Writing A Song that I Randomly Wrote

Negative Zero

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Winter Cell​

Its Winter
Winter with a cold night sky
Air enters through the bars
But it is so brutally cold..

Snow falls eternally from the sky
Its becoming relentless
I sit there in the cold
Unable to escape

Its because of you that I am in this winter cell.
My cell of eternal coldness
My cell of eternal winter

My tears are frozen ice cubes
My breath fogged up the cell wall
I'm unable to escape..
I'm here until I wither away in my cell.

I thought you would always be by my side
You were my sun, you were my freedom
Instead I'm here, repenting for your mistake
In the cold harsh winter..
That I know will never end...

Its because of you that I am in this winter cell
My cell of eternal coldness
My cell of eternal winter
I'll never see the light of familiar warmth
I'll never see your smiling face
I resent you for all you have done....

Its because of you that I am in this winter cell.
My cell of eternal coldness
My cell of eternal winter
This is my winter cell...
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Comments and suggestions are highly appreciated!

~NZ
 
This poem is good, the way you discribe things and you talk about the subject the whole way through, I am glad that you've shared this with us.
 
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