Joe's Adventure on Delta Island

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Chapter 1. My Story
Hi I'm Joe. Not to long ago I started Pokemon Training. It all started with the lavitar I found, that was lavitar was so kind he handed his last berry. So I kept on walking but I noticed he was following me, and told him to go back to his family. Then I was just kicking a rock and the last time I kicked it really hard.... and hit.. a beedrill nest. Then at least 12 beedrills came to attack me as toke my last breath that lavitar had jumped in front of me and blocked the beedrills attack. Then jumped up and grabbed a beedrill and trew it right at a another beedrill. When the other beedrill saw this they ran of like if they were caterpies and knew we would be friends forever.

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Great story! Ok, so that Larvitar is attached to you now right?:D Anyway, don't put "REPLY, REPLY" at the end of each post, the more people won't reply. Not mini-modding at all, just an honest opinion.
 
Wow, that was... short. Its more like... a prolugue than a chapter. Out in more detail... not bad though. I love Larvitar... hes so cute! (Lol, I sound like a girl, don't I :F)
 
Palmer said:
Great story! Ok, so that Larvitar is attached to you now right?:D Anyway, don't put "REPLY, REPLY" at the end of each post, the more people won't reply. Not mini-modding at all, just an honest opinion.
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yes that lavitar is attached to me
Chapter 2. My Rival
As I was on my way home to tell my mother what had happend a picie of paper flew across and hit straight on my flat face. I looked at it, it said wecome all pokemon trainers this is the sign up sheet for Torrement Omega and there was only one name on it, half written. then a girl with lime green hair and cute pink glasses came running with a Cyndaquil after the paper. And when she was about to reach where I was she tripped and fell on lavitar. Lavitar of course cought her and put her on her feet. "nice catch" said the girl. "sorry 'bout that I must've tripped on my clumpsy feet" she said."did you by chance see a sign up form fly by here." "You mean this" I hanned her the paper."that sure is it. Say you should have your lavitar in this torrement.With some training he would be has strong as Machamp and hard as a Steelix." She said " That sounds awesome and what's your name." I said "My name is Marry John and soon to be winner of this torrnement. How me you have a battle right here right now." "Your on."I said " "Ready Cyndaquil" Mary said. "Cyndaquil" Mary's Cyndaquil said frimly. "Ready Lavitar" I said. "Lavitar" said my lavitar Firmly.Then are battle started. "Cyndaquil use Flame Wheel." Cyndaquil started nailing it's way towords lavitar. "Lavitar use Outrage" Lavitar went up to smash Cyndaquil but had only caught him "Lavitar use Sismic Toss" LAvitar did so and won the battle. "Your Cyndaquil is unable to battle you lose" That was a sign that we where rivals.
 
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