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bonsly1994

Croagunk, one of the faithful
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I highly advise non-TCG players or people who dislike it to not read this as you may not get it etc. I will post reports but differnetly, or about othet things. It will be updated every now and then. OK.... so.

Chapter 1: 1st Cities= Teh n00bness

First tourney ever and I'm pumped. It's a City Championship match and was in the 06-07 season. Me and my friend got their and quickl acted like n00bs. We asked things like:

"Hey is that your deck?" to a judge checking a deck... :p
"Awesome Pichu Bros.!"
"Hey, what deck ya running?"
"I'm not a n00b." etc.

Good times. Anyways, we slowly start to get it... and somehow get going. I saw some similar faces from the league i'd visited for somewhere around a month now... but our leader Anders was not there. He has work so... oh well. On to my deck. I was playing a deck that was, well the definition of n00by. Tyranitar EX, Feraligatr Delta... yea. Dumb huh?

So announcements which I never listen to... (don't tell anyone... XD) went on for a good bit. I just sorta sat there and though how I was going to get pwned... I'm just psychic.

Round 1: Jamie Griffin (Sceptile EX/Dusclops CG/other stuff)
Well... I had a good start with T-Tar... but oh well. I can't attatch because of Dusclops and yea. Sceptile has body, but then I...

End of Section 1 Chapter 1.

How do you like it so far?
 
I think instead of saying stuff like yea and stuff and you know, maybe you could actually write out the whole battle. It isn't as fun to read and easy to imagine when you don't really describe the place and tell us what is happening. You should explain the battle more instead of just saying stuff, yea, you know, and all that.
 
Hopefully you didn't take that the wrong way (I know you didn't because of the smiley face but I just want to make sure). The first chapter was just a bit dull. I have tried to make a TCG Fan-fic and believe me, it was really hard. Just a heads up.
 
This isnt that bad bonsly! Just ellaborate WAY more and it will work fine. I know next to nothing about the tcg so its kinda hard to imagine! Good luck!
 
When I wrote these TCG stories (which I came up with :p), I elaborated WAYYYYY more. I wrote it in the 3rd person, saying

"Chris played a Sceptile from his hand" or so-and-so.

Also, I didn't have chapters. Each tourney was a chapter. I wrote it like-

1 cities
1 States
1 BR's

And such. It'll be stretching the story this way.
 
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