DPPt: Time Capsule!(Electabuzz Lv. X card added!)

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RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)

Charizard is in no way legendary, and mostly it just seems kind of generic. Harsh flames is an alright attack but maybe he should get another.

You may, LV.

PC, that's fine. You can go for Seadra too, but make sure it turns out good. Seadra is a personal favorite and I'd be sad for another bad one :c

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Also, I can't wait to show you guys shiny Magmar! I finished the lineart last night and I think you'll all be impressed once it's colored. The card itself ought to also interest you! I'll post part of the spoiler in a little while as teaser.


Magmar(Shiny) Lv. 42 HP80 [R]
Basic Pokemon

Poke-Body Hot Touch
Whenever Magmar is attacked by the Defending Pokemon, flip a coin. If heads, the Defending Pokemmon is now Burned.

[R] Blowtorch 30x
You may discard up to 4 [R] Energy cards from your hand. This attack does 30 damage times the number of [R] Energy cards you discard in this way.

[P][C] Barrier
Discard 1 [P] Energy card attached to Magmar. During your opponent'snext turn, prevent all effects of attacks, including damage, done to Magmar.

W-[W]+20
R-
RC-[C]
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)

I made some edits to Zard. Let me know what you think. Here's the Lickitung Lv.X line, I'll work on Seadra later on:

Lickitung Lv.27 HP 90 [C]
Basic Pokemon

[C] Expand Mass 20
During your opponent's next turn, any damage done to Lickitung by your opponent's attacks is reduced by 20.

[C][C][C] Salivate 40
This attack does 10 damage to two of your opponent's Pokemon. (Do not apply weakness and resistance for benched Pokemon.)

Weakness: [F]+20
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: [C][C][C]


Lickitung Lv.X HP 110 [C]
Level Up! - Put onto Lickitung

Poke-Power: Tongue Swap
Once during your turn (before you attack), you may discard a basic Energy card from your hand. Choose one of your opponent's Pokemon with the same type as the discarded card and switch it with your opponent's active Pokemon. You can't use this Power if Lickitung is affected by a special condition.

[C][C] Knock-Out Tongue 90
Flip a coin. If tails, Lickilicky can't use Knock-Out Lick! during your next turn.

Weakness: [F]x2
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: [C][C][C][C]
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)

Generally for fake sets such as this, they are only allowed if there is actual art going on (you have Golbat, but that's it). Spoilers on their own aren't enough. I'll give this thread a chance to improve, but if I don't see any change within the next few weeks I will lock it.
 
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Oh u.

I'm only allowing each member to make a certain number of spoilers, and only because I want this to be the COMMUNITY's set, not just MINE. Someone just finished a Meowth card the other day but has problems that need to be fixed, and I just finished inking Magmar. Hold your horses you devil you ;3

Salivate is kinda weak. As this is the Platinum series, ASSUME DCE will never exist in the format. Other than that, I like the power on the X but think it should be changed to basic energy. Lastly, the attack on the X needs to be improved vastly, it's bad for an X and isnt really unique.

I like Charizard. But you know what, let's take off the coin flip. Moltres is a basic and does the same thing on its drop, as a Stage 2, Charizard can get more.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)

I've made further edits to the cards. Please let me know if they can be improved in any way.

I'm looking forward to seeing Magmar when it comes out. It sounds rather cool, just looking at the spoiler alone. Blowtorch is rather broken, though, maxing out at 120 damage. For a basic, that is pretty insane. Maybe x20 instead of x30.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)

171. Dragonite 4 Lv. X lv. 81 {C} 150 HP

Poke-body: Stressed wings- At the start of your opponents turn, they must flip a coin. If tails, they do not draw a card at the beginning of their turn.

Slash {C} 60
Tactical Stealth {C}{C}{C}{C}: 20X This attack does 20 damage times the amount of pokemon on the field. (both yours and your opponent's)

W: {C} X2
R: {F} -30
RC: {C}
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)

Dragonite needs serious revision. Also, do not use the picture symbols, they are much harder to keep track of.

