First Scratch, please rate

[abaxter94]

Well, that is my first scratch. It took about two hours. It's name is Flaron, and it was to be one of the starters in a new game I was going to make.

Anywho, comments are appreciated.

 

[Gale]

Not bad, however, the legs are kinda... well, where's the 4th leg? Or, does it only have 3 legs? Also, the legs don't seem to have any feet/toes. However, 9/10 considering its your first scratch! Bravo!

 

[Max Shade IV]

Not bad, but needs more detail in the face, legs, and fire on it's tail, IMO. But, don't take my word too highly, I'm not a spriter

 

[Light Manaphy]

Hmm... as K&M said it needs detail in the legs, the tail looks odd... BTW it will be better is you shade the outline =]

 

[abaxter94]

Well, I wanted to give in "Wheel's" as legs (like a canon does) but didn't do that. There are four legs, but you just can't see the fourth.
I'll take your advice and update with a new and improved one later.