A fake Pokemon, and my first decent custom sprite. Enter Scorpeon!

[Crazy Weavile]

Name: Scorpeon
Species: Plated Scorpion
Type: Metal/Poison
Dex: SCORPEON was once hunted for the first layer of gold plate, making it near extinct. In recent times, it has come to light that SCORPEON has a soft body under the solid gold plating, rather than a shell. This was unknown because the layer under is completely integrated into SCORPEON's unbreakable shell.
(removed) Dex #: 41

Note: Scorpeon is my first completly custom sprite.

 

[Tobi_Akatsuki's_Idiot]

r u sure that's a sprite,looks to me like a very poorly drawn earwig...:}

No offense...<_<

 

[Crazy Weavile]

It's a golden scorpion, not an earwig. I've remade it:

It's shinier.

 

[Andyman]

The thing that sets it of is the tail thing. I mean like what is it a tail, legs, random thing sprouting out of it.

 

[darkrayquaza]

my rating on looks is -10/10

 

[Crazy Weavile]

Two tails used to whip them into submission. Did I mention that both have stingers?

 

[Lord9511]

4/10.

 

[Tobi_Akatsuki's_Idiot]

3.5/10

 

[bass_forte]

The shading's good, but the shape of the body is a bit weird. If you want an authentic-looking sprite, border shading would be good too.

 

[nigafiga]

It looks like Dunsprace for me...

 

[Arcanine 274]

a dead dunsparce. no offense it just ain't that great. i'd try to border it, change the head the body and the tail, and that's it . 4.5/10

Arcanine out.

 

[don()shinobi]

This is excellent for a first try. It's much better than my first sprite of Wamole. (PM me if you want to see the crappyness of my first scratch, Wamole) I rate mine 0/10, but yours is 4/10. Keep up the good work!

 

[Heavenly Spoon]

1.9/10
yeah, I know, it's hard to make a sprite, but if you would look at a sprite, you'd see what you did wrong
no border shadings
it's hard to see what it is
ugly
and too small

 

[Lord9511]

Just try to make it look 3D!!

 

[twitch_77]

This is excellent for a first try. Keep up the good work!

completely agreed!
it's great for your fist try. . .and from now on i'm sure you'll get better at the sprite making.
congrats.
thnx.