Manetric Card...

ONIXwky

Aspiring Trainer
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Haven't faked in a while (atleast 5 months) and I wanted to get back into it. So here's one of my newest cards;


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I've been thinking of doing a whole set soon, so this would be the style of it. Just wanted to get people's opinions. :)
 
Also the Illus. is Ken Sugimori.
Plz fix it be4 I report u for art theft.
 
Um, woah. First of all its not Sugimori..secondly report me? Wow.


Its actually by someone named yodana. I just forgot to put the credit on the actual card.


Chill out.
 
Well put the credit^

Advice:
Center the attacks
To much HP
To much power
To high a retreat cost
Resitance -30 is in the wrong area
Some of your sizes are off (Hp font size)
Try to use an actual card to help you reference the layout
Don't forget the set number
If you can make the "Evolves from" one line, unless it doesn't fit (ex's have this problem)
Center the Sugimori Prevo pic.
Don't put the holo in front of the Main Pokemon (Unless you ment to do this, but then I would suggest to do a sort of Delta foil)

Lengthy^ lol and GL
 
If you don't know whos it is state the fact...or find new art...or *make your own*(then you will now whos it is)

nintendo jr
What do you mean by that?
 
70 is to much^ Milotic and Gyrados are the only pokemon that get extra power due to their extrememly *lame* 30 hp basics. And Milotic DF has only one attack, and requires 2 specified energy's and a colorless, and to top it off he has no resistance.
 
Why do you guys care about symantics?
All hes asking is if you thought he did a good job.
He didn't ask for why you think the attacks suck.
 
after the Fact that it is Broken and that it is on the small size, you did a VERY GOOD Job.
 
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