The States of Vancouver, Noobenschire

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Ill Manors

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In this universe we call infact a universe, Pokémon were a little different. They were known as Ploks and every one mutated from its Pokémonish form. Take poor Bulbasaur, the bulb on its head has become alive and is stuck on Bulbasaur's head :[

Let's begin now shall we...

September 11th, 2021, 10:12 AM, Pencilvania
I need to get out of here, real bad. Bulbaplok is trying to eat its own head, Charmanplok has giant claws ready to chop me up and Squirplok now has cannons and a weird head. Im becoming paranoid, so paranoid, I just need to.....

September 11th, 2021, 15:27PM, MBW, Roads of Pencilvania
"Wow, I think we need to help this guy huh Lenny?" this weird hillbilly asked him.
"Yeah, I think we sho...wait, since when did I pick you up?" Lenny replied.
"I snuck in the back while you were at WallMart." the hillbilly replied.
"Dang, fine, lets help this guy in distress." Lenny said rushing off in his MBW to the house of distress of Pencilvania.

September 11th, 2021, 17:11PM, House, Pencilvania
"Wow Lenny, look at this guy. Hes all battered." the hillbilly told him.
"Great Billy, if you didnt want a haircut, we would have gotten here sooner." Lenny told Billy the hillbilly.
"Save yourselves.....I can't go on." the injured man told them.
"Were taking you with us. I need to replace Billy." Lenny told this man.
"K. The name is Graham. Nice to meet you." Graham told them getting up slowly but surely.

September 11th, 2021, 17:17PM, MBW, Roads of Pencilvania
"Ah, you never told me all Ploks could fly and shoot lasers out of their eyes to destroy MBWs!" Lenny shouted driving for his life avoiding the lasers that these Ploks were shooting at them.
"Sorry I was injured and you didnt give me time to tell you!" Graham said sarcastically, still being injured as he is.

At that point, Squirplok, the heaviest Plok out of those three Ploks jumped onto the windscreen which had an impact that was so fatal, it felt like an anvil falling on someone's foot. Unfortunately, at that very moment in Washingmachineton D.W.M, an anvil did indeed fall on someone's foot. We dont know how long this guy will stay there for but he will be in this story in some way.

"Ah, Squirplok!" Graham shouted.
"Muhahahahahaha. We shall destroy you aaaaaaaaalllllllllllllllll!!!!!" Squirplok shouted evilly.
"They can talk?!" Lenny asked with a face of being annoyedishness.
"Yeah, I guess I forgot to mention that too huh? Hehehehe. Oh yeah. We have Plokballs. Squirplok, return. Bulbaplok, return and Charmanplok, you return also." Graham commanded as they went into their balls.
"Now, out with ya!" Graham shouted throwing out the balls to Washingmachineton.

September 30th, 2021, 14:10PM, Washingmachineton Hospital, Washingmachineton D.W.M

"Im finally out after that stupid guy threw an anvil on my foot. Does he even know how much that thing weighs?!" The guy said, on crutches.
"Hum, what are those on the ground? Are they Plokballs? Best find out. Come on out!" the injured man said releasing the three Ploks at the risk of his own life.

What will happen to this guy? What is the future of our dear but deadly Ploks? Stay tuned.

If anyone wants to be in this, just pick a State of Vancouver but you wont have Ploks. Just say your name, age, gender, good/bad.

I know, this is a sort of comedy but nowhere near as good as bacon's.
 
Thanks for the feedback. Im trying to think of good names for each state which are copies of the United States:

Pennsylvania - Pencilvania
Washington - Washingmachineton.

Are you good or bad Zaroco? It isnt that nessecary but it would be okay to know.

-EDIT- Chapter 2 will hopefully be up when I get a character or two.

-EDIT 2- I forgot twice, these people drive cars and stuff so you want them to be adults really.
 
You can be young but it suits the story a bit better if the characters are a bit older. Chapter 2 coming soon.
 
Here it is, the second part of The States of Vancouver, Noobenschire:

"Ooh, Ploks. Hi fellas." the injured man named Shaun said.
"We have come to destroy the earth muahahahhahahaha!" Squirplok shouted.
"Huh, what?!" Shaun asked.
"I mean, um, um, um...erg?" Squirplok said.

October 3rd, 2021, 12:13 PM, House, Washingmachineton D.W.M.
"Oooooooooooooooow! What in the blazes was that for?!" Shaun shouted.
"Erm, I burnt you with a spoon?" Squirplok said with an evil smile.

