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~Magma King~

Nettle Carrier
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Prologue

6 years after the huge attack on sinnoh, Team Galactic had fled to a small Island far off hoenns border, known as Elemental Isle. For another 5 years a small group of Team Galactic Constructed A huge laboratory, preparing and creating Project Pokelord-A device that could transform a human into a pokemon....

Inside the lab were 4 Galactic Grunts, Saturn;The only survivor of the 3 commanders, and Dractus. Dractus was the new boss of Team Galactic. He was a Fearsome man, At least 6'00 and wore a large purple robe and a helmet resembling a motercyclists, and matching gloves and boots. "Pokelord will become operational in approximately 45 seconds Sir", Said one of the grunts.
"Excellent", murmered Dractus.There was a long silence only broken by Saturns peircing whisper."Boss", she said.
"Mmm yes?"
"We haven't tested Pokelord yet, are you sure we shouldn't test it first?"
"No!" Roared Dractus, "We cannot delay this any longer!"
"Neither can I stand this!" Saturn remarked. Immediately she snapped her fingers. 6 Men In white suits with shining glasses, grey gloves and boots as well as a large "A" imprinted into their Suit.
"What is this?!" Shouted Dractus.
"Team Galactic's only hope of becoming powerful again", a huge grin spread across saturns face as the Men shot metal ropes from their gloves wrapping round the grunts."The key to Pokelord please" said Saturn expectantly."Muhaha, you expect me to do that!" Chuckled Dractus moving his finger towards a small red button.
"Your Insane!" Said Saturn as Dractus gave one final chuckle until a huge Lightning bolt shot down from the sky dissintergrating Dractus, leaving behind only a metal face mask. A long silence followed, until yet again broken by Saturn. "He used Pokelord....But what happened?-
"Freeze!" Saturn and the men turned round at the sound of a gun loading."Clear off team!" Sighed Saturn as she and the men activated their jetpacks and soared off into the distance. The police managed to arrest the Team Galactic grunts, although failing to catch Saturn. This was the last of Team Galactic...Or was it?
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Chapter list
-Chapter 0: Prologue.
-Chapter 1: Pokemon Battle!
-Chapter 2: To the rescue
-Chapter 3: Band astro(Part 1)
-Chapter 4: Band astro(Part 1)
-Chapter 5: There's no place like home.
-Chapter 6: Pokemon war.
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Chapter 1-Pokemon Battle!
"Hariyama, Ice Punch!"He had to win this time!
"Luxray! Discharge!" Luxray Lept Into the air, over Hariyama and then landed with huge impact letting loose a field of electric energy sending Hariyama off its feet."Well, I win again, I guess", Murmered Max. Will just stood there in astonsishment. There was a short silence.
"PTTSHHHHH!!!"A huge white lorry with all sorts of flashing lights and seemingly pointless accessories parked outside their house.
"Hnn?"Will spoke in a harsh whisper. They both peered round the corner of the house. 2 men accompanied by a woman in a similar outfit just including a dress, a large purple robe, and very long blue hair. The men quickly fired ropes from their Gloves holding Luxray down.
"Get off it!" Will shouted in attempt to free Luxray.
"Well Theirs room for two", Sighed the lady as Will and Luxray were shoved into the van. Max sent out Furret and rushed towards the van.
"Pest!"The woman screamed as she Smacked Max in the stomach. She quickly ran off to the Lorry and drove off. Winded, Max tried to get up, but fell back onto the floor only to regain conciousness 5 hours later.....
...."Psst!"
"Ungh?"
"PSSST!"
"UNGH!"Max woke up quickly to see another persons face infront of his. Max pulled a small syringe from his arm with as panicked look on his face."I'm chris", he said.
"Y'know where they took will?"Said Max.
"In fact I may do", said Chris with a grin....

