Thank you pokefreak. I am almost done with the next chapter.
Fred's Grand Adventure
- Thread starter Fred the monkeytogepi
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Thanks, but umm...hehe... i dont know how to publish it,
Chapter4: A new beginning
As soon as Fred woke, he hurried to the lab to join Davis and the rest of the trainers.
“Hey Davis, long time no see. How have you been? “Fred asked as he approached his friend. Davis didn’t have time to answer, as Professor Mesquite was ready to begin his speech. “Another great year has passed at the Pokemon Trainer School, and this year we have a great group graduating. First up is ….Davis. Which one will you choose? Ahhh…. He chooses…..PIPLUP!” *later* “…and last but certainly not least we have Fred. It doesn’t seem like you have a choice on which Pokemon you get. Lucky, the last Pokemon is the one you wanted…..CHIMCHAR! And now, all of you have received your Pokedex and Pokemon. Go and become Pokemon Masters!” and with that all the trainers got up, sent their new Pokemon out, and began on their journeys.
As the exited the lab Fred said, “You know, Davis, we should both travel together while we are still inexperienced that way if we are attacked we can both fight back.” And so it was decided, Davis and Fred would become a battling team; but little did they know that the must important member of their team was didn’t receive a Pokemon because he was still asleep……..
Chapter4: A new beginning
As soon as Fred woke, he hurried to the lab to join Davis and the rest of the trainers.
“Hey Davis, long time no see. How have you been? “Fred asked as he approached his friend. Davis didn’t have time to answer, as Professor Mesquite was ready to begin his speech. “Another great year has passed at the Pokemon Trainer School, and this year we have a great group graduating. First up is ….Davis. Which one will you choose? Ahhh…. He chooses…..PIPLUP!” *later* “…and last but certainly not least we have Fred. It doesn’t seem like you have a choice on which Pokemon you get. Lucky, the last Pokemon is the one you wanted…..CHIMCHAR! And now, all of you have received your Pokedex and Pokemon. Go and become Pokemon Masters!” and with that all the trainers got up, sent their new Pokemon out, and began on their journeys.
As the exited the lab Fred said, “You know, Davis, we should both travel together while we are still inexperienced that way if we are attacked we can both fight back.” And so it was decided, Davis and Fred would become a battling team; but little did they know that the must important member of their team was didn’t receive a Pokemon because he was still asleep……..
I'm really liking it so far, Fred! Keep up the good work!
PLOT TWIST! <=O
Also, just a suggestion, but, could you maybe make the chapters somewhat longer? If you can, I mean. I'd like to read more of it.
PLOT TWIST! <=O
Also, just a suggestion, but, could you maybe make the chapters somewhat longer? If you can, I mean. I'd like to read more of it.
Thanks guys!
Togeshroob- Sure I can make them longer. It's just with the first few chapters it's kinda hard to since it is just right before they get their pokemon and I really haven't had that much time
Togeshroob- Sure I can make them longer. It's just with the first few chapters it's kinda hard to since it is just right before they get their pokemon and I really haven't had that much time
Sorry I haven't been on to finish the story my cell phones been stolen and i have now a pure hatred for this kid at my school named john( thats 2 out of 3 johns i know that I hate) I will finish the story once the theif has confessed or is tired of runnig from Fred and moves to Canada.
great chapter keep up the great work!
mickmon95 said:
don't worry you are still getting piplup but as for the missing member you will just have to find out
Here is the first part of the chapter. It has several parts to it .
Chapter5.1
Dear Chase,
Your presence is requested at the Dark Coliseum.
Shadow Admin.
That was what the note said. The Shadow Admin had wanted to see him. But why should he complain, he was out of the Snow Point City jail. As he walked down the hallway, he began to wonder if the Shadow Admin would give him back his Pokemon. Of course he would, he was the best Shadow Squad member. He entered the pitch-black Command Room to hear a voice emitting from nowhere. “You have failed me again, Chase! This is your final chance. DEFEND YOURSELF!” As the Shadow Admin finished the lights turned on and Chase found himself surrounded by Bezerk Troops and their Pokemon. “Go Poochyena! Use bite!” Chase said as he dodged a shadow ball that missed his head by inches. Poochyena attacked the opponents but as they were defeated more appeared. Poochyena, tired and exhausted, fainted in a few hits. “Chase you have been defeated! Your Pokemon are pathetic. Take this Pokemon,” said the Shadow Admin as a pokeball appeared in the center of the room, “it is the Pokemon nuzleaf. It has been trained for your next mission. Dr. Doomed will brief you on it. DO NOT FAIL ME AGAIN!” The door swished open to reveal a balding man with purple lab coat. “Greetings, Agent Chase. You have received your Pokemon, I see. Your mission is to infiltrate Professor Mesquite lab and steal all Pokemon. Your Nuzleaf knows false swipe, razor leaf, bullet seed, and amnesia. You will be transported to the drop off zone by Abra. Good luck, Chase.”
Chapter5.1
Dear Chase,
Your presence is requested at the Dark Coliseum.
Shadow Admin.
That was what the note said. The Shadow Admin had wanted to see him. But why should he complain, he was out of the Snow Point City jail. As he walked down the hallway, he began to wonder if the Shadow Admin would give him back his Pokemon. Of course he would, he was the best Shadow Squad member. He entered the pitch-black Command Room to hear a voice emitting from nowhere. “You have failed me again, Chase! This is your final chance. DEFEND YOURSELF!” As the Shadow Admin finished the lights turned on and Chase found himself surrounded by Bezerk Troops and their Pokemon. “Go Poochyena! Use bite!” Chase said as he dodged a shadow ball that missed his head by inches. Poochyena attacked the opponents but as they were defeated more appeared. Poochyena, tired and exhausted, fainted in a few hits. “Chase you have been defeated! Your Pokemon are pathetic. Take this Pokemon,” said the Shadow Admin as a pokeball appeared in the center of the room, “it is the Pokemon nuzleaf. It has been trained for your next mission. Dr. Doomed will brief you on it. DO NOT FAIL ME AGAIN!” The door swished open to reveal a balding man with purple lab coat. “Greetings, Agent Chase. You have received your Pokemon, I see. Your mission is to infiltrate Professor Mesquite lab and steal all Pokemon. Your Nuzleaf knows false swipe, razor leaf, bullet seed, and amnesia. You will be transported to the drop off zone by Abra. Good luck, Chase.”
great job again
(wonder when im going to be in?)
(wonder when im going to be in?)