Hey guys. You might not see me that much in this part of the forum, but I do enjoy writing poetry. There are poetry contests going on in my state right now, and I really want to win it. So I was wondering if you could give your opinion on some of my poems?
The White Wolf -
Alone he walks on the snow
Burning the prints into the crisp earth
The Desolate land calls to him in a gentle whisper
Nothing but a soul walks alone in the snow
The White wolfs eyes are set on a elegant glow
A Howl that pierces through the thick mist of the night
The fear strikes through a heart with pure fright
As the shock etches itself in the heart of a doe
It's already to late
A silent ruffle in the snow
The wolf howls toward the moon
The pack returns around the stone of a deer
Finally daybreak is here
Setting off once again
The Wolf ventures away prowlwing yet again
The White Wolf -
Alone he walks on the snow
Burning the prints into the crisp earth
The Desolate land calls to him in a gentle whisper
Nothing but a soul walks alone in the snow
The White wolfs eyes are set on a elegant glow
A Howl that pierces through the thick mist of the night
The fear strikes through a heart with pure fright
As the shock etches itself in the heart of a doe
It's already to late
A silent ruffle in the snow
The wolf howls toward the moon
The pack returns around the stone of a deer
Finally daybreak is here
Setting off once again
The Wolf ventures away prowlwing yet again