Writing The War Witin (Poem) Please Comment!

Clownshateu2

RIP Pokemon TCG: 1996 - 2011.
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I use this poem, no matter if I am sad or happy, if I have succeded or failed, but everyone can relate to this. Well, I hope you like my Poem called "The War Within"-

There is always a war; with and without sin
that rages on constantly within
It dosn't matter how much distrought
it all ends to how hard you have fought

Please give critisim and give an example of how this relates to yourself.
 
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