A Little something to get you in the christmas mood.

Lou Cypher

The melody of your defeat
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Since there isn't really an area here for written personal works, I thought I'd churn this one out here. Do tell me what you think of it.

Also, do not mind the grammar errors too much. English is not my native language, so all I can do is my best in order to make it read as good as possible.


Do be warned, the ending is not for the faint of heart.



I don't want a lot for Christmas
There is just one thing I need
I don't care about the presents
Underneath the Christmas tree


Christmas time. Snow was slowly covering the city. Decorative lights were shining everywhere. Ah, I loved it. Everybody was so warm to each other. Friendly smiles abound. The Christmas trees all around the city. I loved it. Darkness setting in early, seemed to make the lights shine even brighter. Ah, Christmas, my holiday indeed.

I just want you for my own
More than you could ever know
Make my wish come true
All I want for Christmas is you


To me, Christmas was also about that "special someone". And I saw a special someone the day before. She looked so pretty...she was relatively short, I'd guess not much over 5 feet 3, but she had long, near-shining lightbrown hair, her skin seemed so extremely smooth, and her face was truly lovely. Oh, how I wanted her for Christmas.

I don't want a lot for Christmas
There is just one thing I need
And I don't care about the presents
Underneath the Christmas tree


We passed each other, she didn't seem to notice me. Couldn't blame her, I didnt really stand out, wearing a long green jacket, a scarf that covered half my face, and my hair hidden under my cap. But I did manage to slip in a card in her pocket with finger-fast movement. A Christmas card ofcourse, what else would you expect?

I don't need to hang my stocking
There upon the fireplace
Santa Claus won't make me happy
With a toy on Christmas day


It was an invitation, to meet me at 6 PM, under the city's biggest Christmas tree, for a romantic blind Christmas date. I just hoped she would accept. She really did seem the type to enjoy the classical romantic dates, but would she dare to go on a blind date with somebody she had never seen before? I kinda doubted it, but of course, I could not be sure.

I just want you for my own
More than you could ever know
Make my wish come true
All I want for Christmas is you


How appropriate that the song the warehouse near was playing was Mariah Carey's All I want for Christmas. I used to hate that song, but now, I couldn't help thinking how appropriate it was. Indeed, I didn't care about presents, but all I cared about, was her.

I won't ask for much this Christmas
I won't even wish for snow
And I, I just wanna keep on waiting
Underneath the mistletoe


No mistletoe though, I said to myself, slightly laughing. But I got worried. It was already 6 PM, and still no sign of her. I just hoped she would turn up, else all my anticipation for her would be for nothing. I couldn't stand the tought, yet I remained calm. Women and coming late weren't something unusual to me.

I won't make a list and send it
To the North Pole for St. Nick
I won't even stay awake
To hear those magic reindeer click


The song started to annoy me. Still no sign of her. What if she never reached in her pocket? Then she'd never read the card. Maybe she couldn't find me - after all, like I mentionned, I didn't really stand out in the crowd. I knew I should've included a little picture or something like that.

Cause I just want you here tonight
Holding onto me so tight
What more can I do
Oh baby, all I want for Christmas is you


But then, I noticed a tap on my shoulder. I turned around, and there she was. She was even more lovely as yesterday. Little make-up was used, which made her look perfect. She did seem nervous, until I said: "How about we go to a lovely little place, where we could take all time of the world to get to know each other?" She nodded, and started to walk next to me. She felt comfortable. That made me feel warm.

All the lights are shining
So brightly everywhere
And the sound of childrens'
Laughter fills the air


We walked through the city, past several restaurants. I increased my speed more and more, until she said that I was going too fast. I didnt even notice, I apologized. She smiled, and said it was OK. She must've thought I was nervous too. Who wouldnt be nervous when walking next to such a delicious-looking sweetheart?

And everyone is singing
I hear those sleigh bells ringing
Santa won't you bring me
The one I really need
Won't you please bring my baby to me, quickly


Together, we reached one of the darker parts of town. Christmas decorations were scarce here, and she got a bit nervous by that fact. I told her to close her eyes, and I would lead her to the most romantic place she ever been. We walked for about two minutes, she with her eyes closed. When I told her to open her eyes, she yelled.

I don't want a lot for Christmas
This is all I'm asking for
I just wanna see my baby
Standing right outside my door


I dropped my scarf, and placed my fangs in her deliciously smooth neck. The reason why she yelled was the pile of bones of the other girls I wanted. She would be added to the collection. After sucking up all blood, I dropped her body and ripped her meat of her bones, and started to eat it. I was right indeed, she was delicious.

I just want you for my own
More than you could ever know
Make my wish come true
Baby, all I want for Christmas is you


I loved Christmas. Everyone was so naïve, they'd fall for such a semi-romantic trick...and then, I spotted the next one I wanted for christmas. It was a good thing I had a supply of cards ready...

All I want for Christmas is you, baby
 
*applaudes* Scares some people half to death if it was a movie. I feel like eating some neck now. Or maybe joining with Dean and Sam and kill you off with crossbows. Fun.
 
...that was strange...but actually pretty decent. At least the song part that is. Nice Scipio, weird and kinda creepy, but nice.

Arcanine out.
 
Christmas isn't really THAT big of a thing here in Malaysia. However, I like it a lot. Good Job!
 
WHAT THE F***!!! YOU, SIR, ARE A DAMNED PSYCHOTIC FREAK! THAT IS THE MOST CREEPY THING I HAVE EVER HEARD!!!! YOU ARE THE, SICKEST, CRAZIEST, MOST MIND-BENT FREAKAZOID IN THE WORLD!!!!!! YOU ARE A SICK, TWISTED, EVIL, SCURGE OF OUR VERY EXISTANCE!!!!!!! Nice job. Liked the song, it was catchy.
 
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