Chapter one:The orphan named Aqua

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It starts with a Piplup named Aqua. He lives in the Moist Forest when he was in an egg it fell into the river so he is an orphan trying to find his parents alone in the world.
"Why was I born if I don't have a family" said Aqua. "I have no friends I'm alone in the world" said Aqua. "Well at least I can do whatever I want" said Aqua. "Look a Town maybe my parents are there" said Aqua. Aqua ran to the town and saw many pokemon but no Empoleons. "Maybe I can find a home" said Aqua. "Did you say find a home" said Arcanine. "I'm the mayor of this town"said Arcanine "There is an old pokemon rescue team base that has been abondened for yers we have fixed it a bit so it'll look good you can live there" said Arcanine. "Thanks" said Aqua. Arcanine walked him to his house and Arcanine left to his house. "So this is my house" said Aqua. "Well it's better than nothing" said Aqua. "I could try to make some friends" said Aqua "I wonder what a pokemon rescue team is, I guess I'll ask around tomorrow" said Aqua. "Look this place has a little pool" said Aqua "I could learn to like it here" said Aqua as he drifted to sleep.
Next is Chapter is Rescue Team Today.
 
Chapter 2: Rescue Team Today
Aqua is in town right now asking about what a rescue team is so far has not found an answer for his question.
"I've asked everybody what a rescue team is but not one rescue team lives here so they don't know it either" said Aqua. "I'll go to the mayor he has to know" said Aqua. "A rescue team saves pokemon from danger but you have to be fearless" said Arcanine. "I want to start a rescue team because I have no purpose and if I die it won't matter" said Aqua. "Fine but before you start your rescues you have to find another team member" said Arcanine. "I'll try" said Aqua.

Next chapter is Member Mania

It'll be tomorrow or today.
 
said aqua,said aqua,said aqua... aaahhhh! Organization and different words are KEY.

"blah,blah,blah" said aqua
"blah,blah,blah!" replied arcanine
Instead of saying SAID, replied is a synonym. Sorry, but I just like organized stories. :D They're easier to read.
 
Ok, Shard will show you. Hes pretty good at grammer. Also, nice story! MD fanfics ae becomming scarce, so its nice to see another one!
 
Aqua woke with a start, and stretched his arms as he let out a long yawn. He had dreams about Rescue teams were like, and so he wanted to clarify what they were with the mayor. He glanced around and admired his new home. "I can't belive its mine!" He muttered to himself. Aqua climbed out of bed, rubbing his eyes. He grabbed some breakfast and hurridly ate it. He tossed the bowl into the sink to be washed their, then strode out the door. Where would the mayor live? he thought to himself. He casualy walked around the nice town, gazing up at all the houses and shops. After a few blocks, he came to a large Mansion. He noticed a sign that said "Mayor Arcanine", and so he opened up the iron gate and walked through the beautiful garden to the large, solid wood double doors. He rung the doorbell. Their was a faint patter of footsteps, and the familiar face of Arcanine opened the door. "Why, hello, Aqua, what brings you here?" he asked in a light tone. "Hello, Mr. Mayor, Well, the other day, you said something about this town being an old rescue team base," The Mayor was nodding while he was speaking, "and i didn't really understand what the was. Would you mind explaining?" Aqua questioned with a helpless face. "Sure," said the Mayor, "Come on in." And so, Aqua and the Mayor sat down in the wonderful leaving room as The Mayor explained what a rescue team truely was.

Etc., etc. Please continue the story, it has good potential, just use a lot of synonems like i did and you'll make a great writer :F
 
Excatly. (MY idea, btw :p) and try to press "enter" when another person is talking!
 
Im use to typing proffesional like stories on Word and such, so I dont normally use the enter thing. I guess i should get used to it :F
 
Thanks Shard! You didn't say he needed to find another friend to start! Can anyone give me a second character and third charcter? They have to be brothers not evolved once.
 
