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~Magma King~

~Magma King~

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ok i am writing a fic to go along with the game project.i have never wrote one before.i dont have long so i will only a little.

prologue:
the pits seemed endless.they're spirals leading to something unseen.but they knew what was in there.maxie and archie stared into them.the silence not interrupted by the stir of the mountain."maxie,do you think",archie spoke quietly,his voice going with his age"do you think we have a chance?".Maxie knew what this ment.he pulled something from his pocket,along with archie.the orbs gleamed.the pits bubbled up.shining patterns appeared.they grinned.the sky turned bright.it was shining oranges,hurting theyre eyes.3 figures watched.two with distinguished black costumes,red R's on they're shirts.the other wore black,with long black hair reaching down to her waist,shiny and splitting into two.she had vicous eyes,and watched anxiously.a huge flash appeared.blinded,archie and maxie felt the painful sting of a punch."quickly!",the woman shouted,"the missions a bust,theres no time!".a final clash of lightning,and a blinding light holding for about 3 seconds...it was over.archie and maxie forced themselves from the floor.they stared at the orbs.they had lost they're colour.grimly,they turned back...

1 year later...
"ughhh",he said,"just five more...."
"AARRKK!!"
"gaghhhh!why does it have to do that?"Matthew woke up,groaning.he had long blonde hair covering his eyes,and had pale blue eyes.he whiped off the bed cover and whent downstairs."why you!",Matthew had been wanting sleep,seemingly forgetting the day ahead of him."arrrK..",Vulcrest fled to the windowsill.
"ahhh",his mum giggled,"i had to get you up,and you seemed...."
"but mum,couldnt i have just had five more minutes,its only 7:00"
"but you have been waiting for today for so long Matthew"
Matthew suddenly remembered.it was this day he could go and get his first pokemon,and start his journey.quickly,he got dressed and left the house,his breakfast untouched...
"So you are here,just in time",prof. ivy said,"these are the last pokemon left".she pointed to the three pokeballs on the floor.take you're pick."ok lets see",matthew said anxiously.a pokeball opened."sssssttt!",a dark blue worm like pokemon popped out the pokeball,with large pincirs and volcanic stripes through it."hmmmmm",said Matthew,judjing it.!"so you want burnel?",said ivy."hmmm,no thanks".Another one popped out."raa!",said a cute turqoise pokemon,with 4,short stubby legs and a posh hat.it looked like a baby and obviously required care."ok!",said matthew,"I'll take it!"
."But are you sure?"prof Ivy enquired,"it is only a child and well,needs lots of care,mabye you"....
"I'm sure prof",matthew said,and immediately ran out the lab."take good care of allrince!"prof ivy shouted.he found a quite spot and sat down.suddenly he heard some footsteps."hey kid",it was a woman wearing all black,with long shiny black hair spliting in two at the end."hand over that pokemon,it'll come in handy".
"No way,you'll never get allrince!".
"look,i have an empire going here!".
matthew just stared."you always take things the hard way don't you?",she said,"lets battle!".
"I'll take you on!",said matthew,"errr,whats a battle?".....
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hahahah the guy didn't know what a battle was :p lol !!!!! good fic continue it soon
 
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"hey!".A fat boy with a blue shirt too small for him,shorts,glasses(to help him see) and holding an ice cream ran towards him.
"hi",said matthew,"do you know what a pokemon battle is?"
The boy talked in a nerdy voice,and snorted alot."a pokeemon battle*snort*,is when two pokeemon engage in physical and special contact*snort*,until one is knocked out concious".
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"could you repeat that in english?"
"they hurt each other"
"oh thank you!","so how do I make my little prince battle?"
"according to my data*snort* allrince learn two attacks at this level."
"what attacks?"
"tackle and growl"
"okay so how do they do that?"
"tell allrince to use tackle attack"
"ok i get it now"
"kiddies!,lets go,chloroseed!!"a green pokemon with a spinning top like build instead of legs,cute black eyes a large head and long arms.
"i got a pokedex lets check this out!"...
"CHLOROSEED,THE VIRUS PLANT POKEMON.CHLOROSEED DOES NOT HAVE A SET FORM YET,HENCE CHANGES SHAPE ALOT.IT CAN CHANGE ITS VINES INTO CLAWS AND FISTS"
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"now we're ready lets go!Alrince,use tackle attack!"
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lol you're gonna kill me HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA (was that thing that went flying my stomach?) lol the nerdy guy :p *snort* HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA
 
