I am going to do some more work on this. Will update this thread with the suggested improvements.
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Wow, cannot believe I made mistakes like that. Honestly though I am so excited to share what I have made I can see how I made some minor mistakes. Thank you for the suggestion. I can't wait to hear what you think of the gameplay. I agree 2 days isn't really enough time. I am going to extend it to a full week simply based on your suggestion. I have already had some really good engagement and I don't want to cut that short.Also on "Your Adventure" topic, the second paragraph has a few misspelled words.
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While the only absolutley necessary materials are Poekmon cards you can get from roughly 8 booster packs and an Energy Brick, a single Elite Trainer Boxes contain all the materials needed to play the game. Combining it with a Booster Box will help achieve a more expansive and balanced experience.
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While the only absolutely necessary materials are Pokémon cards—which you can get from roughly 8 booster packs—and an Energy Brick, a single Elite Trainer Box contains everything you need to play the game. Pairing it with a Booster Box can help create a more expansive and balanced experience.