Writing Shaymin's "Web" Comics!

Discussion in 'Creative Works' started by The Last Shaymin, Apr 14, 2018.

  1. The Last Shaymin Only $9.99!
    The Last Shaymin

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    go fish.jpg
    First color comic!

    Not to sound whiny or anything, but can I have some feedback?
     
    Last edited: May 31, 2018


  2. GamePhoenix Absolute Mad Lad
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    As someone who reads a lot of comics, these are pretty good! I Like the art style as well, it has a charm kind of like GradeAUnderA's videos do. I like the puns and wordplay a lot, everyone has made me chuckle so far. Also, the name ('web" comics) is pure gold!
     
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  3. AggroAggron Pokemon "Specialist"
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    Lol you told me to read this a ton irl, but its good anyways. xD
     
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  4. The Last Shaymin Only $9.99!
    The Last Shaymin

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    sorry about the slow post... Webtoon style comic! how do you like it?
    monster.jpg
     
  5. The Last Shaymin Only $9.99!
    The Last Shaymin

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    hopefully this will make up for how bad last comic was :( fan.jpg
     
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  6. Lord Goomy Got Goomies?
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    What’s to feed back about? These are PERFECT!!!!
     
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  7. The Last Shaymin Only $9.99!
    The Last Shaymin

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    Thanks!

    For feedback, I'm looking for opinions of art style, story, etc. If one of them is complete garbage, TELL ME. PLEASE.
     

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