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"naaa!",Allrince pushed its head forward.however,having such a massive body,stubby legs all sprawled out,and still a baby,Allrince's body remained still.
"haahahah!!!that pipsqueeak cant even attack!" "Ok our turn Chloroseed use tackle!".Chloroseeds arms formed huge fists and pounded at Allrince.
"naaaaaaahhhhh!!!!",this time it was wailing.Allrince was determined,but couldnt do anything to stop chloroseed."chloroseed,bash it up!"
"naaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh!!!!!"Allrince wailed.
"Allrince,hold you're tackle attack!"Matthew called.Allrince ducked its head down,its hat covering his eyes."Oh,you've gave up,just not attacking at all now?Oh well,chloroseed,finish it off!".Chloroseed charged at Allrince with huge fists.But Allrince could see it all in slow motion.Chloroseed lept into the air,about to land onto Allrince.
"Naaaaaaaahhh!!!",Allrince let loose its tackle attack,swaying its hat and head ferociously,the diamonds striking Chloroseed."Chloro!...",Chloroseed whent flying,its body parts going all gooey,his bottom part falling until it slushed into a big puddle."gggg",chloroseed drowned in itself,struggling to get up....
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"what?!Chloroseed!grrrr..."
"haha!"Matthew shouted,"good work Allrince!"
"naaah",Allrince said with a nod showing satisfaction.
"Bah.I have to go now.Matters far more important than sticking here with you",she said.
"I wonder what she's up to...",matthew murmered,not sure if he was thinking it or actually spoke."well",the boy snorted,"team ro....
"OH NO,you are NOT going through that again!"matthew gasped.
"ok,wait a second I just need to do something.By the way,my name is Ray."
"Ok,i'll just look at this signpost".Nervously,ray pulled out a blue walkie talkie kind of object."Hello,its ray*snort*,bad news."
A young voice,seeming to be about 9 or 10 replied."Bad news?What news?"
"this boy",Ray said,"he even beat the rocket*snort* agent".
"The rockets are still around?!how come!"
"Unknown Darren,but they are still around.whoever attacked Archie *snort*was found to be a rocket as well."
"They shouldnt be a problem,why would they come to the peek of balance mountain,besides,we have guards blocking the way".Groaning voices replied"yes sirrrr".
"Hey!"it was Matthew,"we have to go!".
"quick!"Ray slammed the walkie talkie down.
"We can go through either two routes",Matthew scanned the sign,"Overgrown forest lets go!"
"couldnt we go through new forest?"
"Relax,how much harm could a forest do?".....