On Charizard up the energy gotten to 2 and for Lickilicky, add 10 more HP to both of them and change KnockOut Lick maybe to KnockOut Tongue?

Anyway, first post is updated with....Shiny Magmar! It was a real pleasure to make.
 
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Hehe, I didn't see that it was Lapras 4 Lv.X.
Anyways here's Lapras 4.

Name: "Clair's" Lapras
Poke-Power: Water Absorb When you attach a "water" energy to Lapras 4, remove 1 damage counter from Lapras 4
Poke-Body: Wave Ride If Lapras 4 has any "Water" Energy attach to it, Lapras 4 has no retreat cost.
HP: 70
Level: 60
WW: Dive~30
Lapras 4 can't be attacked during your oppenet's next turn.

CCC: Horn Drill~60


Waekness: Metal+10
Resistence: Fire-20
RC: CC

Pokedex Data: It loves crossing the sea with people and Pokémon on it's back. It understands human speech.
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Magmar SH added!)

I've made even more updates to Lickilicky and Charizard. Thanks for your suggestions. Here are the latest spoilers:


Horsea Lv.12 HP 50 [W]
Basic Pokemon

[C] Dragon Breath
Choose one of your opponent's Pokemon. This attack does 10 damage to that Pokemon. (Do not apply weakness and resistance for benched Pokemon.)

[W][C] Natural Instinct 20+
If the defending Pokemon is an evolved Pokemon, Horsea does 20 damage plus 40 more damage to the defending Pokemon, and switch Horsea with one of your benched Pokemon.

Weakness: [L]
Resistance:
Retreat Cost: [C]


Seadra Lv.36 HP 90 [W]
Stage 1 (Evolves from Horsea)

Poke-Body: Toxin Vein
As long as Seadra is your active Pokemon, reduce all damage done to Seadra by 40 by your opponent's Poisoned Pokemon.

[W] Spinal Brush 10
The defending Pokemon is now Poisoned. In between turns, put 2 damage counters on the defending Pokemon instead of one.

[W][C] Whirlpool 40
The defending Pokemon can't retreat during your opponent's next turn.

Weakness: [L]+20
Resistance:
Retreat Cost:



I hope you like it. I wanted to take a creative route with Seadra, and came up with the following. The idea was that you Poison them, slowly killing them while reducing damage done to you (which is desperately needed considering the low HP of Seadra). To make matters worse, retreat is prevented with Whirlpool, guaranteeing a poison lock. I had to use a lot of creativity for this (even Horsea has a non-standard attack in Natural Instinct).
 
RE: DPPt: Time Capsule!(Set List Added!)(Magmar SH added!)

Light Venusaur said:
Hehe, I didn't see that it was Lapras 4 Lv.X.
Anyways here's Lapras 4.

Name: "Clair's" Lapras
Poke-Power: Water Absorb When you attach a "water" energy to Lapras 4, remove 1 damage counter from Lapras 4
Poke-Body: Wave Ride If Lapras 4 has any "Water" Energy attach to it, Lapras 4 has no retreat cost.
HP: 70
Level: 60
WW: Dive~30
Lapras 4 can't be attacked during your oppenet's next turn.

CCC: Horn Drill~60


Waekness: Metal+10
Resistence: Fire-20
RC: CC

Pokedex Data: It loves crossing the sea with people and Pokémon on it's back. It understands human speech.
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Lapras 4 is a Pokemon SP, and therefore hasno Pokedex data. 70 is way too low HP for an SP Lapras.I cannot fit a body, a power, and two attacks ontwo a card, and at any rate, they are very boring. Also SP weakness is always double.

You really gotta do the research. This isn't even Clair's, this is Lorelei's. Clair is a gym leader.

PokeChamp, the fixes are good and I like it, but I suggest you make the Poison attack the first one with say, 10 base damage, and then whirlpool 2 for 40 with no retreating. Stage 1's cannot afford to be even moderately slow in the Platinum format. Just think about how many playable Stage 1's you see these days, the number's low.
 