Chapter 2-To the Rescue!
"Tick, tock, tick tock"The clock Tuned away its usual Noise, bound to drive anybody paranoid. The class emotionlessly ticked boxes on their papers. "Zzzzzzzn-
"Mr walter"The teacher tapped his pen loudly on his desk. Chris immediately sprang up.
"Wah?!"
"Not a good start Walter, This is very dissapointing".
"I'm chris! Got it?!" Chris jumped out of his seat in rage. How could he?!
"After school detention, One hour, I'll be telling your parents about this"The teacher droned in an annoying tone.
"NO! How could you?! I have no parents, Walter is my Gaurdians name! Shut up!"
"Sit down at once! How dare you speak to me in that-
"You?!", Chris sighed, "I'm going. I've had enough of this". Chris walked out of class sulkily. Out of school, he wondered where to go. He scanned the area noticing a familiar figure."Max?" Chris slowly approached him.
"Its Will, he hasn't came back." Max whispered and gestured for Chris to do so.
"I know where they are, come on, we need to hurry!"....Minutes later They arrived at a huge Building. Inside it looked like a work office. A woman, looking like a typical accountant sat on a large chair. Max gasped with Horror as Chris Immediately Grabbed her by the collar and shoved her into a wall."The door please" Chris led, or rather forced the woman to pull out her keys, and chris gave her a hard look.
"Hah!" Shouted the woman as she immediately released Arbok.
"Not a chance!" Said Chris as Typhlosion Immediately entered the battlefield.
"Poison fa-
"Fire blast!" Arbok barely had time to watch as the huge ball of fire knocked it into a wall, burning countless papers and pens. The woman was frightened by this, as well as Max, as The woman pressed the keys making a "KCHUNK" like noise. The wall behind her rotaded a 180 degree angle revealing a metal door with a "caution" sign, as well as the wall being completely metal with lots of flashing lights. The door opened automatically as the two boys stepped in."Any plans?" Said Chris.
"No" Max said slowly, "But we scan the building. Stay together incase they get us too." Max and Chris progressed down the Corridors. Meanwhile, at a safe distant, the woman Pressed the keys one more time....

Chapter 3-Band Astro: Part 1- Astro blast!
After a few minutes walking the two came across 3 corridors."Which one?"Asked Chris.
"Left"
"Why?"
"Umm", Max paused for a bit, and actually wondered, "I don't know. If this dosn't work we'll try the rest." Chris shrugged his shoulders, and then moved on."AAGHH!!"Max spun tound to see Chris being strangled by a rope, from one of the men in the lorry."GET OFF ME!!" Tears flooded from his eyes as he struggled in vain, but to no prevail. "Who are you?!"
"Ah, we were going to come to that!" The man giggled as Chris closed his eyes hopelessly. "We are Band Astro! This is our hideout, so get out child, whilst I deal with your friend!" Max just watched in horror as the man Giggled insanely."More kids?"A female figure slipped into view, wearing the same uniform as the man."What have you done with My brother?!"
"Oh I'll answer that dear" The Female grunt slithered infront of The man, "He isn't of use to us. He will be in the chamber", The woman tried her best to annoy Max, and Max beconned for more information. "Oh and your pathetic little pokemon", The Grunt paused, "He will be used for the experiment." Max continued to walk, but was quickly stopped by the Female Grunt."Oh no! Not there-
"Fine!"Max released his Nidoking.
"Take the stage!"The male Grunt Threw his pokeball into the air releasing Bronzong."Oh let me have some fun dear!" The Female did a Short Acrobatic performance before throwing her pokeball releasing Purugly."In that case", Max sent in Furret.
"Take down!" Purugly Launched itself at Furret-
"Dodge! And then use Follow me!"Furret slipped over Purugly with ease, and Then waved his hand into tre air."Gyro ball!" Bronzong transformed itself into a ball of energy and then zoomed into Furret. Instead, Bronzong and Purugly clashed together, although Furret was caught in between. "Nidoking, Earthquake while Bronzong's down!" Nidoking jumped into the air and then slammed himself onto the ground. Bronzong was tossed up into the air, only to be returned in the middle."Purugly, use swagger dear!" Purugly taunted Nidoking, making it extremely angry, and also confusing it at the same time. Furret quickly rushed to the scene and used double edge. Purugly squeeled in pain, Breaking Swagger and Giving Nidoking a chance to use Mega punch. Purugly fell onto the floor, as Max progressed into the experiment room. Purugly turned round to face her owner. "Dear, oh no dear, no!" The grunt screamed and the other gasped as Purugly was Locked into a fight with her. Meanwhile Max entered the room. His heart felt a sudden chill as He heard a voice. "Hello", It was obviously a lady. She had red hair, and a similar uniform to the rest just purple, with black tights and a Grey Skirt, fixed into its position. She had a large Red A in the middle of her Suit. "I am Commander Kath", Max looked at her, but then looked upwards into a huge chamber with A luxray, at least 6 foot, with completely red eyes, and The blue was Replaced with Dark Purple. "Max!" Chris ran towards Max, and then Fell onto the floor, still recovering from the attack. Then he too gazed up at, what Unfortunately Might have been Max's Pokemon...