"alot of harm",Ray replied
"explain how,smarty pantz!"
"don't be so childish".
"AAAKK!"
"what?!"
"nothing"
"grrrrrr",Ray clenched his fists.he'd had enough already.
"AAK!!"matthew shouted again.
"stop it".
"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAK!!!"
"I said stop it"
"ssssst!"came another voice.
"quickly gyrados!!".A large red pokemon in the shape of a serpent came out its pokeball.
"Cool gyrados.its red!"Matthew said with a sparkle in his eye.Gyrados whiped round.They saw a small green spider like pokemon."Gyrados,bite!".Gyrados launched itself at the pokemon,revealing its large teeth.Matthew had scanned his pokedex."how do i catch these?!"
Ray put on his nerdy voice."you need a pokeeball to capture"....
"Ok,I think i have one of those",Matthew rummaged through his pocket,"Ok here it is!" Matthew pulled out a pokeball,not sure of what to do."Chuck it at spinarak!"Ray shouted.
"Are you crazy?!It'll be out cold!"
"Just chuck it!"
"Ok!here goes!"Matthew threw the ball.His throwing skills had much to be desired,as the ball hit a tree.Luckily,it bounced off and stopped in midair over the spinarak.the ball fell to the floor.It started to shake,and wobble,until it rested."Yes!"cried matthew,"I caught a spinarak!"
"well hurry up its going to be dark soon",Ray murmered.The two walked across the forest until reaching a clearing."Phew!"Matthew said,exhausted and running out of breath.
"Hey",whispered matthew,"somebodys here.Matthew lept to his feet and looked in front of him.two people came out of the bush.One was a man,with a white and blue vest,blue trousers and a weird hat.The other was a young boy,seemingly about nine,With brown eyes,blonde hair,a leather jacket blue trousers and a band on his head."Hello",said the boy,"I'm Darren".
"soooo?"said Matthew.
"Hey!"shouted Darren angrily.He calmed down,then spoke again."Grr,I bought a few friends with me.Say hello to Carvahna!"....
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hi!ok writing more.this should be exciting:
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Matthew watched in horror,as the lake beside them started to bubble up."Uh-oh!"Matthew started to run,as faces appeared in the water.
"Ray?"Matthew noticed,to his asstonishment,that ray was already gone.Without time to think,Matthew tried the steeping stones.....
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"SORRY FOR THAT",said Darren on the walkie talkie,"BUT HOPEFULLY WE DITCHED THAT BOY".
"Don't worry",replied Ray,"anyways,he's a little thick headed.He shouldnt be able to get out".
"Owww!"Matthew shook the last carvahna off his foot."what?"thought ray."How did he get...."
"Come on,lets go!"Matthew called.Ray quickly put away the walkie talkie.The two walked until they reached a desert,and felt the sand kicking at they're knees."Hey ray.Whats that building with the brown roof."
"The city gym",replied Ray,"its where you fight the gym leader".
"Oh yeah,those things!"....Matthew hadn't a clue what he was talking about,but whent inside.Matthew and Ray listened intently to noises in the stadium.
"Felicity!Felicity!Felicity!Gooooo......Felicity!"A teenage girl,as it seemed,whith long silver hair,hazel eyes,and a white suit with a short dress stood triumphantly in front of a young boy.The boy left,huffing and snorting."The chearleaders continued to chant "Felicity!".
"Hey!Gym persony thing!I challenge you to a duel!"Matthew shouted.
"Battle",corrected felicity
"Whatever.Lets go!"
"fine",said felicity,"Go,machop!"a blue,humanoid muscular pokemon popped out its ball.
"Machop!Machop!He will win!Beat you up till you're hope is thin!"chanted the chearleaders.
"Very nice",said Matthew,"But it is inferior compared to"..."Spinarak!"
"ha!"said Felicity,"Lets show him girls!Machop,low kick!"Machop charged towards Spinarak,but Spinarak shot a string to the ceiling to dodge,as Machop skid into the wall."Now Spinarak,poison sting!"Spinarak shot pink spikes from its mouth,pelting machop."Maaachop!"machop cried,as it got more and more aggitated.
"Karate chop now machop!"Machop jumped into the air,then struck the floor with its fists,shaking the whole stadium."Sss!"Spinarak cried as it fell from the roof,pelting Machop's head,leaving both pokemon knocked out."Return Spinarak!"Matthew called.
"Machop!"called Felicity."This has never happened before,i've never lost a pokemon"....
"Ok!"shouted Matthew,"Go allrince!"Matthew threw his pokeball at the roof
"Naaah!"cried Allrince.
"You remember how good we did last time?Lets keep it up!"
"Still not good enough,right Granice?"Felicity threw her pokeball.A craggy rock,levitating in the air,with ice patches on it and cute green eyes burst out its ball.
"Naaah!"a small water missile popped out Allrince's mouth.It struck granice as it cried in pain."Grrrrrrraaaa!!"
"Allrince?"said matthew,asstonished at this,"what was that?"
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RE: a new world(fiction based on iolite pokemon and places)

What characters are there going to be?
 
