARNING - THIS COMIC CONTAINS FOUL LANGUAGE - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)
Script:
Panel #1 May: Return, Taylor.
Panel #1 Ethan: Return, Reggie.
Panel #2 Red: So tell me, who are you?
Panel #2 Ethan: I'm Ethan, from Johto. I can't tell you more, but in the future...
Panel #4 Red: Um...ok. But what's so important about saving me?
Panel #5 Ethan: I can't tell you too much or else it'll be ruined! But just know...
Panel #6 Ethan: This is happening for a reason.
Panel #6 Red: Uhh... where's May?
Panel #7 Red: What the fudge!?
Panel #8 May: Stay still!
Panel #9 Ethan: Damnit, May!!
Panel #10 Red: They're gone!!
Panel #11 Miss Thang: Aww...HELL naw! I is tryin' ta sleep!
Panel #12 Miss Thang: AWW HELL NAW!
Panel #13 Miss Thang: I don't see no ring on this finger!!
Panel #14 Red: Stupid rat! Lea! Vine Whip!
Panel #14 Miss Thang: It is on, girlfriend!
Panel #14 Lea: Bitch, please!
Panel #15 Miss Thang; I'm gon' kick you' ass!!!
Panel #16 Red: That's enough, Lea!
Panel #17 Miss Thang: I gon' cut you, bitch!!
Panel #18 Red: Let's keep going!
Panel #19 Gary: I'm waiting.
Writing the script, I see now how I may have gone a bit overboard in this comic. Don't worry, it won't stay.
There's that darn foreshadowing again.
Episode 15 - The Glory
Script:
Panel #1 Gary: Hey, Red! Long time no see! Looks like I'll have to trump ya again.
Panel #1 Red: You are one disillusioned person. I find it irritating.
Panel #2 Gary: Rattata!
Panel #2 Red: Miss Thang!
Panel #3 Red: Hyper Fang!
Panel #3 Gary: Tail Whip! For lolz!
Panel #3 Miss Thang: How ya 'ike me now!!
Panel #4 Red: Quick Attack!
Panel #4 Gary: Stupid rat!
Panel #4: Rattata has fainted.
Panel #5 Red: Go, Batman!
Panel #5 Gary: Go! Pidgeotto!
Panel #5 Pidgeotto: Hey, what happened to Takeo? Guess Red was too stupid to keep him alive.
Panel #6 Red: Time to win. Supersonic!
Panel #6 Batman: SHUT UP!!
Panel #6 Gary: GUST!!!
Panel #7 Gary: Are you gonna use Leech Life?
Panel #7 Red: I don't think so, BITE!!
Panel #8: FOE PIDGEOTTO FAINTED
Panel #9 Gary: Go, Abra!
Panel #9 Abra: Sup, Bro!
Panel #10 Red: An Abra? Can it even do anything?
Panel #10 Gary: Of course! TELEPORT!!
Panel #10 Abra: No can do, Bro. I'm chill.
Panel #11 Red: Just Bite it.
Panel #11 Gary: COME ON!
Panel #12 Gary: So, it's come to this?
Panel #14 Staron: Master! Let me!!
Panel #14 Red: Yes! Go!!
Panel #15 Staron: Staron's the name!
Panel #15 Charmander: Hey, you're new! too bad you're gonna die right away!!
Panel #16 Red: FURY ATTACK!!
Panel #16: CHARMANDER used EMBER!
Panel #17 Charmander: Ow! That's it!
Panel #18 Red: Staron!!!
Panel #19 Red: Staron! Peck!
Panel #21: CHARMANDER FAINTED
There are more comics to be put up! If you could help me make more appealing comics, please let me know, otherwise we'll be stuck with these... sorry
So here they are:
Chapter 1 - FireRed
Episode 1 - Renaissance
Episode 2 - Paper Covers Rock
Sorry if it's slightly hard to read, but this is what it says:
Panel #2 Red: Today's the day! I'm finally gonna start my adventure!
