First Scratch, please rate

abaxter94

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Well, that is my first scratch. It took about two hours. It's name is Flaron, and it was to be one of the starters in a new game I was going to make.

Anywho, comments are appreciated.
 
Not bad, however, the legs are kinda... well, where's the 4th leg? Or, does it only have 3 legs? Also, the legs don't seem to have any feet/toes. However, 9/10 considering its your first scratch! Bravo!
 
Not bad, but needs more detail in the face, legs, and fire on it's tail, IMO. But, don't take my word too highly, I'm not a spriter
 
Well, I wanted to give in "Wheel's" as legs (like a canon does) but didn't do that. There are four legs, but you just can't see the fourth.
I'll take your advice and update with a new and improved one later.
 
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