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I cant reveal them all.it'll spoil the fun.Anyways,I won't spoil anything,but anyone figured the connection between Ray and Darren yet?soon,the truth will be unravelled.
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"Water gun",said Ray,"Its good against rock types like hers".
"Okay!Allrince,water gun!!"Allrince fired another water missile,this time harder,striking granice."Grrrrrrraaaaaaaaa!"Granice shouted with a cry of pain."Granice diagonal until you reach Allrince!"Granice's agility dodged the water guns,until striking Allrince."Naaaah!"it cried.
"Repeat it Granice!".Allrince couldnt land a shot on Granice,yet it was being badly hurt."Allrince,concentrate,do you're thing!"Matthew called.
Allrince frowned.His eyes with a look of determination.He saw granice come to attack from the right,and swayed aside."Naaaaah!!!!!!!"Allrince shot a huge jet of water straight into the middle of Granice,Knocking it out."We did it!"Matthew called.
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Ray tapped on the button on his walkie talkie angrily."WHATS UP RAY?"
"I can't believe it,Ma-I mean the boy has defeaten Felicity!"
"WHAT?WITH A BRAIN LIKE HIS?!THIS IS A SERIOUS PROBLEM."
"I'll try and get rid of him sir.but it won't be as easy as I had planned so."
"WELL.MAKE SURE ITS DONE.ITS NOT LONG BEFORE WE EXCECUTE OUR MASTER PLAN.
"Understood",Ray put his walkie talkie down.
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"And you're official boulderbadge...
"Hey!Look at Allrince!"Allrince was begining to shine.White light was engulfing him,until his shape started changing...
"welllll!"cried the pokemon.
"What happened??Where did Allrince go?!"
"It evolved",said felicity.
"errr,yay!I've always wanted that to happen!"Matthew pulled out his pokedex.
WELLRINCE.THE SEA SERPENT POKEMON.IT IS OFTEN CONSIDERED TO BE ONE OF THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POKEMON.IT LIVES IN DEEP OCEANS AND COMES UP TO HELP POKEMON IN NEED.
"cool",said matthew.
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I like the story so far:)
 
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"well wellriss hahaha!"said Matthew.
"Ugh",said Ray,"you have the worst sense of humour out of anyone i've seen.anyways,lets take the spin teleport."
"where does that take us?"
"to the graveyard."
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"Get moving!we need those orbs reactivated in under 20hours!"said a rocket.
"Hey you don't seem to be helping!"replied another.
"Look",it was the agent again,"If you don't hurry up groudon and kyogre will be sleeping for a loooong time".
"errr,yes madam!"said the first.
"Whatever",said the agent,realising the idiots who where working for her,"I'll be at balance mountain,hurry up".
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"Hey guys",said matthew cheerfully,"have any of you seen a graveyard?"Three rockets came infront of matthew."Sorry",said one,"this project is top secret.shoo"
"Oo can i see?"
"tOP-SECRET!"said the rocket.
"please?"
"no!Get out!".The rockets kicked Matthew out of the yard,where as Ray decided to run out.
"Hey lookie!Another one of those Gym things",said Matthew.
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"I'm sorry",said morgan,"but i can't,there are some rockets downtown but i cant get them out because i am here doing training."
"I can go!"replied Matthew.
"Okay",said morgan,"Use this pokemon to help,its an infestect".
"Errr,cool?"
"Yes,errr,cool".Matthew sent out infestect.it had dusty brown colours,the shape of a bee like creature and 2 large pincirs.it had a long snout."Ok,lets go!"
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"Infestect,do the thing that the guy told you to do!"Infestect put its long snout on one of the code locks.He began to suck,until the code was broken."Great job!"said Matthew.
"Hey how'd you get in here?"It was a rocket.
"Top secret",said Matthew proudly.
"GRRRRR,Scaffin go!"A dirty red bird pokemon with a curved beak came out its pokeball.
"Lets look this one up!"said Matthew.
SCAFFIN.THE SCAVENGER POKEMON.IT USES ITS CURVED BEAK TO SCRAPE DUST OFF ROCKS,WHICH IT EATS.IT IS USED TO VERY LITTLE FOOD.
"Get on with it!"said the rocket.
"okay!go,Wellrince!"
"wwellllllllll!!"
"Scaffin,peck atttack!"Scaffin charged at wellrince,but doing little damage.
"Okay wellrince!blast it off with water gun.Hey cool water gun!"
"Blinding ink",said Ray.Scaffin continued to charge,until hitting a gravestone.
"Skawwww"cried Scaffin,swaying dizzilly,until collapsing onto the floor.
"What?!it can't be!"shouted the rocket.Matthew ran to a small control panel set up near a huge memorial."Always press the red button",hummed Matthew.The button read,TRANSPORT.
Suddenly,the two orbs dissapeared."Whoops,said Matthew".
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"So you stopped the rockets?"asked Morgan intently.
"Yeah",said Matthew,"easy job".
"Mabye so,but mabye this won't be."
"Oh yeah!"said Matthew,"My gym battle!"
"Then lets get started."
 