Chapter 4-Band astro: Part 2-Commander Kath
"I am Commander Kath", Max looked at her, but then looked upwards into a huge chamber with A luxray, at least 6 foot, with completely red eyes, and The blue was Replaced with Dark Purple. "Max!" Chris ran towards Max, and then Fell onto the floor, still recovering from the attack. Then he too gazed up at, what Unfortunately Might have been Max's Pokemon...

"Welcome to the experiment", Kath grinned at Max, knowing Max wasn't."What did you do to Luxray?!"
"Ah, using some stolen technology from Cipher, we realised Pokelord only works on Pokemon. The project has been minorly adjusted to transform pokemon into new, more powerful forms. The setback, is that we needed a pokemon to test it on. A strong pokemon like your Luxray....In our power, it has lost all emotion. It will serve us", Kath picked up a thin black stick an tapped a large computer screen with it. Immediately it showed a Black and white Image of Luxray, as well as a bar next to it. "Very good, it will be finished soon".
"What will?! What are you doing to it?!"
"The Process will be complete. It will completely lose its free will and turn over to us", Max looked appalled. Although speeking of Will... "Well you best be off-
"No! Not without Luxray"
"You'll never get it!"
"How about", Max stopped for a bit, "A pokemon battle. If I win, you free Luxray. If I lose, its yours" Max looked into his belt and chose a Pokeball."Max...Are you sure?"Chris asked.
"Yes...Yes I am", Max threw his Pokeball into the air and released Charizard."Foolish child, I have never been defeated, but very well!" Kath threw her Pokeball into the air and released her Charizard.
"Seismic toss!"Max commanded his pokemon into battle.
"Dragon Rage!"Lots of fire Came through the ground hitting Max's Charizard."Don't worry Charizard, use Flamethrower!" Max's Charizard released a series of hot flames."You too!"Kath's Charizard also released a wave of intense flames. The two beams clashed, creating a huge energy ball. However, the energy ball was moved towards Max's charizard, and then exploded onto it. Max cringed, Knowing Kath's Charizard was Significantly stronger. "I've got it! Manic flare(May be changed later)!" Max's charizard Launched itself into the air, and then shot down covered in flames. It dived onto Kath's charizard Knocking them Both out immediately. They both called back their pokemon.
"You did well", said Kath, "But My pokemon get stronger! Feraligatr!" The large blue pokemon intimidated Max. "Espeon!" Round 2 began.
"Hydro pump!"
"Psychic!" The two clashed together, Creating a huge explosion. Feraligatr managed to stay on its feet, however espeon fell over.
"Hydro pump!"
"Let it hit you espeon!" Chris was shocked at this move, but Max was determined. "Mirror coat now!"Espeon fired a huge Hydro pump sending Feraligatr flying. Espeon winked at Max, and then was returned into its pokeball. "Oh my, you are strong. However my final pokemon should be able to defeat you!" Kath threw a pokeball into teh air releasing Rayquaza. "Nidoking!" Nidoking was released. Round 3 Began. "Extremespeed!" Rayquaza slammed into Nidoking, then finished with a backflip in the air."Ice beam!"Nidoking Launched a huge Ice beam at Rayquaza. However Rayquaza dodged, only getting damaged minorly."Earthquake!" Rayquaza created a huge earthquake K.Oing Nidoking instantly."Return", Said Max. He paused for a while, then looked up into the sky. Chris gasped as a shiny charizard, at least 4 inches taller and wider than Max's one in his party, Dived into the building. "Lizardon!" Lizardon gave a huge roar. "Manic Flare!" Kath gasped as Lizardon dived Gracefully into Rayquaza, Knocking it into a wall. "Finish it with Flamethrower!" Lizardon fired a huge wave of Flames creatign an inferno which knocked out Rayquaza. Kath returned it. "Your out of pokemon. I win", Max said expectantly.
"Oh I have one last one", Kath said the last words slowly, as the chamber opened and Luxray Leapt out. "Thunder!" Kath commanded as Luxray screeched its battle cry,turned its head back, but then looked at Lizardon firing a huge Thunderbolt at Lizardon. "Don't hurt it Lizardon!" Max called. "Luxray, come back!"
"Don't listen to him! Thunderbolt again!" Luxray was about to strike Lizardon, but instead it fired at the wall. Luxray grew smaller, and then eventually returned to normal. "Glad to have you back!" Max petted Luxray. "Fine, but we will meet again!" Kath Left the building in an old fashioned car. "Thanks Lizardon!" Said Max as The charizard flew off. For a few minutes they were silent. Soon it was Broken, as Will rushed into the room. "Max!" Will was overjoyed, and then looked at Chris. "Err, I'm Chris. Nice to meet you!" The two shook hands, and they left....

