Writing How Dr. Doofenshmirtz Stole Christmas (A PnF Poem)

StarlightSearcher

The Blonde Brainiac
Forum Mod
Advanced Member
Member
This poem I created was just for fun. Anyway, it's a Phineas and Ferb poem about the dastardly Dr. Doofenshmirtz. Please read and rate, but please, keep all negative opinions to yourself!

Synopsis of How Dr. Doofenshmirtz Stole Christmas:

Angry and upset, Dr. Doofenshmirtz attacks Danville with rhymes.

He stole everything Christmas from every house, oh, what a crime!

He soon finds out what the true meaning of the season is,

It isn’t about presents and stockings, but about family and friends.

The story begins in the town of Danville on a cold Christmas Eve night,

Every Danvillian was asleep in their beds, nice and tight.

Everyone dreaming of Christmas morning,

Presents, stockings and garland adorning.

Their Christmas tree, adorned with lights,

Late at night, it’s quite a sight.

But, on the other side of town, in a little ol’ hut,

Lived Dr. Doofenshmirtz, the nasty ol’ rut.

He looked at the calendar and screamed,

“It’s Christmas again, what a horrible dream!”

With help from his robot, he began to hatch his evil plan,

His grand plan was to steal Christmas, what a crazy man!

With loads of bags from his ex-wife,

He ran out of his hut, what a sight.

The first house he hit, he hit with great skill,

He opened the door and let in a chill.

He snaked towards the tree and like a shot,

Took the presents and stuffed them like stuffing into a turkey, nice and hot.

Into his bags they went, cascading down,

Once he attacked the stockings, his joy met no bounds.

He exited as he entered, quietly as an unmoving wind chime,

He quietly entered the next house, angry as a kid with a dime.

He raided each house like a thief,

Ransacking the place like a rouge chief.

The last house he hit was a quaint little house.

He sneaked in the front door, as quiet as a mouse.

As he was taking the presents, he turned around.

A person was walking, coming down.

The eldest daughter, appeareantly stumbled,

Onto Dr. Doof and his great mumble.

She started at him with a cold glare,

He gulped, wondering how he would fare.

She asked, “Why are you stealing from us?”

“I can’t tell you why.” he replied, as cold as rust.

They argued back and forth over the same thing,

They were stopped when they heard a small ding.

It was the pet platypus, awoke from his slumber,

He didn’t look like he wanted to bother.

But he jumped onto the thief and in one quick motion,

Threw him out the window, making a loud commotion.

Everyone thundered down the stairs to see what went down,

They saw the living room ransacked, chairs spun around.

They asked why he did what he did,

“He replied, I did what I did, because I hated Christmas as a kid”

He wove a tale of long ago,

When he was a wee lad, young, not old.

He wanted a Druselstein Drew action figure,

But he family, dirt poor, gave him a dress, nothing bigger.

Year after year, the same verse was struck,

Finally, he had enough.

He vowed to make them pay,

He never realized what he did was okay.

The platypus got up and jumped out the window and stood up,

Dr. Doof screamed, “There’s a platypus amuck!”

Dr. Doof was chased around town,

They chased him to the Danville Gorge, threatening him to go down.

It was here where he had a change of heart.

He’d celebrate Christmas and make a big chart.

Of who was nice and who was naughty, every Danvillian said,

“Dr. Doofenshmirtz is the nicest guy who ever lived.”

That’s our story of How Dr. Doofenshmirtz Stole Christmas, the story ends here.

If you enjoyed it, tell all your friends, and spread Christmas cheer!

(FYI, please don't make fun of some of the rhymes and how the sentences were typed. It got progressively harder during the middle of the poem...)
 

Joeypals!!

Do you loooooves me? <3
Member
Nice job! I think you forgot that the Platypus (who is obviously Perry) is not active when his family- which you said was there- are in the same room as him. Just letting you know!
 

StarlightSearcher

The Blonde Brainiac
Forum Mod
Advanced Member
Member
The "platypus" IS Perry. I decided not to said Perry, because I'm thinking everyone should know who I'm talking about.

(Example: The eldest sister, is referring to Candace.)
 

Joeypals!!

Do you loooooves me? <3
Member
My bad! Usually when it says something like that, I think of Perry jumping up and putting on his hat.
 
J

Juliacoolo

Presents, stockings and garland adorning.

Their Christmas tree, adorned with lights,

It's a nice poem, but lines like the one above stop it from flowing.

9/10.
 
Top