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"We choose one pokemon each",said Morgan.
"Ok"said Matthew.
"Good.lets go!absol!"In battle,Morgan was a different person.He talked in a harsh voice.
Before them stood a 4 legged pokemon with royal white fur,blue face and claws and a black scythe behind his face."Ok, You're turn spinarak!"
"ssssssp!"
"Quick absol!swords dance!"
"Spinarak!string shot!"Absol was tripped up by a streem of long, thick silk.
"Swords dance to break out!"
"Wait stop!!"It was a small child."I had to get somebody.theres something going on at balance mountain".Morgan and Matthew looked at each other.
morgan:
matthew:*blink*
morgan:
morgan:
matthew:*blink*blink*blink*
morgan:Stop that!!!!
matthew:sorry
morgan:now change the way the text is set out to how it was!!!
"Sorry",said Matthew
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would write more but must go to bed.do more in the morning.:)
 
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errrrr.... matthew has gym battles very fast... aand can u post pics of allrince and wellrince? becaus I don't undersatnd some things...
 
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allrince::
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wellrince:
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edit:the gym battle isnt finished
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"I'll go!"said Matthew.
"Ok,we'll finish our battle later,but for now,hurry up"
"Come on!"said the boy,"I'll take you there!"
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"Soo this is the mountain cavern",said Matthew,"Ray,whats the....."
"Ray?"Matthew whispered.he'd dissappeared again."Ok lets go".Matthew hadn't gone far until he had met another person..."Who are you?"Matthew asked.He was talking to a person with a red hoodie with a capital M on it."Gerrrrr",he said,"we shouldn't have gone into a fight with those aquas.now everyones ran out of pokemon".
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"Stop!"somebody shouted.
"Huh?"
"You cannot pass"
"Oh for you're information yes i can!"
"Pyrock,stop him!!!!!!"The man was wearing a red and grey coat with an M similar to the others.he had grey trousers,red hair and blue eyes.He threw the pokeball.A red pokemon,made of magma,with lumps of rock in its back and huge claws.
"Wellrince,you can hose him down,go!"
"Pyrock,slash it!"
"Dodge Wellrince!then blinding ink!"Wellrince jumped over pyrock,came behind it,stepped back then fired a stream of dirty water.Pyrock immideatley covered its eyes,then sank to the floor."Pyrock!"the man shouted,"I,Maxie,defeated,again!If only i had more pokemon.unfortunately these two kids stomped me!"
"Soo i pass now?"
"Yes,you pass now!"...
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"Urgh",said a man in the same uniform as the man in the forest,"We shouldn't of battled those magma.now we are all out of pokemon.Darren and our admin will be furious".Matthew had just realise he was on a mountain now,and started to climb,until he reached the top.....
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"What?!??!"It was Darren,standing infront of two pits,obviously expecting Not to see Matthew,"How is he still here?!Ray!!I thought you got rid of him!"
"I don't know sir",It was Ray,in blue and white outfit,similar to the other people in the cavern.
"Dont worry sir,I'll get rid of him now!"Ray pulled out a pokeball."Gyrados,go!"
"I'll help!"It was darren,"Mantalord go!"A huge Blue and grey manta ray,flying in the air and with small fish pokemon under its wing came out its ball.Its forehead shaped a tiara.
"Hey!"shouted Matthew,"you tricked me!!"
"As if you've just realised"said Ray.
"Grrrrrrr!!!,ariados,wellrince!!!!!!"the two popped out they're pokeballs,looking ready for action.
"Stop,don't worry Matthew,I've been waiting to do this for some time"...
 
