Fun Pokemon TCG Single Player: Story Mode

First of all, that sounds like an amazing idea!

That said—feel free to disagree—but don’t you think two days to try the game is a bit short? Especially considering they’re mid-week days. Speaking for myself, I’d love to help out and give feedback, but I’m afraid I’ll have too little time to really try it out.
 
Also on "Your Adventure" topic, the second paragraph has a few misspelled words.

Original:
While the only absolutley necessary materials are Poekmon cards you can get from roughly 8 booster packs and an Energy Brick, a single Elite Trainer Boxes contain all the materials needed to play the game. Combining it with a Booster Box will help achieve a more expansive and balanced experience.

Suggestion:
While the only absolutely necessary materials are Pokémon cards—which you can get from roughly 8 booster packs—and an Energy Brick, a single Elite Trainer Box contains everything you need to play the game. Pairing it with a Booster Box can help create a more expansive and balanced experience.
 
Also on "Your Adventure" topic, the second paragraph has a few misspelled words.

Original:
While the only absolutley necessary materials are Poekmon cards you can get from roughly 8 booster packs and an Energy Brick, a single Elite Trainer Boxes contain all the materials needed to play the game. Combining it with a Booster Box will help achieve a more expansive and balanced experience.

Suggestion:
While the only absolutely necessary materials are Pokémon cards—which you can get from roughly 8 booster packs—and an Energy Brick, a single Elite Trainer Box contains everything you need to play the game. Pairing it with a Booster Box can help create a more expansive and balanced experience.
Wow, cannot believe I made mistakes like that. Honestly though I am so excited to share what I have made I can see how I made some minor mistakes. Thank you for the suggestion. I can't wait to hear what you think of the gameplay. I agree 2 days isn't really enough time. I am going to extend it to a full week simply based on your suggestion. I have already had some really good engagement and I don't want to cut that short.
 
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