Writing A poem for my lady

[Shining Suicune]

Here's a Haiku I wrote for my girlfriend:

A beautiful face...
A heart and soul of gold...
That is you, my love...

Please Cn'C!

 

[Axel]

That's an awesome poem, dude! (and deep)

 

[Shining Suicune]

That's an awesome poem, dude! (and deep)

Thanks! I'm not the best at writing poems, but I can be very deep at times.

 

[PDC]

It's Deep man.I wish i had someone who liked me.*sigh*

 

[raichupika33]

Wow thats quite good! And it is quite romantic for an 11 year old. No-ones too young for romance!

~Raichupika33~

 

[Flygon999]

Nice, heart gold and soul silver? Lol

 

[Plato]

It's really deep.

At first I thought it was a HGSS reference.

 

[Mr. Random]

Who knew kids like us could do romance?

That's really deep, I love it! But you should add another syllable on the second line, as haikus are 5-7-5 syllables.

 

[Shining Suicune]

Who knew kids like us could do romance?

That's really deep, I love it! But you should add another syllable on the second line, as haikus are 5-7-5 syllables.

I fogot that, shoot. Oh well, thanks for the comments, guys! It does look like a HGSS reference, but it's not.

 

[-Dialga Master-]

I little mature for someone your age? <.< Good job anyways.