New Set

P

Poison Pokemon Master

Master Trainer
Member
ok im thinking about making a new set for yours truly Koden, me myself and I, after making pokemon for
everyone else i think im gonna make a set for me, this is the first card i've made for myself so far, let me
know if the design/text is ok and any other suggestions you might have (i mean cardwork wise not
attack/gameplay-wise)

KodenGolbat.jpg
KodensToxicroak.jpg
 
Looks nice. Font is consistent, but a bit large. You're also lacking illustration credit. Why not use actual fonts? Your wording is pretty good. I only saw maybe one or two grammar errors. Your Energy symbols are also misplaced - line them up with the circles and center them.

Other than that, good job, although Koden's Crobat and Koden's Zubat LV.21 are near-impossible for me to see.
 
Pimpwalkin' Mateo Johnson said:
Looks nice. Font is consistent, but a bit large. You're also lacking illustration credit. Why not use actual fonts? Your wording is pretty good. I only saw maybe one or two grammar errors. Your Energy symbols are also misplaced - line them up with the circles and center them.

Other than that, good job, although Koden's Crobat and Koden's Zubat LV.21 are near-impossible for me to see.
Click to expand...

wow, thanks for the advice
ok im updating the cards with illustration credit
i drew the crobat myself though :p

and i like to use different font because it's more original
the regular font is boring to me
 
I should have said this in my previous post, but I'll say it now.

Proper illustration credit is written as "Illus. name"

Example: Illus. Superman

Illus. Don Quixote

Illus. Ken Sugimori

You get the idea.
 
Pimpwalkin' Mateo Johnson said:
I should have said this in my previous post, but I'll say it now.

Proper illustration credit is written as "Illus. name"

Example: Illus. Superman

Illus. Don Quixote

Illus. Ken Sugimori

You get the idea.
Click to expand...

i know i prefer it like this though
 
You must log in or register to reply here.
Back
Top