October 3rd, 2021, 12;13 PM, Pencilvania
"Where do you think you threw the Ploks to?" Lenny asked Graham.
"Dunno. Hell maybe?" Graham replied with sarcasm.
"Our next stop will be in Illibois. Its only 200 miles from here." Graham said.
"Okay. Illibois it is but I dont know why were going there." Lenny replied.

October 3rd, 2021, 2:18 PM, Aksala
"Brrr, its freezing here." A guy named LJ said to himself.
"Stop your whining and more apple-bobbing." his boss ordered.
"No. Im not going into a bowl of water just for an apple. I dont even get payed for god's sake!" LJ shouted.
"Ive got another job then for you." the boss told him.

2 minutes later...
"A goafer?! You want me to be a goafer?!" LJ shouted in blind fury.
"Its better than apple-bobbing. Take it or leave it." his boss replied.
"Ill leave it then. Good day to you sir!" LJ screamed, walking off as if he wet his pants. It was actually because his legs were extrememly cold.

November 35th, 2021, 25:19 KM, Illibois
"I like this place but I hate physics. Why did they invent a November 35th and a time like 25:19 KM?!" Graham asked.
"Dunno. You ask me." Lenny replied.
"I did ask you." Graham said as their plane arrived to set off to Madachussets

December 1st, 2021, 27:19 KM, Madachussets
"Finally, we are here." Graham said.
"Uh, Lenny? Lenny?!" Graham shouted as Graham looked at a weird guy with an afro and a weird Satan costume.
"Lenny, Halloween was in October. This is December. Who is this guy anyway?" Graham asked.
"I think he's called LJ. He ran away from his job so he disguised himself so his boss would never see him." Lenny replied.
"There's even a guy called Shaun and he has these mystical creatures called Ploks. Ever heard of them?" LJ asked them.
"Yeah, we used to own three Ploks." Lenny replied.
"What do you mean we? They were mine until I found out it was them burning me with pitchforks while I was in bed!" Graham exclaimed.
..."Hello guys. Im Shaun and these are my Ploks, Squirplok, Charmanplok and Bulbaplok." Shaun said.
"Urm, sit Charmanplok. Bulbaplok, put that live rake down and Squirplok, what do you think you are doing with a rifle?!" Graham shouted.

What will happen to Graham and the world of Noobenschire? Stay tuned to later on to find out.
 
Lol, Apple Bobbing, story's turning out good and the names are great. Washingmachineton :D

Keep it up, the story's turning out good.
 
Yeah, your character has a job of apple-bobbing in Aksala which is Alaska spelt backwards. Then your boss offers a job of a goafer lol.

Ill try and get Chapter 3 up today as I have the whole day off. Homework already finitoed.
 
Im finally able to post this Chapter 3:

"Squirplok, come on, put that rifle down, its dangerous." Graham said cowering in fright.
"Mufufufufufu." Squirlok mumbled as if it had difficulty to speak...it was actually having difficulties for technical reasons.
Graham kicked the rifle out of Squirplok's hands and got Bulbaplok's rabid rake.
"My...my.my rake! Give IT BACK!!!" Bulbaplok shouted as it started to cry.
"Im not falling for that...again." Graham told it.
"Take this and this and that and some of that...mufufufufufufu." Graham laughed evilly.
Suddenly, Graham fell to the floor unconscious.
"What did you do that for LJ?" Lenny asked in anger.
"Why do you think? Im eeeeeeeeeeeevil!" LJ replied as evil music started to come on.

December 20th, 2021, 24:25 KM, Hotel, Madachussets
"Those Ploks wont annoy me again." Graham said in a sigh of relief.
"You remember what actually KOed you out?" Lenny asked him.
"Nope. Why should I?" Graham asked.
"Dont talk to me like that!" Lenny replied.
At that second, Lenny was knocked out cold but...by GRAHAM!
"Thatll teach you to not talk like that to evil masterminds! Mufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufufu!" Graham exclaimed as he flew off in his portable aeroplane van.

What will happen? To Noobenschire? To Lenny?

There wasnt that much to say in Chap 3. Please comment anyway?
 
So many twist in one chapter! Heh, I love this part:

Why do you think? Im eeeeeeeeeeeevil!" LJ replied as evil music started to come on.

Good job SvN, look forward to seeing more.
 
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