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Dictator Dauntless said:
Lapras 4 is a Pokemon SP, and therefore hasno Pokedex data. 70 is way too low HP for an SP Lapras.I cannot fit a body, a power, and two attacks ontwo a card, and at any rate, they are very boring. Also SP weakness is always double.

You really gotta do the research. This isn't even Clair's, this is Lorelei's. Clair is a gym leader.

PokeChamp, the fixes are good and I like it, but I suggest you make the Poison attack the first one with say, 10 base damage, and then whirlpool 2 for 40 with no retreating. Stage 1's cannot afford to be even moderately slow in the Platinum format. Just think about how many playable Stage 1's you see these days, the number's low.
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Excellent point. I made the switch. Overall Seadra would have potential in this format, but it is counterable by stuff like Gengar. Now Seadra can poison faster, and Whirlpool is the backup. That made the spoiler much better, IMHO.
 
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PokeChamp said:
Excellent point. I made the switch. Overall Seadra would have potential in this format, but it is counterable by stuff like Gengar. Now Seadra can poison faster, and Whirlpool is the backup. That made the spoiler much better, IMHO.
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You're welcome.

Now please, criticize me on the Magmar card, I cant do the next untilIvve been thoroughly criticized >_<
 
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Dictator Dauntless said:
You're welcome.

Now please, criticize me on the Magmar card, I cant do the next untilIvve been thoroughly criticized >_<
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Not much to criticize, IMHO. Definitely Blowtorch needs to be powered down a notch. With two Roseanne's Research (heck, I'd even play some Energy Search just for Magmar) you can do 120 damage for a single Energy. Discarding them means little as they can be retrieved through many methods. At the very minimum, lower the damage to x20. 120 damage for 1 is broken for a basic Pokemon. Not even SPs can do that much for that low. I'd even consider lowering the amount of Energy you're allowed to discard, as even 100 for 1 is still incredibly broken. Then, that x2 weakness... why? It is a basic Pokemon with high HP, and most Magmar have a +20 weakness instead of x2. Finally, seeing as he can do an extraordinary amount of damage, I'd consider upping his retreat cost to a reason two Energy.
 
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PokeChamp said:
Not much to criticize, IMHO. Definitely Blowtorch needs to be powered down a notch. With two Roseanne's Research (heck, I'd even play some Energy Search just for Magmar) you can do 120 damage for a single Energy. Discarding them means little as they can be retrieved through many methods. At the very minimum, lower the damage to x20. 120 damage for 1 is broken for a basic Pokemon. Not even SPs can do that much for that low. I'd even consider lowering the amount of Energy you're allowed to discard, as even 100 for 1 is still incredibly broken. Then, that x2 weakness... why? It is a basic Pokemon with high HP, and most Magmar have a +20 weakness instead of x2. Finally, seeing as he can do an extraordinary amount of damage, I'd consider upping his retreat cost to a reason two Energy.
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Yeah that's all good. I MEANT for his weakness to be +20, I guess I jsut brain-farted. I'll fix those later tonight.
 
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Blastoise? Already taken.

Poke Champ you're still allowed a little more if you like.
 
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Dictator Dauntless said:
Blastoise? Already taken.

Poke Champ you're still allowed a little more if you like.
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Okay. Is Cloyster still available? If so, I'd love to try my hand at making one (Cloyster is so awesome and yet so non-standard at the same time; he's epic).
 
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PokeChamp said:
Okay. Is Cloyster still available? If so, I'd love to try my hand at making one (Cloyster is so awesome and yet so non-standard at the same time; he's epic).
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Actually in the middle of drawing him right now and had plans. <3 Sorry.
 
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Dictator Dauntless said:
Actually in the middle of drawing him right now and had plans. <3 Sorry.
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Oh, okay, that's fine. How about Nidoqueen? I always liked her as a tech, perhaps I'll try to make her role as a main attacker?
 
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