Panel #2 Mom: I wish I wasn't poor.
Panel #3 Mom: Really? I can finally rent out your room!
Panel #4 Mom: GET OUT!!
Panel #4 Red: OH NO! IT'S GRASS!
Panel #5 Red: It's terrifying to think I could be assaulted at any moment!
Panel #6 Red: THE CONSTANT FEAR PLAGUES MY BEING!!!
Sorry that it's hard to see, but the panel on the bottom is supposed to be a GBA top-down view of what's going on... yeah.
Episode 3 - Rock Beats Scissors
Again, sorry that it's hard to read. Here's the script for this one:
Panel #1: All those people are Prof. Oak's Aides. Actually, they're gonna be a running gag of zombie-like people who crowd around Oak in some crazy fascination.
Panel #1 Oak: This is my lab!
Panel #2 Gary: Gramps! I've been waiting for two days!
Panel #2 Oak: Be quiet! I only told you to come because you have no friends!
Bulbasaur Cloud: Bulbasaur would be great for the first three gyms, but he's not as cool.
Squirtle Cloud: Squirtle's cute and awesome. He's good against Brock, and Gary would have to pick Bulbasaur.
Charmander Cloud: Charizard is plain awesome. Plus, there aren't that many Fire-types.
Episode 4 - Scissors Cuts Paper
Here's the script if you can't read it.
Panel #3: CHARMANDER FAINTED.
Panel #4 Charmander: Sorry. We'll get him next time.
Panel #4 Gary: SHUT UP! I'm a Pokemon Master, not ...
What's that thing in the sky? FORESHADOWING...
Episode 5 - Belue
Here's the script
Panel #1 Red: Look! A Pokemon Mart. Finally, I can do some capturing.
Panel #2 Red: Hi! Do you sell Poke Balls? I just came from Pallet Town and...
Panel #3 Clerk: Pallet Town? Could you deliver this to Professor Oak?
Panel #3 Red: What about my Poke Balls?
Panel #3 Clerk: I'll sell them to you when you get back.
Panel #4 Belue: My name is Belue! This here is Squirtle! We're on an adventure together!
Episode 6 - All A-Freaking-Long (WARNING - THIS COMIC CONTAINS FOUL LANGUAGE - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)
Here's the script:
Panel #1 Red: Professor! I got your package.
Panel #1 Oak: Shoo! Get away!
Panel #1 Prof. Oak's Aide: But I'm your Aide!
Panel #2 Oak: Thanks, Red! Now I can complete this introduction! FIVE POKE BALLS!
Panel #2 Red: FFUUCCK! All a-freaking-long!
Panel #4 Red: Whatever, at least we can start capturing.
Panel #4 Lea: Honey, you said it.
Panel #8 Red: GARY?! Oh no, you guys aren't ready.
Panel #8 Lea: Honey, I'm afraid to admit it, but you're right.
Panel #9 Red: How about we make a few more captures?
Panel #9 Flick: Doesn't matter. I'm gonna die soon anyways.
Panel #10 Flick: Shocking, right?
Panel #13 Red: Perfect. Time to grind.
Episode 7 - First Loss (WARNING - THIS COMIC CONTAINS FOUL LANGUAGE - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)
Here's the script.
Panel #1 Flick Tombstone: You were a Pokemon.
Panel #2 Red: He never got to grow up.
Panel #2 Lea: Ok, Red, you need to snap out of it! Flick is dead, there's nothing to be done. But there is one thing.
Panel #3 Lea: We can avenge his death!! Let's get Gary!!
Panel #4 Red: HEY SHITSTAIN!!
Panel #5 Red: Prepare for battle.
Panel #5 Renald : Oh, hey! I evolved!!
Panel #6 Gary: NO FAIR! YOU HAVE 3??!!
Panel #7 Red: U mad?
Panel #8 Gary: I'M GONNA WIN!!
Panel #9 Foe Pidgey: DON'T KNOW GUST? SUX TO BE U!
