Neo Miracles (New: Noctowl and Pikachu)

[Osha-WHAT!?]

Hello! I came here to get advice on my fan games, but began to fall in love with fake cards. I've started a deck of my own, Neo Miracles, which will feature many Pokemon and Fakemon.

I'll update the first post and title to showcase brand new additions, as well as posting them below. To start off we have Noctowl and Ash's Pikachu.

As you can see I've tampered with the font a bit and put a sprite in the "evolves from" area, to give Neo Miracles a unique twist.

Ash's Pikachu is not from Neo Miracles, but rather from the Famous Faces expansion I will update on every once in a while. The font and everything has also been tampered with.

I am planning on having 35 cards in Neo Miracles and 10 in Famous Faces.

All cards

Neo Miracles:
1. Noctowl
2. Chikorita
3. Raichu
4. Igglybuff
5. Tepig
6. Snivy
7. Oshawott
8. Cresselia
9. Azelf
10. Swampert
11. Sandile
12. Drowzee
13. Flygon
14. Persian
15. Mew
16. Mewtwo
17. Flareon
18. Salamence
19. Lillipup
20. Minccino
21. Quilava
22. Kyogre
23. Groudon
24. Cyndaquil
25. Meganium
The other ten cards are for you to decide! What do you want to see in Neo Miracles?

Famous Faces:
1. Ash's Pikachu
2. Misty's Azurill
3. Iris's Axew
4. Brock's Rhyperior
5. May's Blaziken
6. Dawn's Piplup
7. Cynthia's Garchomp Level X
8. Lance's Dragonite
9. Wallace's Milotic
10. Steven's Metagross

I'm not that good yet, but I'll improve! Any tips? Comments? Suggestions?

 

[CMP]

Not too bad for your first cards! While Neo also means "new," I wouldn't add it to the title...that's usually used for sets using Neo blanks. What program are you using? My recommendation is always Photoshop, but if you can't get it, GIMP is an acceptable (and free!) alternative. Much better than Paint or similar programs.

Here are my suggestions and tips...
*On Noctowl, I know you used a sprite to give Miracles a unique twist, but try and find and resize Sugimori art instead...it doesn't blend well with the rest of the card.
*Body name should be in green (only power names are red).
*Try referencing actual cards for proper grammar...what you have isn't quite correct.
*Attacks with 2 Energy cost should be placed on the furthestmost left circles...and the placement isn't quite correct (damage should be move more to the right).
*There are EX-series symbol sheets, which make for a size-appropriate set. Try here. I can't find it in anything but GIF..sorry!
*Try not to resize the blanks (like the Ash's Pikachu)...it throws off the sizes of the symbols and fonts.

Overall, not too bad for your first attempts. Let me know if I can help you in any way, and I can't wait to see you improve!