Create-A-Card February 2014 - The Fairytale

I'm out, grats c-m
 
So did I miss the deadline or nah? I actually have my entry this time and I am pretty confident in this one.
 
That doesn't make any sense. If it's eleven I didn't miss is... right?
Whatever whether or not this is accepted here is my entry:

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You guy sare fine, however, you only have some 4 hours to get entries in, come on! Let's make this a big one!
 
And entries are closed! Results might take a while, the text section needs to be sorted out first.
 
We had to get a few things organized, but results should be up soon!
 
I will be the image based judge while Blui will do text based. I judged our two entries, and they both were excellent. I'm just waiting for Blui to judge his share so the results will be posted.
 
I'll give out the results for image because I don't think there has been any judging for text yet.


Ah…the horrible fairy type. My least favorite type. But hey, we got some creative entries at least! This round was a staredown between Momaster12 and Heavenly Spoon. Who won? Let’s find out

Heavenly Spoon: Clefairy
A very neat card. You probably could have tried something new with the moon but it is still very nice. Glad to see that you made your own art, I’m not a good computer artist so I could never do something like that. :D
Errors:
Your ability says ‘you discard pile’ instead of ‘your discard pile’’. Didn’t someone have this issue with that last round? :>
Weight and Height should be in feet and lbs
Creativity/Originality: 19/20
Wording: 13/15
Fonts and Placement: 10/10
Believability/Playability: 5/5
Score: 47/50
Momaster12: Klefki
So you chose to use the key Pokemon, Klefki? Your entry is very creative. Let’s see how you did!
Errors:
Wording for ability should be: If you do, this Pokemon is Knocked Out
Font for the weakness/resistance is bolded when it shouldn’t be. Not too big of a deal here so I won’t count it against you because I barely noticed it.
In your description you wrote ‘giv’ instead of ‘give’.
Creativity/Originality: 20/20
Wording: 13/15
Fonts and Placement: 10/10
Believability/Playability: 5/5
Score: 48/50

Congratulations to Momaster12 for winning the Image Based Round![/hr]
 
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Wait, what?! You're complaining about height and weight?! Seriously?! o_O But to be honest, that shouldn't be a problem, I have made all my cards to this day with those in Meters and Kilograms and actually had perfect score once. :p Just my opinion.
 
I feel like I got drafted into the army or something. :p
Blui hasn't responded to this, and it's been quite a while. So, I will be filling in for now.
I'm not a fan of Blui's judging sheet, so I'll be using:
Creativity: 1-10
Wording: 1-10
Balance: 1-5
Completeness: 0-1

Scorched Feathers said:
Stage 2 - Florges - HP140 - Fairy
Evolves from Floette​
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NO.671 Garden Pokémon HT: 3'07" WT: 22.0 lbs.

[Ability] Symbiosis
If this Pokémon has a Pokémon Tool attached to it, whenever another of your Pokémon Tools in play is discarded from a Pokémon (unless that Pokémon is Knocked Out), you may move the Pokémon Tool card from this Pokémon and attach it to that Pokémon.

[Y][C] Wish
Heal 50 damage from this Pokémon.

[Y][Y][C] Moonblast 100

Weakness: Metal (×2) Resistance: Dark (-20) Retreat: ★★​
In times long past, governors of castles would invite Florges to
create flower gardens to embellish the castle domains.​
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Creativity: 7/10
I can't say that I've seen anything like this before, as far as ability goes. The only one that comes close is Plasma Masquerian. But it does follow a recurring theme of a Stage 2 with a unique ability, yet mediocre attacks.
Wording: 5/10
I believe for the ability it should be:
"Whenever [or, 'Once during your turn when'] one of your Pokémon Tool cards is discarded from a Pokémon (unless that Pokémon is knocked out), you may move a Pokémon Tool card from this Pokémon and attach it to that Pokémon".
There were a couple unnecessary words in your version. :p
Balance: 3/5
About as far from OP as you can get, I'm afraid. I believe this falls under the category of being 'under-powered.'
Total: 15/21

Luispipe8 said:
Stage1//Gardevoir//HP110\\
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Evolves from Kirlia
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Dex Number: 282/Embrace Pokémon/Height: 1.58m/Weight: 48.4kg​
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Pixilate
All the attacks from your
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Pokémon now apply Weakness and Resistance as if they were
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Pokémon and do 20 more damage to your opponent's Active Pokémon (before applying Weakness and Resistance). You can't apply more than 1 Pixilate Ability at a time.

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Fairy Wind 80

During your opponent's next turn, all of your opponent's Active Pokémon attacks does 20 less damage to all of your Pokémon (after applying Weakness and Resistance).

Weakness:
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x2
Resistance:
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-20
Retreat:
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Gardevoir can sense when its Trainer is in danger, and will use its psychic power
to distort dimensions and create a small black hole to protect its Trainer. It will even give up its life to protect its Trainer.​
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Creativity: 8/10
I love the thought you put into this. I just wish Pixilate could apply to Gardevoir as well.
Wording: 4/10
Uh oh.
A stage 1 Gardevoir? o_O
On the ability:
"Whenever one of your
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Pokémon attacks, apply Weakness and Resistance as if that Pokémon was
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instead. Each of your
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Pokemon's attacks do 20 more damage to your opponent's Active Pokémon (before applying Weakness and Resistance). You can't apply more than 1 Pixilate Ability at a time."
Also, most effects like Pixilate (the additional part) would come after W/R.
On the attack:
During your opponent's next turn, the Defending Pokemon's attacks do 20 less damage to each of your Pokémon (after applying Weakness and Resistance).
Balance: 2/5
That's broken a bit, don't you agree? I mean, we're looking at any [C] pokémon hitting for weakness +40. I can just hear the cries of innocent children when this hits the table backed by Tornadus EX/Bouffalant (the former would be hitting 160 for a DCE and a Stadium, the latter would hit 160 against anything for three energy, but will OHKO any EX).
Total: 14/25

Radioactive561 said:
I present the baby puff ball debuting in it's Fairy incarnation! (Hopefully its not too overpowered :/)
Basic - Cottonee - HP40 -
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NO. 546 | Cotton Puff Pokemon | HT: 1’00” | WT: 1.3 lbs |

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Teasing Heart
If the player using Cottonee goes first, they may attack with Cottonee on their first turn.

