Haha thanks! Im glad you like them!! I need to add a new poem... Hold on! ;D

Alright, its about time I added a poem.


"Life's Tempest"

I feel lost wihtout reason,
Like following an endless trail;
I don't know how I got here,
And I feel like such a fail.

The signs don't mean anything,
My prayers feel in vain;
I try hard to leave this maze,
But my efforts leave me insane.

I look around,
Yet it's cold and dark;
Evil lurks all around,
And I can't follow life's mark.

But deep inside,
A light grows bright;
Allowing me, eventually,
To see God's clear light.

And with that light,
My life becomes clear,
I realize now,
The end is quite near.

I can't thank Him more,
For His everlasting Grace,
It saved my life,
Bringing life to my face.

Now I have a new goal,
My goal is to be a light,
I want to show the world,
He will save you from eternal fright.

Need to hear some feedback! Also, I want requests for poems!

Ah indeed! Your feedback is much appreciated! I glad that my poems are reaching out! As for your request.... CHALLANGE ACCEPTED!

Ok, this is a poem that a friend wrote for me. It is the first poem that a "significant other" has ever written for me. I really like it, and asked her to post it up her, and she agreed. This is her poem:

"The Fine Print"

Love, it's a complicated subject.
Although some people try to make it simple.
It's meaning is a warm personal attachment.
They forget to tell you, there's only real love in fairy tales.

Love is synonymous with one word.
Anguish. That's love.
Love is lying, cheating, crying;
Love is stealing, breaking, dying.

Love is a fine print.
They say, "Love is patient. Love is never ending. Love is kind"
Except it's not.
They say love has no exceptions, but they lie.

Love is infatuational crap.
Love is not joy, it is not good times, it is not merciful.
Love is not permanent.
The fine print for love goes on and on.

"Offer only valid if your a fictional character in a fictional story."
"Offer only valid if you have a perfect life."
I could shorten the fine print.
"Offer only valid if you're imaginary."

Love shows weakness.
Love is accepting weakness.
I am weak.
So now I confess:

Love is admiring that one person,
even if they're not a pretty princess with lots of money.
Love is telling your significant other,
when they have make-up smears.

Love is wanting that person,
who can belch A-Z in one belch.
Love is admiring them for being so imperfect,
that it's perfect.

Love IS patient.
Love IS kind.
It isn't angry.
It doesn't boast.

Love is you,
Love is in you.
Love is in all of us.
Love is something you do.

Love is help,
Love is here.
Love is my friend.
Love is real.






Oh, and yes... I can belch A-Z in one go ( Please do not worry, I have not ever done it for someone outside my family! ) I liked it, and want to hear feedback on it. This came from a 15 year old amazing girl, as her first poem.

Thats true. Im think she was trying to convey how we mis-interpret love, to be something its not. How the world views it, and how it is viewed by her. Choppy, but hey. Better than nothing, I hope. xD I think it does point our conflicts in-between both parties of "lovey-dovey" and "Heartbreak"... And so... Yeah. xD

Now guys, let's not get too heated here! Apollo was just making a comment on what he thought about my poem. I'm glad he did so. No need to point fingers here. No worries!

Thank you sir! She will appreciate the nice feedback. It's not your poem, yours is coming up shortly!