Black Rayquaza said:
If you do it, James, try to do it all...its not going to help much with half, that could actually complicate things a bit here.
Well, sorry about that, it's just I couldn't finish the whole go last night...!
have no fears, here are my remaining judgings!
PS:
I actually DO favor ARTWORK. I never favor people, just their creations. I also indicated what I didn't like at other pieces, and it has nothing to do with the people making them, just my taste towards them.
Whenever I myself create art, I also keep in mind some will like it, and others won't. And I also said ''fan'' in some reviews because I'm actually a real fan of those art styles. The STYLES, not the persons.
Alas, I take no offence in what you said, and it indeed is true, but please not I base it on the art I like and not the person who made it, thank you!
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Fanfic Ratings
Piplup321 - Justice
- Originality: 18/20, I liked the story, and found it very original! I suppose you used other sources to draw inspiration from, but don't we all do that?
Good job there!
- Relation to the Theme/Prompt: 17/20, As said before, it was a nice fic to read, and it was nicely fitting with the theme.
- Diction and Tone: 19/20, I personally felt that it was pleasant to read, and you had decent to good descriptions in your story, so that gives you some extra points!
- Attention to Detail: 18/20, just as Black Rayquaza said, it bothered me a little you didn't mention the gender of the nidoran, but otherwise you're safe from me!
- Effort: 10/10, I think you put in a lot of effort to write this, so kudos for that!
- Overall: 8/10, I liked the story, it had nice writing in it, and it had great scenes in it! Keep it up!
Total: 90/100 (+2 = 92)
Pokémaniac
- Originality: 18/20, It was a nice idea to use a revolt with all those pokémon in your story, and I liked that!
- Relation to the Theme/Prompt: 18/20, It was nicely related to the theme given, and pleasant to read.
- Diction and Tone: 15/20, It was decent enough for me, but you might want to look better at it next time!
- Attention to Detail: 19/20, It was very detailed, and that's what I like at fanfics(because of earlier ''problems'' I won't say ''fan'' anymore, but this is what I like, yes!)! Keep this up! It also granted you some extra points by the way.
- Effort: 10/10, with all the details and the plot going on, I think this took quite a while to come up with, and of course, to execute...!
- Overall: 7/10, I liked the story as a whole, and that's enough said!
Total: 87/100 (+2 = 89)
Xous
- Originality: 19/20, Nothings perfect, but yours is quite close! It was VERY original, and fascinating to read!
- Relation to the Theme/Prompt: 16/20, This is where you lose some points... It was a nice story, but the revolt was ''limited'' in my opinion... Too bad, but hey, it was a nice story!
- Diction and Tone: 20/20, Remember how I keep saying nothing's perfect...? Your grammar is though!
- Attention to Detail: 19/20, VERY detailed and descriptive, it wasn't hard to imagine the scenes while reading it! I simply LOVE fics with lots of details, so keep this up!
- Effort: 10/10, This should be put in the writing corner and extended, seeing how much effort this must have took from you! I can't say ''fan'' anymore, so let's just say I liked it!
- Overall: 9/10, THIS is why I read fanfics. The fic's not perfect, but its getting pretty close!
Total: 93/100 (+2 = 95)
Psychic Whisperer
- Originality: 17/20, The experimental nature of this story really appealed me, and without doubt, it was VERY original!
- Relation to the Theme/Prompt: 17/20, That was a decent revolt, but personally I think it could have been ''bigger''.
- Diction and Tone: 16/20, It was decent, but it could use some work. No big changes though, but a little more excersize could work!
- Attention to Detail: 18/20, It had some nice details in it, just be careful you don't ''skip'' certain parts of the story, or explain some a little more. Other than that, great!
- Effort: 8/10, I think it took you some effort to make the idea and story, but overall I have a feeling you could somehow have done a little better...?
- Overall: 9/10, it had a great idea for the basics and a nice plot to go with, as well as some unique effects, so overall I liked it!
Total: 85/100 (+2 = 87)
muddy68 - The Anti-Pokemon
- Originality: 18/20, I have mixed feelings about this... At first you used an already excisting place for your story to take place in, but other than that it was quite original! So overall, I think you did a good job with this!
- Relation to the Theme/Prompt: 18/20, it features a revolt, and I think it fits nicely.
- Diction and Tone: 10/20, this I found quite disturbing... To me, it wasn't all that pleasant to read due to some grammar problems... Costs you some points, so maybe you should work on that!
- Attention to Detail: 12/20, I found the story a little lacking of details, and when I judge, that costs you. It wasn't all bad, but I'd personally add more in it!
- Effort: 6/10, you took some effort, but some aspects of the fic could use some serious work if you ask me(details and grammar being the main two).
- Overall: 8/10, despite some small problems here, I liked the idea and the story as a whole, so good job!
Total: 72/100
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James' Scoreboard:
1st: Xous - 93/95
2nd: Piplup321 - 90/92
3rd: Pokémaniac - 87/89
4th: Psychic Whisperer - 85/87
5th: muddy68 - 72
Good job everybody!