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Mischievous Gift
Search your deck for 2
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Pokemon and show them to your opponent. Place any Basic Pokemon chosen onto your bench and any Evolution cards into your hand. Shuffle your deck afterwards.

Weakness:
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x2
Resistance:
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-20
Retreat:
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Perhaps because they feel more at ease in a group, they stick to others they find. They end up looking like a cloud.​
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Keeper of Night said:
[Y] Igglybuff 30 HP--Basic
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[Ability] Mood Maker
Once during your turn (before your attack), you may look at the top 3 cards of your deck. Attach any Energy cards you find there to your benched Pokémon in any way you like. Put the other cards back on top of your deck in any order.

__ Disarming Draw
Each player shuffles his or her hand into his or her deck and draws 4 cards.

Weakness: ___ Resistance: ___ Retreat: ___​
Its extremely flexible and elastic body makes it bounce continuously--anytime, anywhere
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GM DracLord said:
Basic - Wigglytuff EX HP170 [F]

Ability : Big Blue Eyes
Prevent all effect of attack (excluding damage) done by your opponent's Active Pokemon to each of your Pokemon that has any [Y] Energy attached to it.

[Y][C] Power Puff 20+
This attack does 20 more damage for each [Y] Energy attached to all of your Pokemon.

weakness [M] x2
resistance [D] -20
retreat [C][C]

Pokemon-EX rule
When a Pokemon-EX has been Knocked Out, your opponent takes 2 Prize cards.

Here goes nothing.
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NotSeen said:
GM DracoLord –
One detail: The type of wigglytuff EX is [F]ighting, while its attack costs fair[Y] energy?

My contest mon:
Stage 1 – Clefable – HP120 – [Y]
Evolves from Clefairy
NO. 36 Fairy Pokémon HT: 4′03″ WT: 88.2 lbs.

Ability Fairytale
Whenever your Active Pokémon remains Asleep during your turn, remove all damage counters from that Pokémon.
[Y] Lullaby
Your opponent’s Active Pokémon is now Asleep.
[Y][C][C] Meteor Mash 50+
During your next turn, this attack does 50 more damage.

Weakness: Metal (×2)
Resistance: Darkness (− 20)
Retreat Cost: 2
Rarity: Rare
Their ears are sensitive enough to hear a pin drop from over a mile away, so they’re usually found in quiet places.​

About the card:
Due to its ability, Clefable can support the defense against the crazy Hypnotoxes and other sleep-inducer mons even without Virizion EX. I personally think that this card is a bit better Meloetta (Plasma Storm) with useful Ability and maybe a bit worse first attack. It is nothing special with its attacks. Neither overpowered, nor too weak and if I remember correctly, none of the cards, which exists atm, make it broken.
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Reggie McGigas said:
Reggie is here to save the day!

[Basic] Diancie / HP 90 [Y]

[C] Leader's Guidance 10
Draw 2 Cards. If Carbink is in play, you may draw up to 5 cards.

[Y][C][C] Diamond Cutter 40+

This attack does 40 damage for each Diancie and Carbink in play.

Weakness: [W] x2
Resistance: [D] -20
Retreat: [C][C][C]
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Machamp The Champion said:
Basic \\ Dedenne \\ HP60 [Y]
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NO. 702 Antenna Pokémon HT: 0'08" WT: 4.9lbs.

[Ability] Quivering Face
If this Pokémon is your Active Pokémon and is damaged by an opponent's attack (even if this Pokémon is Knocked Out), the Attacking Pokémon can't attack during your opponent's next turn.

[Y][Y] Antenna Jolt
This attack does 20 damage to each of your opponent's Pokémon. (Don't apply Weakness and Resistance for Benched Pokémon.) This Pokémon does 10 damage to itself for each of your opponent's Pokémon.

weakness [P] X2
resistance [D] -20
retreat cost [C]

It is said that the leader of all Dedennes lives in a far-off place called Pokémon Beach. This leader loves it's people more than anything else, so much so that it only goes by the name Prince Dedenne.

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Dat Pokédex entry.
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What? Igglybuff is evolving!
[Y] Judge Jigglypuff 200 HP--Basic
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[Ability] The One And Only
Whenever you are selected to judge a CaC contest because the original judge hasn't responded in a while, you may flip a coin for each contestant in the tournament. For each heads, give a reasonable score and correct reasons. For each tails, randomly select scores and reasons out of a hat.

[Y] Haters Gonna Hate 120
If somebody complains about the score or reasons you gave them, you may choose to ignore or answer them. If you choose to ignore them, draw a prize card. If you choose to answer them, make like Astra and blame #FirstWorldProblems. Then, draw a prize card anyway.

Weakness: What Weakness?
Resistance: Everything
Retreat: Never Retreat, Only Advance In A Different Direction​
As the new judge of this competition, you've already won! Good luck judging the other contestants!
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:p I'll be working on this over the weekend. Expect them by Monday at the latest (unless Blui shows up, then he'll probs take over again... idk).
 
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