Panel #10 Takeo: Takeo says, "Even the plant which blows in the wind... can grow into a mighty beanstalk!"
Panel #12 Charmander: Remember me? I know a lot more than Scratch now!
Panel #12 Lea: You may know more than Scratch, but that's all you're gonna use!
Panel #13 Charmander: DUMB pain!!
Panel #14 Charmander: NO WORRIES! GARY WILL HEAL ME, AND-
Panel #14 Text: Foe CHARMANDER was sapped by LEECH SEED!
Episode 8 - Mind-Numbing Fun
Script:
Panel #1 Teachy TV: Glitches around Cinnabar Island have finally been solved!
Panel #1 Old Man: Consarn it! Where are all mah programs?!
Panel #2 Old Man: Hey, whippersnapper!
Panel #2 Teachy TV: Researchers attribute 8 years of improved technology.
Panel #3 Old Man: Do you know how to program this Teachy TV?
Panel #5 Red: Thanks, geezer!
Panel #5 Old Man: Dagnabbit! You kids with your tomfoolery and your rap music!
Panel #6 Teachy TV: Now back to Pokemon Hoarders!
Panel #7 Host: Hello, and welcome to another episode of Pokemon Hoarders. Today, we meet Rodrick. So, Rodrick. I heard you like Mudkips.
Panel #8 Rodrick: That doesn't even begin to describe it! My Mudkip. I love it...so charming...sleep with it...cuddle with it...caress it...It's exotic!!
Panel #8 Host: Stop.
Panel #9 Rodrick: In order to understand the severity of Rodrick's problem, we searched his PC. The results will shock you.
Panel #10: ...Yeah. Just imagine that it's a Box filled with Mudkips. I didn't feel like drawing 30 individual Mudkips, so this is the best you get.
Panel #11 Rodrick: What can I say?
Panel #12 Rodrick: I love me some KIP!
Episode 9 - My New Bestie
Script:
Panel #1 Bug Trainer: Go Weedle!
Panel #1 Red: Great. I don't have the money for Antidotes!!
Panel #2 Renald: Master, can I try?
Panel #2 Red: Sorry, Renald, but Poison will kill you! I'll just go the safe way.
Panel #3 Red: Go, Takeo!
Panel #3 Renald: Takeo can get Poisoned too, you know.
Panel #4 Bug Trainer: Weedle! Poison Sting!
Panel #4 Weedle: The Illuminati will be missing you!
Panel #4 Takeo: I am not afraid!
Panel #5: Takeo has been Poisoned.
Panel #6 Red: Crap! Return!
Panel #7 Red: I don't know who to send in!
Panel #7 Renald: I'll do it!
Panel #8 Renald: You're welcome.
Hopefully you can read the rest.
Episode 10 - Company
Script:
Panel #1 Red: Finally, we're out of the forest.
Panel #1 Lea: Now, off to the gym!
Panel #3 Picknicker: Stop! You're light years away from Brock!
Panel #3 Red: Oh really? LEA!
Panel #4 Lea: Oh honey, don't you know? Light years are a measure of distance
Panel #7 Red: Let's rock.
Panel #8 Geodude: Hey! You look lost, little girl! The Day Care's in Cerulean!
Panel #9 Lea: Don't come back 'till you learn how to speak to a lady!
Panel #10 Onix: Perhaps I'll be a bit more accommodating.
Panel #13 Red: LEA!! You can't give up! Without you, I'd ragequit! Don't forget, we're a part of something!
A new character is going to be introduced soon. Can you tell who it is?
Episode #11 - The Shorts Brigade (WARNING - THIS COMIC CONTAINS FOUL LANGUAGE - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)
Script:
Panel #1 Red: Um...Takeo.
Panel #1 Prof. Oak's Aide: I'M PROF. OAK'S AIDE!!!
Panel #2 Takeo: Get back, HELLION!
Panel #2 Prof. Oak's Aide: I'M HIS AIDE!!!
Panel #4 Lass: Who needs special shoes to run?
Panel #4 Red: I have a disability you insensitive bitch!