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"Why'd you want to help me?whos side are you on?!"
"Nobodys,but these two deserve whats coming for them".Replied the agent.
"Ok i'll only use one.Wellrince return!"
"Right then,Nitrode go!"A dark green gas pokemon with lots of heads and eyes appeared.
"Gyrados hydro pump!!"ray called.
"Nitrode just charge at it!"Nitrode suprisingly,charged throught the hydro pump without being hurt."Now poison gas!"
"ariados sludge bomb on Mantalord!"A huge pile of sludge was fired at mantalord.
"Mantalord protect!"a huge sheild covered Mantalord preventing damage."Now all attack nitrode!"
"Hey!fine!Nitrode,choking technique!"Nitrode charged at Mantalord and wrapped itself around it.Quickly it sped down to the ground,Mantalord following."Gyrados stop Nitrode!"Gyrados launched an attack but missing because of Nitrodes speed."Sludge bomb while you have the chance ariados!"Ariados shot a ball of sludge at Gyrados knocking it to the floor.Meanwhile,Nitrode had slammed itself against the floor knocking out Mantalord and itself immediately.
"Nitrode return!"
"Mantalord return!"The two pokemon were returned to their pokeballs.
"Hah!"said Ray,"I'll stomp you know!"
"Spinarak,behind you!Quick!"
"Huh?!"
"Fooled ya!Ariados string shot!"Gyrados was wrapped up and crashed to the ground."Now sludge bomb!a powerful one this time!"Ariados launched an extremeley powerful sludge bomb at gyrados,as gyrados lay there,eyes shut.
"G...G...Gyrados!Return!"Ray returned his Gyrados immediately.
"Humph!"shouted Darren,"You spoiled brats!I didnt get what i wanted!I didn't whant to do all this!You've ruined my life!!"
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"Yes!",said the agent,"Ripe and ready for capture!!"
"What are you talking about?!"replied Matthew.
"Oh you silly boy!"she said,"You've just cleared these kids out the way!Groudon!Kyogre!Rise!"
The agent pulled out two orbs,both filled with darkness."These orbs are re purified!These ones will let me control them!"she shone the two orbs.
"no they wont!"said Matthew,"I transported them before they were finished!"
"Idiot!"She replied,"you don't know what you've just done!"....
The two pits started to bubble.Something rose from the aquatic pit.A large blue pokemon,With two great wing like fins,embodied with a pattern and with a grey underbelly.It was being held up by a water twister."Kyogre"Whispered the agent.The magma pit unleashed a storm of lava,and from it rose another beast.this one stood on two legs,had a smooth red body and tail with spikes on its sides.its head Had spikes two,Gritted teeth,and a dark grey underbelly.It had claws and was also embodied with a pattern.This one stood in the pit.The beasts screamed their battle crys."Groudon and Kyogre,what have you done?!"The agent shouted.Groudon pulled itself out the pit."AAGGGHH!"Ray screamed,as groudon lifted him from the ground."Uh oh!"said Matthew.He quickly took the two orbs and slammed them on the ground.Groudon screeched,lifted his claws,and then put Ray down.Kyogre was lifted from the twister,then immediately dived back in.Groudon faced the pit,next to it,but turned round!Groudon roared at Matthew."Wellrince go!",he said,"Blinding ink quickly!"Wellrince fired a stream of black ink into Groudons eyes.Groudon screamed,put his claws over his face,then stumbled backwards.Groudon tripped,then fell back first into the pit.The sudden impact of magma made him scream again,and his claws and face trying to pull himself back up to the surface.Groudon,only one claw left,finally let go,screeching his battle cry ...
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"Excuse me,could you follow me please,you errr,you're mum called",said the woman,she had purple hair with gold pins through it,a fluffy red cloak,was holding a book and had a kind of dark side to her face."Ok i'll use that telephone box over there"Replied Matthew.
"errrrrrrr",said the woman,realising the faults in her plan,"No you won't."
"Oh dont worry,I'll use this tele-
"Look!"said the woman,"You're missing the point!you have to!"As she spoke,lots of rocket members drew closer,each holding guns in their hands."Well,errr"<said Matthew.
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"So what about my mum?"said Matthew,in his cold cell.
"*sigh*don't you realise i tricked you?"
"You didnt trick me.you held guns to my head."
"Well poo to you.goodbye!I have important things to do!"Matthew sat in his cell.only a miracle could save him.....He sat there trapped in a team rocket base.hopefully,he thought,there would be a way....
ZZZZZZZZZOOOOOOIIINNG!it was the kind of sound you'd expect when a computer crashes.But a few secends later,a huge crash was heard.A BANG!Then an ear peircing screech.the roof flew off,the windows smashed,the earth shook.The sky was filled with bright oranges."Quick,Giovanni!"shouted a woman with fluffy red hair,a dark face and a rocket coat.along with her was the woman with the pins,three team rockets and a dark man with a black suit and slick brown hair."This is far better than we thought!"shouted the red haired woman,a rocket executive.Around them was completely fire and rubble.In front of them stood they're dreams;A huge pokemon,with a shell with craters in its back,huge wings,superhero eyes(black)with a smaller red one inside made up his face.no mouth or nose or ears etc.It had tiny(in comparison)legs with talons,and even smaller clawed arms.It had a kind of mane resembling the sun,and a hypnotic pattern in one crater.It was around 20ft and was coloured with bright oranges and purples(Legs arms feet and hypno pattern). "Orlight",whispered the man,Giovanni.the beast lifted its wings and head."Quick!"he shouted,"Load up the mechanics!".A huge metal arm decended from the ground.it fired gas from the tips of its fingers.Usually a pokemon would faint at the instant,but orlight stood up.though it was struggling.Matthew couldnt leave his rescuer,so pressed all the buttons on the control pannel.Suddenly a pokemon whooshed into action,sucking on the control panel.within a matter of seconds the computer was down.The pokemon,found to be an infestect,whizzed off.With a heave of its wings(They couldnt help him fly)orlight levitated,firing a mighty blast of orange,then flying off."Grrrrr!"growled giovanni,"you screwed our chance!we could of-Enough!"Giovanni cut himself off,"You must be punnished,nidoking!"A purple pokemon with a horn,white belly and claws broke free of its pokeball...
 