Chapter 5- Theres no place like home
"Right, heres the exit" Said Max as he finally approached where the door should've been.
"Max, we're locked out!"Chris gasped and banged at the wall.
"Hariyama, help out!" Called Will as he released his pokemon. Hariyama banged on the door with all its might, but to no prevail.
"I can't hear you", Tuned the lady on the other side. The three threw themselves down hopelessly. A sinister shadow crept across the wall...
"Or you could just 'spill the beans boys" The familar lady, with cuts and bruises all over her, followed by her merciless monster of a cat, towered over the three boys. "Oh you, Ahahahaha!" The lady cackled in amusement."Oh I aint finished, now you two'll be locked up, and then we destroy this hideout! With you in it! Muhaahahhaahahh!" The three looked at eachother awkwardly as they were tied up."And now its all up to this but-
"AAGGHHHH!" A boy with brown hair, a white top with a pokeball on it and red tennis shoes smashed through the door into the room. "Grovyle, free them!" The boy released his Grovyle, which cut them free.
"Who on earth are you?!" Shouted the woman as she span round and her Purugly launched a double edge attack on Grovyle.
"Don't worry!" Two other boys, one with dark blue jeans, Black and white shoes, and a green long sleeve zipper hoodie with a white line across it with a furret, the other wearing yellow and black clothes and with an Ursaring at his side. "Get rid of her!" Said the third boy as his Ursaring stomped towards the defenceless woman. "AAAAAAHHHHH!" She wailed as she clumsily flew out the building. The 6 all stood there in confusion. "You saved us, howcome?" Said Chris.
"We were checking the building, you were just extra", said the first boy.
"Whatever" said Max in embarrassment.
"Thanks! Im Chris. This is Max. This is Will".
"Pleased to meat you. I'm Lance. He's Ryan. He's Oren. We're trying to defend people from scum like Band Astro".
"Same, mabye we could... Team up?" Said Max expectantly. A great surge of thought crossed the others minds, but then they looked at eachother and they all shook hands."Deal".
"Well... we need a name", said Chris.
"How about... The pokemon elite force? P.E.F?" Said Will who hadn't spoken for a while.
"Thats great!" Said Oren, and they all left together.
 
~Magma king~ said:
Character form:
Name: Max Shade IV
Gender: Male
Appearence: Check TC in sig
Party(6): Charizard, Furret, Nidoking, Sceptile, Espeon, Luxray
Personallity: Once a playful, loving boy, he grew up on his journey going through many rough times, and he never likes to get close to anyone (as in girls, cuz it always ends up in heartbreak). He is powerful and almost never loses a battle
Background notes: Son of Grant Shade, and named for his grandfater, Max Shade III, he grew up in an area call the No Pokemon Zone (NPZ) under the impression his step dad was his real dad, as his step dad used jirachi to send grant back in time 2000 years.
For more on him, read my fanfics: Pokemon Max's Story: The ultimate Tournament or The PMC vs. The LPC!
Other notes: Has a shiny Charizard nicknamed Lizardon and a Mew. these belonged to his father, and aren't actually "captured" but they roam the earth and are on call whenever Max and his friends are in a pinch. Max also has a strange connection with every legendary pokemon, and can call on alomst all of them when need be (Usually, his "guardian" Ho-oh, Rayquaza, MEwtwo, or celebi)
Also, Max's charizard is the son of LIzardon, and they both know a deadly move (that i made up) called Blazing Kamakaze. they fly high into the air, then nose dive at their opponent, lighting themselves on fire. This knocks out charizard, but Lizardon can use this attack several times before feinting.

i know its long, but Max is a character i've worked on for a decade. there is no character on PokeBEach more detailed than him!
 