Panel #5 Red: WAAAH!!!
Panel #5 Lass: Cripple.
Panel #6 Staron: Hey, why so glum, chum?
Panel #6 Red: You're, the first Pokemon.
Panel #8 Youngster #1: Now!!
Panel #8 Youngster #2: Ready?
Panel #8 Red: Glad to have you on board, Staron!
Panel #9 Youngster #1: Stop right there!!
Panel #9 Youngster #2: Where d'you think you're going?
Panel #9 Red: Wuzzat?
Panel #10 Youngster #2: You're not wearing shorts! Looks like you're gonna have to pay the tax!!!
Panel #10 Red: Shorts tax?
Panel #10 Staron: Red! Don't you know who they are?
Panel #11 Staron: They're the officers of the Shorts Brigade! They're a merciless group of thugs who tax those without shorts!
Panel #13 Red: Listen! I'm not paying your stupid tax, and there's no way you're gonna MAKE ME!!!
Panel #13 Youngster #1: Looks like we're gonna have to battle!
Panel #14 Red: RENALD!!!
Panel #14 Renald: On it!
Panel #16 Red: Thank god! A Pokemon Center!
Panel #17 Gary {through watch}: Unit 1? What happened?
Panel #18 Youngster #1 {through watch}: We've got ourselves a nonpayer!
Episode 12 - A Mysterious Course of Events Pt. 1
Script:
Panel #1 Mt. Moon: CLOSED BY ORDER OF TEAM ROCKET
Panel #1 Red: You've got to be kidding. Lea!
Panel #1 Lea: On it!
Panel #2 Rocket Grunt: Give us your fossils, nerd!
Panel #2 Batman: Hey, chump. I've got no Poke-respect for criminals like you.
Panel #3 Batman: I am the Dark Knight.
Panel #3 Rocket Grunt: What?
Panel #4 Batman: I am...
Panel #5 Red: Batman!!
Panel #6 Subtitle: My 4th Freakin' Flying-type.
Panel #7 Red: And as for you!!
Panel #8 Red: Looks like you're blasting off again.
Panel #9 Super Nerd: Thanks! Take this Fossil! It'll be safer if you take it than me.
Panel #10 Red: Wow! Thanks, nerd!
Panel #10 Super Nerd: Don't mention it.
Panel #11 Red: Look! There's the exit! Let's-
Panel #13 Red: Was that a Hydro Pump?
Panel #14 Red: Huh?
Panel #15 May: You're welcome.
Ok, before you all ask, no, May did not appear in my FireRed and kill Takeo with a Hydro Pump. However, this is crucial to the story of the comic.
Episode 13 - A Mysterious Course of Events Pt. 2
Script:
Panel #2 May: Thanks, Taylor.
Panel #2 Taylor: Yeahh!
Panel #3 Red: Who are you?
Panel #3 May: I'm May. I'm from Hoenn. I'm here because, like yourself, I was a Nuzlocker.
Panel #4 Red: A Nuzlocker? Like me?
Panel #5 May: That's what I just said!
Panel #6 May: But yeah, I was a Nuzlocker. I actually did pretty well. I even beat the League. But then, I saw my destiny. There was a shadow man. He killed everyone I loved. Even my mother. He killed Brendan. He ended my Nuzlocke.
Panel #7 Red: What's this got to do with me?
Panel #8 May: I'm sparing you the heartache! Give me your Pokemon!
Panel #8 Red: Never!
Panel #9 May: I guess we gotta do it the hard way. Taylor! Hydro Pump!
Panel #11 May: Ethan.
Panel #11 Red: Who's that?
Panel #12 Ethan: Thanks, Reggie!
Panel #13 May: You just don't know when to quit, do you?
Panel #13 Ethan: May, stop this. It's not a game.
Panel #14 May: Oh, I know it's a game. And I'm gonna finish it!
Panel #14 Ethan: You can't kill Red! We need him!
Panel #15 May: Watch me. Taylor! Hydro Pump!
