Writing A short Pokemon poem. (1)

[raichupika33]

Hey I am going to have a try at a short poem I have wrote.

Pokemon Challenge - By Raichupika33

Throw a Pokeball,
You could get a Pokemon thats tall,
Or one very small,
The challenge lasts forever,
But you could always be together,
Still as a unblown feather,
You can always be strong,
Like a Machamp the pain will last for long,
Or a little Pichu that can be cool,
Or a Buizel in the pool,
It doesn't need to be your dream,
Although that's what it doesn't seem,
The travels always are fun,
With a fire - type as hot as the sun,
You will always be a hero,
Negative points that will be zero,
The challenge will be hard,
A legendary Pokemon can be in your yard,
If there is no victory,
That is all ancient history,
Its about a Pokemon Challenge...

 

[PokeChamp]

RE: A short Pokemon poem.

Interesting...

One thing I want to point out:
Thats should That's

 

[raichupika33]

RE: A short Pokemon poem.

...O_______O.......

What does that mean?

 

[PokeChamp]

RE: A short Pokemon poem.

I guess he didn't like it, LOL. I, on the other hand, love it! Could I use it in my bio?

 

[raichupika33]

RE: A short Pokemon poem.

Sure! But say that I wrote it.

 

[Dark Marc]

RE: A short Pokemon poem.

Cool, I kinda LOl'd though... Sorry Big or small ah that made me laugh.
Anyway I loved it very good, make some more!

 

[raichupika33]

RE: A short Pokemon poem.

Thanks! I will probably write some more today.

 

[red blastoise]

Negative points that will be zero,
are you sure it shouldn't be
Negative points, that will be zero,
you know, with the "," after points.

 

[PokeChamp]

Sure! But say that I wrote it.

Cool, man. I love people from the UK, they are so awesome! My avy was imported from the UK as well!
Thank you, raichupika. No matter what anyone tells you, keep writing, you are doing great! I can't wait to see more from you!

 

[raichupika33]

Sure! But say that I wrote it.

Cool, man. I love people from the UK, they are so awesome! My avy was imported from the UK as well!
Thank you, raichupika. No matter what anyone tells you, keep writing, you are doing great! I can't wait to see more from you!

Thanks. I am quite different since I love writing at my age, well thats what people im my school are like.

 

[PokeChamp]

^ I know, that's quite uncommon nowadays! I love to write as well, which is why I wrote Team Galactic's Downfall. I put a short poem in it as well, it's in chapter four if you're interested.

 

[raichupika33]

Cool. I think I should read that, a Team Galactic article would be interesting.

 

[PokeChamp]

^ It's not an article, it's a story. I've already wrote seven chapters of it!

Anyways, I hope you continue your writing, as it is good work, some of the better work here on the beach, actually.

 

[raichupika33]

^ It's not an article, it's a story. I've already wrote seven chapters of it!

Anyways, I hope you continue your writing, as it is good work, some of the better work here on the beach, actually.

Wow, thanks! I read the story and I put a comment, I loved it!

 

[PokeChamp]

Yeah, I saw. Glad you enjoyed it! I think you might want to try your hand at making a fanfic. I think you'd do great!

 

[raichupika33]

I actually did, but people didn't like it. Maybe I should trya new one though...