Name: Chris
Gender: Male
Appearance: Cool, Calm, and kinda handsome
Party:
Typhlosion
Absol
Lucario
Raichu
Jolteon
Quagsire
Personality: Quiet, cool.
Background notes: The last remanding person of the Pokehanous clan (a clan of super-skilled pokemon trainers) who were killed by team galactic. He strives to avenge them with his life.
Other notes: Chris' Typhlosion was given to him 10 years ago, by his father. It is the only thing that he can remember him by. He lives outdoors and hunts for team galactic. But, he isn't all consmed with revenge. there's a lot of good in him, too.
 
pokelord1 said:
You're making a project named after me?

AGGHHHH!!!!!*Screams and runs 50 kilometres away to a distant computer*

Of course Max shade will be included, but unfortunately the mew will conflict with the storyline. They can have the move, although I like the name Manic Flare.

Ash ketchup said:
Name: Chris
Gender: Male
Appearance: Cool, Calm, and kinda handsome
Party:
Typhlosion
Absol
Lucario
Raichu
Jolteon
Quagsire
Personality: Quiet, cool.
Background notes: The last remanding person of the Pokehanous clan (a clan of super-skilled pokemon trainers) who were killed by team galactic. He strives to avenge them with his life.
Other notes: Chris' Typhlosion was given to him 10 years ago, by his father. It is the only thing that he can remember him by. He lives outdoors and hunts for team galactic. But, he isn't all consmed with revenge. there's a lot of good in him, too.

Little does he know that team galactic is gone.....Dun dun duu!!!

Name:Will
Gender: Male
Appearance: Kinda short, wheres mainly white with a smart shirt and flares.(He has blonde hair)He has a pokeball belt.
Party:
Camerupt
Garchomp
Venasaur
Feraligatr
Wormadam(Trash)
Hariyama
Personality: Usually shy, although he gets excited during pokemon battles.
Background notes: Not much, But he likes to play with his mysterious half brother Max.
 
It's cool with the Mew thing, whatever you need (After all, it's YOUR story, right?)

AS for Manic Flare (While it sounds cool!) it's gotta be Blazing Kamikaze, i'll explain it tomorrow in a p/m but i don't have time right now (Heck, i barely have time to make this post! o_O!!!!)

-Max Shade!
 
Name: Lance
Gender: male
Apperance: Brown hair white shirt with a pokeball on it blue jeans and red tennie shoes
Party: Grovyle,Glaceon,Gabite,Poliwhirl,Flygon and Umbreon
Personality: Smart,always does the right thing and a goog friend.
Backround Notes: Likes to play the violin and to study and loves computers and any other technology.
 
Name: Oren
Gender: Male
Appearence: Very Casual, though wears something different every day!
Party(6): Ursaring, Typhlosion, Skarmory, Meganium, Steelix, and Feraligatr
Personallity: Care-free.....doesnt really care what happens to others unless they are his friends.
Background notes: He grew-up in a normal family until he took off to Johto at the age of 12. He flew to Johto on a plane from Kanto. He never actually faught in kanto. He didnt like Kanto very much so he moved.
Other notes: NOne!
 
looking good! the chapter may be short, but the words that each character speaks feels like they are actually talking with true emotions, the only thing i suggest is longer chapters, but the way it is now is a good 8.5/10
 
@ Pokelen:Ok, I'll try and fit him in soon.
@ Max shade:Thats because I don't have alot of time to do these, I usually finish them just before bed so I have to make the chapters relatively short. This just means there will be lots of chapters :p. Chapter 3 in progress.
EDIT: I have been majorly frustrated as I accidently deleted my 1 hour of work :'(
 
~Magma king~ said:
@ Max shade:Thats because I don't have alot of time to do these, I usually finish them just before bed so I have to make the chapters relatively short. This just means there will be lots of chapters :p.
look, i have said this before to many writers: i dont care how long it takes to make a semi-long chapter as long as its good. but, your chapters are awesome as is, even if they are short.
 
Did you actually ask to be in?
edit:Woopsy, You did :p. You may be in chapter 5, as the two part one Will only involve Chris and Max.
Edit 2: Updated with Astro blast!
 
Max had some major POWNAGE then the ending sucked....(not really, but for my character it did...)

but the battle scene was awesome! i liked that it was a double battle, those are always fun!

Keep up the good works!
 
~Magma king~ said:
What do you mean It sucked? Well for him mabye, How will this turn out?

when i say sucks, i mean like, if it was a TV show, your watching it, and then you see what happens to him and usually people are like, "oh man, that sucks," its more like it sucks whats happening to him, you know?
 
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