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is my story ok?

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Typhlosionex*

Adept fire trainer
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Typhlosion: hey Charizard is the gang here?
Charizard: Infernape is late as usual...
Infernape: Hey I heard that!
Typhlosion: OK now only Blaziken is not here.
Blaziken: Hey gang I'm HERE!!
Infernape: Why are you late?
Charizard: And why are YOU (infernape) Late?!
Typhlosion: OK let's go the Grass gang is waiting!
*the Fire gang went inside the room*
Meganium: Hey Boyz...(winks at Blaziken)
Blaziken: (gets goose bumps)
Sceptile: Let's get this party started!!
Venusaur: BOOOOORING!
Charizard: BORING?! then go out!
Typhlosion: Whoa don't fight guys!
*Charizard used Flamethrower on Venusaur's butt*
Typhlosion: UGH! OK!!!!! STOP!!
*everyone stared at Typhlosion*
Typhlosion: ... This party is over!!

THE END
 
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