Writing Naruto Fan-Fic: The Fox Brother Chronicles! I'm continuing it!

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Alright, sorry that I didn't update it, I had alot of other things to do, my computer crashed, but now I have more free time, and a new much faster computer! Oh and I have changed this so it is during Naruto Shippuden.

Priolouge:
It was a dark time, the Fourth Hokage was staring down at the Nine Tailed Fox. The fox was week, it was about to get up.
"How can I stop this thing?!" The Fourth thought.
The move he never dared even think of doing, suddenly came into his mind.
"This is for my children, my wife, my friends, my family, my people," The Fourht said, "FOR THE HIDDEN LEAF VILLAGE!"
He used the move, destroying himself for everyone in the village, and imprissoning it into a newborn baby boy.
You have heard this story, that was the aproved story for the Hidden Leaf Village. The real story is a little different. The firsy part is true, exept about the part where the Fox is imprissoned in one boy. Lets continue.

... Into two newborn baby twin brothers. Both onto the stomach, right above the gate of death. In fear of the fox being reborn, The Hidden Leaf Village dicided to split the two boys up into different villages. Naruto would stay in the Hidden Leaf Village, and Kato to be in the Village Hidden In The Lightning, and there mother and sister to be sent to the Village Hidden in the Mist, and all there memory to be whiped of there family members that were seperated from them.



Chapter one: Look out! Theres a bounty on your head Naruto!

It was just after getting home from trying to bring Sasuke back. Naruto was home sleeping, unaware about the danger that was about to befall him.
It was in a dark abanded building near the Hidden Leaf Village. A bounty hunter called Ice Lightning, with a blood red mask, that had two spikey eye holes, a devilish mouth, and a small Lightning village insignia on the top of it, was holding a "WANTED" poster in one hand, and a long bladed sword in the other.
There was a man at the end of the room inside the building who said, "You better have a good reason for being here!"
"I'm here for the bounty on this Naruto Uzimaki. I wanted to know who I was working for before I gave them something that had a ten thousand dollar reward," Ice Lightning said.
"Your working for the Akatski, and Itachi Uchiha," The man said.
"Well were can I find him?" Ice said.
"You can find him in The Hidden Leaf Village, of team Kakashi, bring him alive, but ware him out," Itachi said.
"I will get the full bounty correct?" Ice asked.
"Correct, as long as you bring him to me by tommorow," Itachi said, "Heres the address"
Itachi handed Ice the paper with the adress.
"Go, if you get him with in an hour, I will reward with a thousand more dollars," Itachi said.
Ice Lightning nodded and went off.
Ice Lightning arived at the Leaf Village, searching for the adress of Naruto's apartment.
Suddenly something caught his eye, a "WANTED" poster with his masked face on it.
"What! I have a bounty on me!" Ice Lightning thought.
Ice went over a teared up the poster.
He looked around for a someone to transform into.
Ice found a person, a man, a Jonin, the ref. for the Chunin exams. Ice pulled of his mask with one hand and he was making a hand sign in the other.
The mask came of but the face of the ref. was under it.
"Hehehe," Ice said.
Later...
Ice had found the address.
He peared through the window and saw Naruto sleeping.
Ice oppened the door and made many different hand signs.
"Shadow capsule jutsu!" He said.
A dark ball rapped around Naruto. Naruto remained sleeping.
Ice heard something. A human in the room, using a cloaking jutsu.
Ice made more hand signs and thought, "Kameleon Scope Jutsu!"
He spotted the other ninja.
"I see you! You pethetic acscuse for a Chunin!" Ice said as he pointed to the wall infront of him.
"Another foe tricked!" Rock Lee said as he jumped of the sealing.
"Another foe tricked, for me to," Ice thought.
Lee's leg was about to strike right down on Ice's head when Ice grabbed it and through Lee to the wall.

Chapter Two: Ice Lightnings true face!

"You, you tricked me, but you will not defeat me!" Rock Lee said.
"I think I already have." Ice said as he put his mask back on.
Lee took out an elixer he had in his pocket, "If I have this, you will not be able to defeat me!"
"'If you have that'? So you admit you can't defeat me without true power that you have?!" Ice laughed an evil laugh, a very evil hollow laugh, like if he had only laughed that time.
Lee had finished the elixer, and he jumped over Ice, nocking Ice over, he was bearly visable.
"I have bearly tride this out, but I might need it," Ice thought, then shouted aloud, "Sharingan!"
His eyes turned red and two black circles formed around his pupil, he could see Lee very clearly. Lee was a little to tipsy to understand what he had said.
"What? Did you say 'Waffles'? I want some! Don't hog them!" Lee said.
"Grrr! Is this guy for real?!" Ice thought
"Wa-wa-wa-wa-WAFFLES!" Lee said as he jumped from wall to wall.
Ice took out a kuninife, "You can't escape my sight!"
Ice through the kuni straight at Lee, it hit him square in the toe.
"Woah! That uh..." Lee tried to finish his sentence but couldn't he fell straight to the floor.
"That was way to easy..." Ice said, "But, who's complainin'?"
Ice took another kuni out of his weapon pouch and walked over toward Lee.
"Hehe! I gotcha!" Lee yelled as he jumped up and hit Ice in the face. It cracked Ices mask a little, then his mask burst open. Behind it,
was a black, shadowy substence.
"What the..." Lee said.
The shadowy substence oozed down Lee's arm, and incased it.
"How do you like my Shadow Clone Morphing Jutsu?" Ice's voice said, "I made it up my self..."
"It's yucky!" Lee said. (Remember Lee's elixer still hasn't worn off.)
Lee struggled every way he could to trie to get out of the substence, but the more he struggled, the more it incased him, and sence Lee still has no "marbles" he just kept struggling. Soon the the substence incased his whole body except for his head.
"Pfft! That didn't take long, you're dumber than I thought!" Ice's voice said.
"Brrr! This stuff is cold!" Lee yelled.
Ice appeared right infront of Lee and said, "Yup, I'm as fast as lightning" Ice disapeered, and reapeered, right behind Lee and touched him, shivers ran down Lee's spine, "And cold as ice! That's why they call me..."
Again Ice dis and re appeered beside Lee and said, "Ice Lightning!"
The substence then fully incased Lee's whole body including his head. Lee sudenly snapped out of the "trance" the elixer had put on him.
"What? Why is it so dark? And why can't I move?" He thought, "How will I brake out of it?!"
The clone vanished in a vat of smoke.
"Now time to take my prize!" Ice said, "Shrink!"
The shadow barrier shrunk around Naruto and it turned into the size of a marble, along with Naruto in it. Ice put it in his pocket and walked out the door and said to Lee, "Good luck dude! You'll need it!"

Chapter three: Behind Ice's Mask! For real this time!

I'm gonna continue the chapter later. Cya!
 
nice story i am a big naruto fan i know everyhting pretty much but anyway great story spice it up a little with other charecters make some up random names that have diffrent jutsu's

great job:)
 
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