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see? the good events happen too fast. man, this should have happened after or before the 6th or 7th gym
 
RE: a new world(fiction based on iolite pokemon and places)post at pokemon iolite for a chance to see you're pokemon in

I don't really understand who's who.
 
RE: a new world(fiction based on iolite pokemon and places)post at pokemon iolite for a chance to see you're pokemon in

"Wellrince go!"Wellrince came out its ball.it didnt look to lively.It was choking,and coughing,with its head down low."Hmmmmm!"said Matthew,"the fumes are hurting wellrince!they don't affect nidoking!"
"Meh",said Giovanni,"if he was REALLY strong he'd ignore them!"Matthew rubbed his chin.Quickly,he bolted across the field,in hope of escape."Come back!"Giovanni shouted.
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"Thanks!"said Matthew.He took his pokemon from nurse joy.Suddenly,there was a burst through the door.Giovanni collapsed,panting for breath."Healed now?!"he shouted,"that won't do-".......Giovanni charged into the emergency room."Cross the red wire with the-"Pokemon started wailing.The power shut off.Electricity was being drawn to giovannis machine."Using this!"he said,"the pokemon center will fail!These pokemon will be easy pickings!!MWUHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!"Giovanni seemed to go a little crazy.mabye it was age.Suddenly,the power all started up again.A huge black pokemon,in the shape of a bomb stood there,pumping electricity into the center."No!"Giovanni shouted,"Nidoking stop it!"Nidoking charged at the pokemon."Boomba psychic!"came a voice.A blue glow surrounded nidoking."Gah!"Giovanni stepped back,"hmmmmmmm",Giovanni pulled out a knife."Don't move!Or dustox gets it!"
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VERY short today,because its a little late.may update with a little more though.
 
RE: a new world(fiction based on iolite pokemon and places)post at pokemon iolite for a chance to see you're pokemon in

those guys are professional murderers...
 
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