Panel #16 Ethan: Reggie! Fire Blast!
Panel #17 Red: Renald!
Panel #19 Red: Lea! Leech Seed!
Panel #22 Red: Good job, Lea!
Episode #14 - A Mysterious Course of Events Pt. 3 (WARNING - THIS COMIC CONTAINS FOUL LANGUAGE - READ AT YOUR OWN RISK)
Script:
Panel #1 May: Return, Taylor.
Panel #1 Ethan: Return, Reggie.
Panel #2 Red: So tell me, who are you?
Panel #2 Ethan: I'm Ethan, from Johto. I can't tell you more, but in the future...
Panel #4 Red: Um...ok. But what's so important about saving me?
Panel #5 Ethan: I can't tell you too much or else it'll be ruined! But just know...
Panel #6 Ethan: This is happening for a reason.
Panel #6 Red: Uhh... where's May?
Panel #7 Red: What the fudge!?
Panel #8 May: Stay still!
Panel #9 Ethan: Damnit, May!!
Panel #10 Red: They're gone!!
Panel #11 Miss Thang: Aww...HELL naw! I is tryin' ta sleep!
Panel #12 Miss Thang: AWW HELL NAW!
Panel #13 Miss Thang: I don't see no ring on this finger!!
Panel #14 Red: Stupid rat! Lea! Vine Whip!
Panel #14 Miss Thang: It is on, girlfriend!
Panel #14 Lea: Bitch, please!
Panel #15 Miss Thang; I'm gon' kick you' ass!!!
Panel #16 Red: That's enough, Lea!
Panel #17 Miss Thang: I gon' cut you, bitch!!
Panel #18 Red: Let's keep going!
Panel #19 Gary: I'm waiting.
Writing the script, I see now how I may have gone a bit overboard in this comic. Don't worry, it won't stay.
There's that darn foreshadowing again.
Episode 15 - The Glory
Script:
Panel #1 Gary: Hey, Red! Long time no see! Looks like I'll have to trump ya again.
Panel #1 Red: You are one disillusioned person. I find it irritating.
Panel #2 Gary: Rattata!
Panel #2 Red: Miss Thang!
Panel #3 Red: Hyper Fang!
Panel #3 Gary: Tail Whip! For lolz!
Panel #3 Miss Thang: How ya 'ike me now!!
Panel #4 Red: Quick Attack!
Panel #4 Gary: Stupid rat!
Panel #4: Rattata has fainted.
Panel #5 Red: Go, Batman!
Panel #5 Gary: Go! Pidgeotto!
Panel #5 Pidgeotto: Hey, what happened to Takeo? Guess Red was too stupid to keep him alive.
Panel #6 Red: Time to win. Supersonic!
Panel #6 Batman: SHUT UP!!
Panel #6 Gary: GUST!!!
Panel #7 Gary: Are you gonna use Leech Life?
Panel #7 Red: I don't think so, BITE!!
Panel #8: FOE PIDGEOTTO FAINTED
Panel #9 Gary: Go, Abra!
Panel #9 Abra: Sup, Bro!
Panel #10 Red: An Abra? Can it even do anything?
Panel #10 Gary: Of course! TELEPORT!!
Panel #10 Abra: No can do, Bro. I'm chill.
Panel #11 Red: Just Bite it.
Panel #11 Gary: COME ON!
Panel #12 Gary: So, it's come to this?
Panel #14 Staron: Master! Let me!!
Panel #14 Red: Yes! Go!!
Panel #15 Staron: Staron's the name!
Panel #15 Charmander: Hey, you're new! too bad you're gonna die right away!!
Panel #16 Red: FURY ATTACK!!
Panel #16: CHARMANDER used EMBER!
Panel #17 Charmander: Ow! That's it!
Panel #18 Red: Staron!!!
Panel #19 Red: Staron! Peck!
Panel #21: CHARMANDER FAINTED
There are more comics to be put up! If you could help me make more appealing comics, please let me know, otherwise we'll be stuck with these... sorry