Bah, why not.

NAME: Rye
SPECIES: Riolu
LOOK: a Regular Riolu, except when he becomes a rescue team member, he gets a gray hankerchief with black spots around his neck
 
Chapter 3
As Aqua left the mayor's house he saw a Riolu in front of him. "Hello I'm Rye and I overheard you want to form a rescue team so you need a memeber can I be on your rescue team?" asked Riolu nervously. "Sure and by the way I'm Aqua go to the abonded rescue base I'll tell the mayor" said Aqua cheerfuly. "Mayor Arcanine I found a team mate" yelled Aqua. "Okay who is it?" asked Mayor Arcanine. "It's Rye a Riolu!" exclaimed Aqua. "Are you serious he is a strange but okay" said Arcanine. "You are now an official rescue team what is your team name?" asked Arcanine.
"Team Alpha" said Aqua proudly. "Okay it's done" said Arcanine. "Bye" yelled Aqua as he ran out the door. Aqua arrived at the base to find that Riolu decorated his room. "Hey so you want that room?" asked Aqua. "Yeah!" exclaimed Rye. "Hey did you buy that gray hankerchief with black spots?" asked Aqua. "I bought this one with white and with blue spots for you also!" exclaimed Rye. "Thanks tomorrow we start our rescue team officially" exclaimed Aqua.

Next is Chapter 4 Cleffa Catastrophe
 
Awsome! :D this is a cool story, could i write 1 chapter? It wont follow the storyline, it will just be a miscelanious adventure. OK?
 
Sure and tell me when its done! Tell people we need more charcters.

Name:
Species of Pokemon:
Personality:
Chapter 4 Cleffa Catostrophe
Today our heroes woke up early wearing their colored hankerchiefs to check the mail for any rescue letters.
"So are there any letters?" asked Rye nervously. "Only one" replied Aqua with a sad face. The letter read "Dear Team Alpha, I need your help my little sister Cleffa fell down in an old mining shaft and she can't get out meet us at Mt. Scarlete" wrote Clefairy. "Let's get going!" exclaimed Rye. They arrived to see Clefairy and Clefable her mom. "We're here!" exclaimed Aqua. "The mining shaft is down there its like a maze so be careful" said Clefable sadly. "We're on it" said Rye. The duo climbed down to the floor of the mining shaft and went through a lot of rooms. 6 hours later they found the room Cleffa was in. "Wahhh!" Cleffa cried. "Cleffa we are here to rescue you" said Rye in a heroic voice. "Let's go!" exclaimed Aqua. 6 more hours later Aqua carried Cleffa cause she fell asleep. They found the exit and returned Cleffa to her mother Cleffable and her sister Clefairy. "Thanks!" exclaimed Cleffable. "Bye" said Aqua. They left to the base and went straight to bed after their first mission of success.

Next chapter is Team Bullieis.
Chapter 5 Team Bullies
Today our heroes got a letter in the mail inviting Team Alpha to the Team Tournament where rescue teams battle to see who is the best.
"So do you want to enter?" asked Aqua. "Sure" replied Rye. The duo signed up for it and got a good night sleep for tomorrows battle.
"We are about to begin!" exclaimed Arcanine. The first round is between team Alpha and team Beta" exclaimed Arcanine. Team Beta is Ivysaur and Bidoof. "First round is Rye vs. Bidoof!" exclaimed Arcanine. Rye used an aura spher that made a direct hit. Bidoof was looking tired after a super effective so he tagged Ivysaur in and he used vine whip to hit Rye and it did send him flying. Rye tagged Aqua in and he used peck and he actually knocked him out. Aqua tagged Rye and Bidoof and Rye knocked him out with a mega punch. "The winners are team Alpha!" exclaimed Arcanine. "You, Team Alpha have made it to the semifinals see you all tomorrow!" exclaimed Arcanine. Next chapter is Fury Fighting.
 
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