Writing Pokemon Libet Region

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Here's the next chapter. Like I said, it is now only a two vs. two battle

Chapter 12: The Flame Badge: Once again
“Go Torkoal.” “Go Ponyta.”
“Go Drifloon.” “Go… Bagon.”
“Let the battle begin.”
“Drifloon, use Shadow Ball.” “Bagon, use Headbutt.”
“Torkoal, use iron defense!”
“Ponyta dodge shadow ball.” Bagon ran into Torkoal and was bounced into the path of shadow ball.
“Way to go Luke.” “Well, if you didn’t use shadow ball, Bagon would be fine.”
“Ponyta, use Flamethrower.”
“Torkoal, use Flamethrower.”
“Drifloon, counter it with gust.” “Bagon, use Headbutt again.”
Gust threw Bagon off balance and straight into Flamethrower, while Drifloon was blasted back with a Flamethrower.
“C’mon Luke, if we’re going to win this, then we need to work as a team.”
“You’re right. Bagon use Headbutt on Ponyta.”
“Torkoal get in front of it.”
“Drifloon use Gust to keep Torkoal away.”
Bam! Ponyta was hit dead on.
“Now turn around and use water gun on Torkoal.” Another direct hit.
“Ponyta use Take down.”
“Bagon!!!” it cried with pain.
“Drifloon, use Shadow ball.”
“Ponyta, use Flamethrower.”
“Help it out Bagon, use Water gun.”
“Tackle it Torkoal.” Both Ponyta and Bagon were hit.
“Ponyta, use stomp on Bagon.”
“Bagon, use Headbutt up at Ponyta.” Bam. Ponyta fell on its back unable to turn around.
“Torkoal, push Ponyta up.”
“Get them both with Water Gun.” Both of them were attacked with Water Gun.
“Now Drifloon! Use Payback.”
“Ponyta, push Torkoal into the air.” Torkoal was pushed into the air.
“Now get into your shell and hit Drifloon.”
“Floon!” “Bagon, Headbutt on Ponyta.” Ponyta was rammed into the ground.
“Ponyta, overheat!” Ponyta hit Bagon and it was sent flying.
“Bagon Counter back with Headbutt.”
“Dodge it. Now use Stomp.”
“Gon!” it yelled
“Drifloon, help out Bagon, use Gust.”
“Ponyta and Torkoal were hit back.”
“Luke you have to trust me on this one. Drifloon swallow Bagon.”
“What!?” 0_o
“Just trust me.” Drifloon swallowed Bagon as ordered.
“Now spit it out at them.”
“Bagon was upchucked straight at Ponyta and Torkoal.”
“Bagon use a spiraling dragonbreathe.” Bagon began to Spiral in the air and released a dragonbreathe. Bagon ran straight into Ponyta and Torkoal.
Boom! There was an enormous explosion that filled the entire with smoke.
No one moved until the smoke was cleared.
“Bagon, Torkoal, and Ponyta are all unable to battle. As Charrlie and Firrey have no pokemon left, Luke and April are the winners.”
“Yes! We won!” “Awesome.”
The two gym leaders walked up to them, and smiled.
“That was a nerve wrecking. But you two came on top. Congratulations. Here are your Flame Badges.” They each received the two badges.
“Alright my second badge!”
*** At the pokemon center***
“Your pokemon are fully healed. It’s getting late, would you like a room.”
“No thanks,” said everyone. They had spent way to much time in Flaref Town. After eating a quick lunch and storing up on pokeballs they were off to the mountainy Route 236.

Next Chapter: Quilava: Flames of disobedience
 
Ok. Sorry I haven't posted for a while, but here's the next chapter. I won't be posting as often as I have, Anyways, here's the next chapter:

Chapter 13: Quilava: Flames of Disobiedience
"Bring it on. It'll be a one on one battle." Two minutes on the route and Luke had already gotten himself into a battle.
"Suit yourself. Go Combusken." "Go. Cyndaquil."
"Ha! This'll be easy. Use Double Kick." Bam! Bam! Both attacks hit.
"Shake it off and use Flame Whell." Bam!
"Now use Smoke Screen." The battlefield was engulfed by smoke.
"Combusken use Aeriel Ace." Cyndaquil was smashed into the wall. "Cyndaquil, use Flame Wheel." Cyndaquil began it's back and began to glow.
"What's happening?" "It's evolving!" yelled Luke. Luke was right. Cyndaquil was evolving into Quilava. Right when it was finished evolving, it ran straight into Combusken. Combusken was unable to battle.
"Yes! I win! Good job Quilava. Return."
"Quil!" it said stubbornly.
***a couple minutes later***
"You're on. Go Quilava."
"Go Tangala!"
"Quilava, use Flame Wheel." Quilava disobeyed Luke and attacked with a Quick Atttack."
"Why did you do that? I said Flame Wheel!"
It turned it's head totally ignoring Luke. It then fell asleep.
"What's your Quilava doing! I came for a battle. Tangala, use Wrap." Tangala hit Quilava into the ground with a wrap.
"Now throw it," the trainer said annoyed at Quilava's ignorance.
Tangala threw Quilava into a near by tree trunk and knocked it out.
"That was a totally lame battle. Thanks for the nothing." The trainer walked off pissed. The entire time, Luke sat there with his mouth open. After about ten minutes he returned the sleeping Quilava into its pokeball.
"Why didn't it listen to me?"
"I don't know. Maybe it doesn't like you," answered April flatly.
"What!!! Cyndaquil liked me plenty before it evolved."
"I've seen this happen before," answered Watery."It was against a Charmeleon."
"What happened to your battle?"
"I forfeitted. I asked the trainer after our battle about it. He said it just evolved it a day ago. He said he tried talking with it, but it doesn't listen to him. I think it's because Quilava is stubborn. It won't listen to you, and doesn't trust your judgement."
"How do I get to trust me?"
"How the heck am I suppose to know? We should probably ask Nurse Joy in the next town."
"Well then let's go."
"What ever." Everyone headed down the route to the the small town that laid ahead.

Next Chapter: Watery's Rival?

Please, I don't need anymore travelers, but if you would like to make up trainers for someone to fight, or make up gym leaders, just post. Thanks! :)
 
I don't know. I got kinda bored typing chapters. I guess it is dead. I took up to much of my time.
 
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